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Neko Queen of Fluff
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 1217 Location: The computer
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 8:43 pm Post subject: Expectations: PG: R ShadexBurner for Planty |
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Burnerman curled into a tight ball under the digital covers of his bed. After suffering yet another crushing defeat against Rockman and his operator it was all he could do to even get into the bed. After lying there for several moments he heard a faint humming that announced his lover’s entrance into the room. Instead of jumping out like he normally did upon Shademan’s entrance he merely tried to lie very still and pretend nothing else was going on.
“You were defeated,” Shademan said in his cool voice.
Burnerman’s silence screamed its wrath in the room.
“Are you injured?” Shademan asked.
Burnerman made a soft hissing sound. Only a fool would go near him when he was that upset. “You are injured,” Shademan concurred.
“So?” Burnerman asked.
“You need to heal your wounds or it’ll degrade more,” Shademan said with a touch of concern in his voice.
“I don’t care,” Burnerman snapped.
“So you’re going to sit here and sulk like a baby then?” Shademan asked in a dangerous tone.
Shademan could feel the temperature of the room rise several degrees as Burnerman seethed under his flame retardant blankets. “Why can’t we win?” he hissed.
Shademan crossed the room and pulled the blanket off his lover. He held back a hiss as he surveyed Burnerman’s wounds. “What happened?” he asked.
“The brat used a water based soul unison,” Burnerman said bleakly.
Shademan prodded Burnerman into a sitting position as he began to heal him. “I think we can’t win because we’re not strong enough. We must get stronger,” he said.
Burnerman turned around to gaze at him with hard blue eyes, “How?” he asked.
“That is up to you,” Shademan told his boyfriend.
“I want to be stronger,” Burnerman said.
Shademan cupped Burnerman’s face in his hand, “I know,” he said. “And you have the ability to get stronger,” he said.
Burnerman leaned in closer, “I know,” he said.
Shademan grinned, “Good,” he replied.
Burnerman leaned in and planted a firm kiss on Burnerman’s lips. When he broke contact and leaned back Shademan was smiling. “What?” he asked.
“You’re back to normal,” Shademan replied.
Burnerman grinned and turned around, “Finish healing me,” he replied.
“Oh?” Shademan raised an eyebrow.
“I have a score to settle,” Burnerman said with a wicked grin.
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Planty, I know you day has sucked, but I hope this makes you feel better :D _________________ Roses are #FF0000, violets are #0000FF. All my base are belong to you.
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Flame Buster FLAMBE
Joined: 05 Jun 2005 Posts: 843 Location: hard to tell, I keep moving
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 9:52 pm Post subject: |
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Didn't Aqua soul happen after Shademan was turned into a statue?
Other then that, I liked it. _________________
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Plantman It's only Forever... Not long at all!
Age: 44 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1819 Location: Mexico
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you Neko, that was really adorable. _________________ Hecha en MÉXICO - Avatar by Me.
"Logic is the Ultimate Weapon." |
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Fan
Joined: 17 Aug 2005 Posts: 35 Location: S'pore
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 10:40 am Post subject: |
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BurnerMan planted a Kiss On BurnerMan's lips?
The hell? Don't you mean ShadeMan? _________________ If you're reading this, it's obvious you have nothing much to do. |
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Midnight This is a Hilbert Space
Age: 37 Joined: 18 Mar 2005 Posts: 3089 Location: The AfterMath. Otherwise, New York City.
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 12:25 pm Post subject: |
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That could be...but other than that this was really sweet. I still don't see this pairing as something as being feasible, but then again, it's not for me, so who am I to complain?
Anyway...I enjoyed this one. Although it was rather short and uneventful, it still managed to express what it wanted to do very effectively. Great job. _________________ Today, these three players are after Big Bucks! But they'll have to avoid the Whammy, as they play the most exciting game of their lives! From Television City in Hollywood! It's time to 'Press Your Luck!'--Rod Roddy
The Kingdom of Loathing: An Adventurer is You! // I ♣ Seals
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Wackoman.EXE HOHOHOHO
Age: 32 Joined: 05 Apr 2005 Posts: 1372 Location: SUPER SPIRAL GALAXY
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 2:57 pm Post subject: |
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As I've said before Burnerman and Shademan is making more sense to me. It was sweet and makes the reader feel all warm and fuzzes, then again all of your fics do that Neko. _________________
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Kitty-Chan Net Police
Joined: 08 Jul 2005 Posts: 438 Location: Massillon, Ohio, USA
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject: |
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This is sweet; you're really good at writing any couple. ^_^ That's why I like your writings so much. _________________ Need more Zero/X, Netto/Rock, Rock/Netto, Forte/Netto, & Blues/Netto. PLEASE!
Ano sa...could someone please make me a Zero/X, Blues/Netto, or Forte/Netto avatar/banner? I would greatly appreciate it...
Thanks for the avatar, Mandi!
People! We need more Blues/Netto & Forte/Netto on the net. Come on; help me out here! *gives everyone her Super-Adorable Irrisistable Sad Kitty Eyes(TM)* |
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