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Woot for the chapter! Omg lol, couldn't keep one of the main charas dead could ya? XD Heh, good job in setting up for the hopefully hugemungo battle that's comin up...can't wait till the next chapter's up! _________________ =] |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Well, here's a few of the battles:
Chapter 30:2 of 4 Saint Beasts
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"What's the matter? You guys seem surprised." Starman said, smiling. Slur was the first one to react.
"STARMAN!!!" She shouted, and rushed to him. He caught her in his arms.
"You idiot! Dying, then reappearing just for the sake of a plot twist..." Slur said.
Starman replied "Easy...I'm back. I'm sorry I had to leave you for that long."
"Well, this is all very touching, but don't we have a virus to stop?" Katya said.
Starman let go of Slur.
"Yeah, you're absolutely right." Starman said.
"Hey Starman? You did promise you'd come back, and I see you fufilled that promise, but mind telling me how you're alive?" Rockman said.
Starman looked down to the floor.
"I'm sure Fate told you about how Zeta can use anyone's body and soul, living or dead, to use as a host. He brought back me and Fuyuki, trying to fuse both of us into one host body. Fuyuki told me to run. I wanted to stay and help, but Fuyuki wouldn't let me stay. I don't know what happened after I fled...I'm sorry..." He said.
Rockman put his hand on Starman's shoulder.
"It's okay. You did the right thing. The important thing now is to see if Fuyuki is okay, and to stop Zeta." The blue navi said.
Starman nodded. Fate stepped up to give orders.
"All right. Netto, Rockman, wait out here. Katya, you and Lavis will take the left door. Lauren, you and I will take the middle door. Starman and Slur, take the right door. Once we clear it, the door you guys must enter will light up, so once that door lights up, run like...ah, what's that Earthling saying again...ah yes, run like a bat out of hell." Fate said. All teams entered their respective doors.
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Starman and Slur entered what appeared to be a gigantic field of rocks and mountains.
"This place...it feels creepy." Slur said.
"If you need, you can hold onto me if it makes you feel better." Starman said.
Slur chuckled.
"You always know just what to say." She said.
The region rumbled, and the ground cracked open. A giant beast rose out of the ground. It's entire body was made out molten hot volcanic rocks, and it had three large scything toes on each foot. His tail was scorpion-like, with a gigantic blood red blade on the end. His face was human, but it was red. also, he was bald, except for some hair hanging lazily off the sides of his head. His teeth were cracked. His height was that out Duo and Nebula Grey stacked on top of eachother.
"What's this? Two meals in one week?!?" The large, grotesque navi said.
"Eew...what is that thing?" Slur asked.
"It's definently not gonna be easy." Starman said.
"I am Genbu, the rockbeast of Zeta." It said.
He raised a claw, and brought it down.
"Slur!!!" Starman shouted.
He pushed his grilfriend out of the way and was smacked onto the ground by the monstrous claw.
''STARMAN!!!" Slur shouted, and dashed to her boyfriend.
Genbu laughed.
"Foolish girl!" He shouted, and spat out a giant flaming rock at her.
It smashed her, and she landed right next to Genbu's paw. He lifted it off of a bruised Starman. He limped up.
"Foolish little navi! Why do you resist! Please keel over so I may feast upon your soon to be lifeless flesh!" Genbu said.
Starman limped over to Slur. He picked her up with his hands.
"Slur...are you...alright?" He gasped.
Slur's eyes fluttered open.
"Starman...heh, looks like this guy may be a little more powerful than we imagined." She said.
Starman smiled weakly.
"Yeah...I know...however, if we do get deleted, it'll be where we both know we want it to be: besides eachother." Starman said.
Slur nodded.
Both of them started to shine. They both shone brightly.
"Hahaha! What idiots! Allow Genbu to end your miserable existence." Genbu said, and rasied another claw.
He brought it down upon the bright light. However, his claw merely flung off, as though the light were a shield.
"What?" Genbu asked.
When the light vanished, what looked like a fusion of both Slur and Starman appeared.
"What is this?" Genbu asked, amused.
"I am Slur Cross Starman, or SCS. But to you, I am one thing: death." The new being said, his voice a mixture of Slur and Starman.
Genbu laughed.
"A few flashy lights and you two fuse together? That's all? Ha! I'll devour you even with your new power!" He said.
"And just for laughing like that, I'll make sure your death is as painful as possible." SCS said.
Genbu laughed again. He spat out 5 flaming rocks at SCS. The new navi punched one rock, shattering it. The other he destroyed with a kick. The 3rd was destroyed with a headbutt, and SCS caught the other two.
"It's amazing the things you can do with simple flaming rock loogeys." SCS said, and absorbed the rocks into himself.
He flung a giant wave of flames at Genbu, damaging the rock navi. Genbu shrieked and tried to smash SCS with his claw. SCS blocked it with a finger, using so much force it shattered Genbu's right arm. Genbu gasped.
"Asteroid Arrow!" SCS shouted, and his arm morphed into a bow.
He launched a Star Arrow brimming with Asteroid Energy at Genbu, shattering his tail. Genbu shrieked.
"You...you're not just any old navi!" Genbu shouted.
He launched three red spikes at him. They all hit SCS, but they merely shattered upon impact. Genbu was shocked, and SCS leapt at him.
"KIRA KIRA ASTEROID!!!" SCS shouted, and a huger, more powerful version of Kira Kira Meteor smashed into Genbu, shattering his left leg.
Genbu grunted and bashed his skull into the ground, sending a hail of red energy bursts up from the ground at SCS. The navi merely deflected them back at Genbu, doing considerable damage to the rock navi. Genbu leapt up and smashed into the ground, creating a shockwave. However, the shockwave missed SCS. Genbu tried one last attack: Launching a flaming dragon from his mouth at SCS.
The new navi merely held out his hand, destroying the dragon upon contact.
"Time to end this little game." He said, and dashed at Genbu.
"Holy Dragon Lash!" He shouted, and bashed headfirst into Genbu while white hot flames surrounded him.
This completely shattered the rock navi. SCS landed, and split back into Starman and Slur. Both of them stood there, panting.
"Whew...that was awesome..." Starman said.
"Yeah...we really...showed him..." Slur said.
Both of them collapsed to the ground from exhaustion. This was the only room where viruses didn't appear after battle.
***
Katya and Lavis were on a pedestal. Several other pedestals jutted up from the floor, which was a sea of lava.
"Wow...you get knocked down and you're done for.'' Lavis said.
"Yeah...looks like we'll have to make sure we don't get smacked around too much." Katya replied.
"Visitors...in my domain...how unexpected..." A voice that sounded low and deep, almost like a rabid animal(Think Beastman's dub voice -CFS) said.
A huge wave of lava rose up and smacked into a platform. The wave of lava vanished and revealed a navi who was standing on the platform.
He was wearing black spandex-like armor, with bright blue armor covering his upper torso. His helmet, busters, and boots were also the same bright blue.
"I've been waiting years to destroy someone...shame it's only two humans..." The navi said.
He licked his lips.
"Hold still so I may destroy you." He said.
"Who do you think you are, ordering us around?" Lavis asked.
"I am Byakko, the hunter of Zeta." Byakko replied.
"Let's take him down. I can't stand this guy any longer." Katya said, slotting in her synchro chip.
Lavis went to mimick the motion. Byakko sent a wave of flames at Lavis.
"Oh crap!!" R.Cyclone said as the fire enveloped her friend.
However, when the flames disappated, Lavis was still there. Even though he took the brunt of the attack, he was only slightly burned.
"How did you survive?!?" Byakko demanded.
"Simple: I'm not human." Lavis said.
"Lavis...he melted your synchro chip..." R.Cyclone said.
It was true: A black smudge pile lay on the ground. It was all that remained of his synchro chip.
"I don't need that to fight..." Lavis said.
"You forget: I'm made of Nebula Grey energy." Lavis said, his dark purple eyes starting to glow.
He shouted out and a burst of dark flames surrounded him. The flames shifted and molded into a shape everyone knew and feared, except for FCR: Nebula Grey. The new Lavis Nebula Grey roared.
''Hmph. I highly doubt this little trick of yours will help at all." Byakko said.
"DAMMIT, I AM SO SICK OF YOU! TEMPEST!!!" R.Cyclone shouted.
The dark stormclouds appeared and blasted Byakko with wind and lightning. Lavis Nebula Grey used Grave Fire on Byakko. Byakko roared out in pain, and leapt away from the attacks.
"Burning Rush!" He shouted, and tackled R.Cyclone head-on.
She shouted in pain and fell toward the lava. Before she hit, however, a big flaming hand caught her. Nebula Grey Lavis set her back on the pedestal.
"Heh, thanks, Lavis. I owe you one." She said.
Byakko flung a storm of energy waves at the both of them. Nebula Grey Lavis just retreated into the Dark Galaxy, while R.Cyclone dodged them. Suddenly, the Dark Galaxy opened up behind Byakko, and HellFlame Serpent Lavis burst out from it, crashing into Byakko and knocking him into the lava. HellFlame Serpent Lavis reverted back to the Nebula Grey form, then back to Lavis's human form. He fell down from exhaustion. R.Cyclone flew over to him and landed next to him.
"You okay?" She asked. Lavis opened his eyes.
"Yeah...just a little tired." He said.
"THEN LET ME PUT YOU TO SLEEP...FOR GOOD!!!" Byakko shouted as he burst out of the lava.
He launched a bolt of shining energy at R.Cyclone, knocking her away. He launched another at Lavis. Dark appeared in the real world (Remember folks, he's an Asteroid Navi -CFS) And blocked the attack. He bent down to his netop.
"Lavis...can you stand?" He asked.
Lavis got up, and was in a limping-like stance.
"Just...barely..."
"Let me help you. We don't need a Synchro Chip to fuse. You and I are both beings of darkness. Let's show this idiot what we can do." Dark said.
Lavis nodded, and a black light shone from the both of them. R.Cyclone and Byakko shielded their eyes.
When the light vanished, the new being that was there had the same form as Lavis. However, his whole body was dark and shadowlike-even up to his hair and face. the only features that stuck out were his eyes, now bone white and pupiless, and his mouth. Dark energy trailed off of him like smoke.
"What is this?" Byakko asked.
"Get ready Byakko...you're about to die at the hands of Dark Lavis!" The new being said, his voice a mix of Dark and Lavis.
He dashed at Byakko and delivered a kick to the navi's jaw.
He followed this up by a series of punches, kicks, and energy blasts.
"Wow...he's strong..." R.Cyclone said in amazement.
Byakko held out both busters when his severe beating ended.
"Hell Crusher!" Byakko shouted, unleashing a huge red wave of energy at Dark Lavis.
Dark Lavis vanished and reappeared behind Byakko.
"Missed me." He said.
Dark Lavis snapped Byakko's neck, pierced his chest with his hand, a grabbed his face. He blasted Byakko's face with dark energy, deleting the navi. He landed on a platform.
"To easy..." He said.
R.Cyclone landed next to him.
"You two are amazing when you're fused!" She said.
"Maybe so...why don't we prove it on all of these viruses?" Dark Lavis said, commenting on the swarm of virus that appeared in the room.
R.Cyclone's right hand melted into a bustergun. Dark Lavis got into fighting stance.
"This should be fun..." He said.
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Cyclone EXE Net Official
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Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 4:06 am Post subject: |
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Wooy! Hooray for another chapter lol. Great and awesome job as always...love your battle scenes! You always make it soo vivid and exciting! _________________ =] |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 11:16 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks. I'm a little worried about the battles in this chapter, since I wrote them at 12:30 AM (tired). To make up for it, I included death and a cliffhanger. Chapter 31:
Chapter 31:The Gateway to Zeta...unsealed.
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R.Trill and Fate both stood facing their opponents. One was female, and she was a dark purplish color. Her design seemed vaguely similar to the Darkloid, Plantman, but different altogether. Her head had needle like horns atop. On her forehead was a pink gem, and her green emerald eyes seemed to suck all who gazed into them into a vortex of no return.
The other navi, who looked more human, had black boots on. He had an icey white cloak on, that seemed to reflect light. He had ice-blue hair that was wildly spiked. His cloak and hair his most of his face, only one eye visible.
"Suzaku, we have intruders! How should we delete them?" The female asked.
The humanlike navi, known as Suzaku, replied "Let's go at them seperately, Seiryuu. You go after the army officer who looks like an angel, I'll go after the one with the purple cloak."
Fate said "Take them out as quickly as possible."
R.Trill nodded.
"Loud and clear." She said, and both of the opponents dashed towards
eachother.
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R.Trill clashed into Seiryuu.
"Heh, you don't look so strong." She said.
"That old saying, 'looks can be decieving,' fits me pretty well." R.Trill shot back.
Seiryuu said "We'll see.''
The both of them jumped back.
"Toxic Bomb!!!" Seiryuu shouted, and blasted a dark green murky blast at R.Trill.
The angel flew up and dodged it barely, the acids melting the ground beneath her.
"Oh boy..." She said. Her arm melted into her standard wolf buster.
"Wolf Cannon!" She shouted, and launched several of the huge energy bursts from the wolf's maw down at Seiryuu.
"Alpha Hole!" Seiryuu shouted, and a huge hole with green acid in it appeared, and Seiryuu jumped up.
The blasts entered the hole and were flung back at R.Trill.
"Lauren, try something else!" Trill said.
"What do you think I'm doing?" R.Trill said, dodging the attacks.
Seiryuu held out her hand and a crystal orb formed around R.Trill.
"Hah, gotcha." Seiryuu said. R.Trill burst out of the crystal.
"Angel Thunder!" She shouted, and a bolt of lightning struck Seiryuu.
The dark female navi grunted and held out her hand. A sword with a yellow blade appeared in her hands.
"Blade Combo!" She shouted, did three dark slashes, and a shcokwave. Trill barely avoided them.
"Aqua-No-Jutsu!" She shouted, and a huge wall of water raised up in front of R.Trill, then smashing her.
R.Trill flew out of the water, tackling Seiryuu.
"Divine Rain!" She shouted, and blasted Seiryuu into oblivion with several holy blasts.
"Heh, she wasn't so hard." R.Trill said.
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Suzaku and Fate both stared coldly into eachothers eyes. Immidiately after, they dashed at eachother.
"Giga Halo." Suzaku said, and threw several bladed halos that glowed a different color spectrum at Fate.
They all slashed into the golden navi.
"Fate's Rolling!" Fate shouted, tossing the golden buzzsaws at Suzaku. Suzaku glowed orange.
"Flare Burst." He said, and tossed a huge flame at Fate.
Fate dodged it, but some of his cloak was scorched. Suzaku then returned to normal.
"Glacial Winds!" He shouted, and hurled a big ball of ice at Fate.
It smashed into him, hurting him severely. Fate limped up.
"Give it up. You'll save yourself some trouble." Suzaku said.
"Fate Beam!" The blast tore into Suzaku, piercing him.
"Maybe you should've given up." Fate said.
Suzaku smirked and his form began to shift. He morphed into a gigantic bird with sapphire, flame-like feathers and a grey, wispy tail.
"Oh boy." Fate said.
Suzaku screeched out and opened his mouth. A bright glow appeared in his mouth.
"Fate Beam!!!" Fate shouted, and blasted it at Suzaku.
Suzaku unleashed a huge sapphire beam that easily ate up Fate's. It blasted the gold navi, completely destroying his purple cloak and damaging him severely. Suzaku readied for another blast. Fate stood up and channeled all of his energy into his fist. He dashed at Suzaku. The giant bird unleashed a second sapphire beam at Fate.
Fate held out his fist and burst through the energy beam. He slammed his glowing fist into Suzaku's head, decapitating and destroying the navi. Fate landed and coughed. He looked at his hands and realized he had couhged up his own cyberblood. R.Trill ran up to him.
"Fate! How badly are you hurt?!?" She asked.
A grim smile creapt across his face.
"Very badly. At least we destroyed those navis. It's all up to Netto and Rockman now." Fate said, and started to fade away.
"Tell them I'm sorry I couldn't make it..."
Fate vanished. R.Trill nodded, and grabbed his soul.
"Understood. For now, let your journey into heaven begin." She said, and the soul floated upwards, away from her.
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In the main room, the biggest door turned green, indicating it's unlocked.
"Netto, they unlocked it!" Rockman said.
"Yeah. Now let's go take down this Zeta guy!" Netto said.
They ran through the door. The final stretch of the military building was a huge bridge that stretched away from the building over into space, presenting a very nice view of Earth. At the end of this bridge stood a figure. Netto and Rockman and ran towards the figure.
"Zeta! We're here to stop you from destroying Earth!" Netto shouted.
The figure said in a familiar voice "Hikari Netto...and Rockman, or should I say Hikari Saito. I knew you'd come and try to stop me."
Netto gasped.
"How do you know who we are?!? ...Who I was?!?" Rockman demanded.
"This host body has the most interesting memories. Reading through them was like uncovering an ancient secret." Zeta replied.
He turned to face Netto and Rockman. Both of them gasped in awe and shock. "No...freaking...way..." Netto said.
***
Okay, I lied. My other fic that I was gonna juggle sucked, so I'm destroying it for now. But this one will continue for awhile. And I'm evil, giving you a cliffhanger like that... _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Oh man...darn you and that cliffhanger! *bangs head against a wall repeatedly* Lol... Awesome chapter as ALWAYS and keep up the AWESOME-O writing...but... *sniffle* ...poor Fate... _________________ =] |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:39 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah...um, sorry the delay for on this...schools a pain in the arse...Well, this chapter may be a little strange. I wrote it at 1:00 AM
Chapter 32: Target: Our own flesh and blood
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Both of them were staring at one they both though long gone: Fuyuki Hikari.
"Fuyuki..." Netto said in shock.
"Oh, you mean this body. He's still in here, somewhere." Zeta replied. "You should hear him right now. He's going 'Oh god...please, don't hurt Netto and Rockman! Anything but that!' It's funny, hearing his anguish."
Netto clenched his fist.
"You sick bastard..." He said.
"Heh, like you can do anything. You attack me, and you'll only be hurting your dear brother.'' Zeta said.
Netto realized, with pain, he was right.
"Netto...what can we do?" Rockman asked.
"You can die!" Zeta shouted.
Fuyuki's hands grew into long, sharp claws, that looked as though they could slash you to pieces if hugged by them. Zeta dashed at Netto and Rockman, impaling them both on the sharp claws. Both of them screamed out in pain. Zeta withdrew the claws. They were soaked and dripping with blood.
Zeta grinned wickedly.
"Your wounds...they looks beautiful. Like a sunset over the ocean..." He said, then he licked the blood off one claw.
"And your blood...it tastes like a sweet syrup..." He prepared to run them through again.
"I think I'll have a second taste." He said.
All of the sudden, his expression changed from confident to shocked. His claws reverted back to hands, and he clutched his head.
"Urgh...! What's going on?!?" He shouted.
"What's going on with him?" Rockman said, gasping for air from his wound.
"I...honestly...don't know..." Netto said, in worse shape, bleeding like mad.
All of the sudden, Zeta stopped. He looked back up at Netto and Rockman. The expression in his eyes were calmer, softer.
"Netto...Rockman..." He said.
"That's Fuyuki's voice! He really is still there!" Netto said.
"Guys...I'm sorry, he took me as his host. I can't hold him forever...listen, if need comes, kill Zeta, even though I'm his host body! It'll take him down with me!" Fuyuki said.
"But..." Rockman started.
"I know...I promised I'd come back...looks like I lied..." Fuyuki said.
All of the sudden, he screamed and Zeta resumed control.
"Grr, pesky human. I though I had sealed him away for good." Zeta said.
"Um...what're you doing?" Zeta asked.
Netto had slotted in his Synchro Chip.
"Cross Fusion!" Both he and Rockman shouted.
The both of them fused. R.Rockman pointed his gun at Zeta.
"Get ready to die, asshole!" He said.
Zeta laughed.
"Oh really? Well I got news for you. The time you all spent screwing around, I just got fully healed! I'm powerful enough to destroy you with the flick of a finger! And now, I don't need this weak human flesh!" He said.
With that, Fuyuki's eyes closed, and he fell to the gorund.
A ball of light floated out of him. This ball molded into a shape, then stopped glowing. Zeta's true form was amazing.
He was bigger than the military building himself. He had a huge marble colored body, but he floated at a needle-like point instead of legs. He had two gigantic scything claws floating next to him, the nails white and the rest dark purple. He had a huge grey ring around his back. His head was pure black with spikes on top, the only detail seeable was his glaring red eyes.
"Ready to die, little one?" He asked.
R.Rockman leapt at him.
"Hell no! We'll kick your huge ass to the ends of the universe!" He shouted.
"Program Advance! H-Burst!" R.Rockman blasted Zeta with the large shotgun.
It didn't even make a scratch. Zeta raised a claw and flung it down at R.Rockman, the blow doing massive damage.
"Graugh...it didn't even phase him..." R.Rockman said.
"Acid Arrow!" Zeta shouted, launching a large green arrow at his opponent.
It missed, but only barely.
"BetaSword!" R.Rockman said.
He sent the energy slash flying at Zeta. Zeta's right arm morphed into a shield, and deflected the BetaSword back at the blue navi. It smacked him across the area. Right where R.Rockman landed, an alchemic circle design appeared under him.
"Satan's Wrath!" Zeta shouted, and a huge dark beam burst out, blasting R.Rockman.
When the beam disappated, R.Rockman was shifting in and out of Cross Fusion, and was hurt critically. The giant virus loomed over him.
"Ready to die, little ones?" He asked.
"Rockman...we need to go into Beast Out..." Netto said.
"But...Netto-kun! Beast Out makes me go berserk, and consumes a lot of energy! The strain could harm you badly, or even kill you!" Rockman replied.
"So what! Fuyuki put his life on the line in the battle against Hyoga to save us! It's our turn to repay the favor! Not just for him, though, but for Katya, for Lavis, for Mom and Dad...everyone!" R.Rockman said.
Rockman realized, sadly, that his netop was right.
"All-right..." He said.
"Beast Out!" R.Rockman shouted.
A bright light shone over them. When it vanished, the result was a fusion of Cross Fusion, Greiga Beast Out, and Falzer Beast Out.
"What's this?" Zeta asked.
He hurled a fireball down at Beast R.Rockman. It bounced off without making a scratch. Zeta was surprised. Beast R.Rockman leapt at Zeta and tore through his chest. Zeta gasped, and was proceeded to be ripped to shreds by Beast R.Rockman.
Clouds of smoke and explosions filled the air. Beast R.Rockman walked out of the smoke.
"Netto!" Someone shouted.
Beast R.Rockman looked over. Fuyuki was calling out to him, and walking towards his brother.
"Fuyuki! Stay back!" He shouted back.
"Why should I?" Fuyuki replied.
"This form...I might hurt you, or even worse!" Beast R.Rockman replied.
Fuyuki keapt walking.
"Fuyuki!" Beast R.Rockman shouted, but his brother walked up to him.
Fuyuki put his hand on Beast R.Rockman's shoulder.
"Netto..." He said.
Then he punched his brother.
"You idiot! You know how much stress you're putting on your body?!? Are you trying to get yourself killed?" He asked.
Beast R.Rockman reverted out of Cross Fusion, and Rockman's PET hit the floor.
"You're the one punching me!" Netto said.
All of the sudden, the stress set in, and Netto fell to the ground. Fuyuki kneeled down.
"Netto...if you died, everything I sacrificed would've gone to waste." Fuyuki said.
"Sorry, I just..." Netto replied.
He sat up and hugged his brother.
"Fuyuki...looks like you didn't lie to us." Netto said.
"Yeah, you came back after all." Rockman said, appearing out of his PET to join his brothers.
Fuyuki grinned and hugged the both of them back.
"Yeah...guess you're right." He said.
The three of them released eachother.
"Let's head back to Earth and celebrate the victory!" Netto said.
Then, a menacing growl was heard follwed by a huge crash. A shadow appeared in all of the smoke from Zeta's explosions.
"Foolish little humans...did you think I'd go down so easily?!?" It asked.
"Zeta's still alive?!?" Netto asked.
"No...this is his true form..." Fuyuki said, as the smoke cleared, revealing the new, eviler form of Zeta.
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AWW he's bak...like I said...couldn't keep your charas dead could ya! ^.^ *hugs for Fuyuki* _________________ =] |
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Sorry, I haven't updated in awhile. As with my other fic, I've been grounded and haven't had much time to work on more chapters. I have a little bit of time, so I should have at least something done by tonight. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Ahh, nii-chan and his ficcies! I can't wait till you throw in another "Open Mike Night"!! Remember to put in [spoil:f51a888b67]Enzan asking about how Laika admits his feeling for Shia(Lauren)!! I believe in miracles... WHERE YOU FROM, YOU SEXY THING?! [/spoil:f51a888b67] Sorry, spasm. I'm done. Can't wait fer more! *dances with Sasuke and Naruto and gets pummled into the ground by Sakura and Ino* Hee hee... AAAHHH!!! PINK PONIES!!!! Nevermind, inside joke. Naruto spikes Sasuke's drink. LONG story. Large inside joke between me n' CFS. _________________
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Please, Chibi, don't get off-topic in my fics! You're going to get yourself banned and my topics locked, so write stuff like that in your fics, okay? _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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ChibiForte ニンジャ
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Okay, sorry Nii-san. Well, write more soon, and finished that damned AMV, I can't wait for more! _________________
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Final chapter. Here ya go:
Chapter 33:The Threat Has Gone.
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Zeta was larger, and shinier. Also, the ring around his back was glowing and spinning, plus, he now had legs. Also, two very large blades extended from his forearms.
"I am Zeta...I am immortal...you shall both feel my wrath!" He shouted, and swished his blade up.
Netto's eyes went blank, and he fell down.
"Netto!" Both Rockman and Fuyuki shouted.
"His soul is now mine. What you're talking to now is merely an empty carcass." Zeta laughed.
Fuyuki clenched his hand into a fist.
"You asshole...how dare you!" Fuyuki shouted.
You could almost see his angry aura forming. He leapt at Zeta and delivered a kick square to the virus's jaw. Zeta was shocked.
"How...? A mere human..." Zeta said, awed.
"I'm not just a normal human!" Fuyuki shouted.
He delivered a powerful punch right to Zeta's chest, than an uppercut to his jaw. Rockman watched in amazement as his older brother beat the tar out of something 20 times bigger than him.
"Give Netto back his soul!" Fuyuki said, and elbowed Zeta's chest really hard.
Zeta shouted and white beams of energy burst out of him. Netto got up.
"Urgh...my head..." He said.
Zeta exploded. Fuyuki walked back, limping.
"Fuyuki...how did you beat him up so easily?" Netto asked.
"I don't know...I honestly don't know..." Fuyuki said, and collapsed.
Netto and Rockman took the teen and picked him up. They hoisted him back into the building.
"Looks like we finally defeated Zeta." Netto said.
"Yep. And we got Fuyuki and Starman back, too." Rockman replied.
Katya, Cyclone, Slur, Starman, Lavis, Dark, Lauren, and Trill all walked out of their respective battle rooms, and the navis went back into the PETs, including Starman and Slur going into Fuyuki's PET.
"He's alive! Thank God!" Starman said.
Fuyuki's eyes fluttered open.
"Netto...Rockman...let go of me..." He said.
They set him down and he got on his feet. Everyone walked back out through the building, meeting up with the others who were fending off the security system and telling them what happened. Pretty soon, everyone was back on Earth, right at that desert where they had fought Hyoga in the Timayan temple.
"So...now what?" Netto asked.
"Starman, Slur, email the programs in the Celsius telling them to get that airship over here as soon as possible." Fuyuki said.
He looked back to his friends.
''I say it's time to PARTAY!"
Everyone cheered.
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Hours later, at 3:00 AM when the party had ended, Yuiichiro and Haruka had gone to bed, but Netto and Fuyuki were still up, both of them layed sprawled on both of the living room couches, Rockman's PET right next to Starman's. Both navis were in the PETs.
"Whew...that was fun." Netto said.
''Yeah...and to think I'm alive again to enjoy stuff like this..." Fuyuki said, sitting up.
"By the way, Netto...remember when we were playing Four Swords, I kicked your ass, and now you have to do something super embarrasing?" Fuyuki said.
"Oh geez..." Netto said, knowing where this was going.
Fuyuki whispered something in Netto's ear.
"HELL NO. I refuse to do that." Netto said.
"Okay, I'll just tell mom how you nearly set fire to the house by trying to make your own curry." Fuyuki replied, sticking out his tongue.
"Dammit..." Netto said, and got up.
"What'd you tell him to do?" Starman asked curiously.
"He has to go streaking through the neighborhood right now, wearing clown shoes." Fuyuki said.
Starman and Rockman burst out laughing.
"You have such a demented-yet hilarious-mind!" Rockman said.
"Oh shut up." Netto said, walking outside and then to the side of the house where he couldn't be seen.
"At least since it's night, no one will see me." He said.
Netto placed his clothes by the door and ran off. Fuyuki got up, went over to the closet, and took out a megaphone, causing the two navis to crack up again.
Fuyuki took the megaphone and shouted out the doorway "ATTENTION CITIZENS OF AKIHARA!!! THERE IS A NAKED BOY RUNNING THROUGH THE NEIGHBORHOOD! LOOK OUTSIDE, HE'S RIGHT THERE!!!"
Then he grabbed Netto's clothes.
"GOOD LUCK FINDING YOUR CLOTHES, NETTO!!!" He shouted, and went inside, closed the front door, and locked it.
He picked up both PETs and plugged the two navis in.
"Make sure the door stays locked." Fuyuki said, grinning, to the two laughing navis.
Then he went over to the phone and dialed Katya's number.
"Hello? Katya? Look outside, there's something you'll like to see." Fuyuki said, and hung up the phone.
He than collapsed onto the couch, laughing.
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EL FIN.
That's it. It's finally over. Now I'm going to work on my Wind Waker one and one centering around Serenade. Cya guys there, I hope. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 575 Location: Traveling the world, recruiting people to help me rule my manga, anime, and video game empire.
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The ending was so funny. :V I'm laughing so hard right now, there's tears coming to my eyes. CFS, this is without a doubt, the BEST PIECE OF WORK I'VE EVER SEEN YOU DO! Seriously, making Netto streak through Akihara was a great ending twist! I'm still doubled over with laughter! I hope an Anime maker sees some of this and makes them into an altered version of the anime. Wouldn't that be great!? _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 8:42 pm Post subject: |
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That would be awesome. But it'll probably never happen. Yeah, ever since I've made all of my characters, I've always wanted to see them animated, but I knew it wouldn't happen. Still, one can deram...And yeah, even Chibi thinks the streaking was funny, and she's the comedy queen. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Cyclone EXE Net Official
Age: 34 Joined: 08 Jun 2005 Posts: 308
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 1:22 pm Post subject: |
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Battle ended more quickly then I would have liked...but lol for what happened after that! Omg LOL! Katya is luvin that...oh yes... _________________ =] |
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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I intended to make the battle longer...but I had no ideas...so to come make up for what happened, I did the part that everyone likes. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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