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PyroWarriorZ Net Battler
Joined: 02 Oct 2005 Posts: 50 Location: South Africa
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:54 am Post subject: Rockman.EXE: The Future is Now! (Quint!!!) |
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Ok this my first fanfic eva!!!!
It is based around Quint.EXE and is closely related to the orginal Quint but with differences
I don't watch the show cause I can't so excuse me if some of the facts are messed up, its not my fault. Anywa prepare to enjoy and please rate and critisise |
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PyroWarriorZ Net Battler
Joined: 02 Oct 2005 Posts: 50 Location: South Africa
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:55 am Post subject: |
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Life is continuing normally in the cyberworld as Rockman, Roll, Gutsman, Glyde and Rush were all in the cybernet talking about the latest events and the lack of excitement lately when the ground begins to rumble. As the navis look behind them they see a large green sphere of energy with green energy ring that spin around it, as the energy fades a navi is seen standing among the scorched ground. He is green and orange, his helmet has a V shape on the forehead and he has orange visors and his symbol is a V symbol.
“Who the heck are you” Gutsman says with wide eyes
“Yo, the names Quint.EXE!”
“Quint….Where ya from Quint?” Megaman asks baffled at the appearance of this new navi
“I’m from the future!” Quint said with a smile
The other navis look at each other and begin to laugh
“The future?! Yea and I’m the Aki-Chan” Gutsman says as he holds his gut laughing and approaches the navi. Quint smirks and grabs Gutsman hand and than lifts him above his head with just one hand and throws him into flat into the wall as Gutsman slides off
“Are you really from the future?” Roll asks with wide eyes
“Sure am!” He gives a wink to Roll making her blush
The navis all stand watching in awe at this navi claiming to be the future |
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PyroWarriorZ Net Battler
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:56 am Post subject: |
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A few hours later the at Scilab, Quint agrees to be scanned by Yuuchiro, during the process the others discuss the possibility of time travel.
“Wouldn’t be cool to know about the future!” Netto says barley able to wait
“We could do so much good with it” Meiru adds while clinging to Netto
“The scan is almost complete” Yuuchiro continues scanning Quint as Quint stands completely unaffected by the conversations of the future. Yuuchiro begins to get a worried look on his face as the scan draws to a close
“I wonder what the future will be like” Roll says with her hands together, wondering if she and Rockman are married yet
After a few more hours…
“I don’t believe it…” Yuuchiro stand stunned
“Is the scan done?” Netto asks looking at his father’s shock
“This navi….it has data I’ve never seen before, his programs far surpass our own. He may very well be from the future” Everyone stands frozen listening to Yuuchiro. Quint smiles and walks up to the other navis
“Told ya” Quint gloats with great pleasure
“So you can tell us all about the future?” Roll says pressed up against the navi with big doe eyes
“No” Roll drops to the ground with a sweatdrop hearing Quint’s refusal
“Why the heck not!!!” Gutsman yells in anger at Quint for upsetting Roll
“If I told you the future it could disrupt the timeline, that would be very bad. It would cause huge blackholes that would devour the universe, you know, that old thing” Quint says completely unphased
“So why are you here than and how did you even get here?” Netto wonders as he asks the navi
“Well you see I’m the first navi ever built with the Time Code, giving me the ability to travel through cyberspace time continuum to any point in time I wish. I’m actually based on your framework Rockman, I’m the fifth one that’s used your framework. That’s why my name is Quint. As for why I am here, well you see it is well known that not too soon a great disaster will occur caused by a powerful being in the cyberworld that causes great destruction and kills thousand of navis. So I’m here to avert it” Quint quietly explains in a calm manner
“I’m gonna help than” Megman jumps in eager to assit
“I don’t know…” Netto says in a worried tone
“We’re coming too!” Roll and Gutsman both say in unison
“Than lets go” Quint yells with his fist in the air
“I think you should take Rush with you, he may be able to help you locate this powerful being” Yuuchiro adds
“I don’t know” Rockman scratches his head
“Oh come on, let him go. Please!” Roll pleads with Rockman
“Ok….fine, so where do we look?” Rockman turns to Quint
“Well from the History Books I believe it occurs in the undernet, so I’m off” Quint teleports off to the undernet before anyone can stop him as Rockman, Gutsmans and Roll follow with Rush last who sighs as he does not really wish to go finally joins them |
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PyroWarriorZ Net Battler
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:56 am Post subject: |
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They all arrive in the undernet
“Rush, do your thing!” Roll exclaims as she gives a pose. Rush begins looking around and he walks along the dark pathway as the navis all follow. Its not long before they begin to realize Rush is leading them in circles
“This mutt is useless” Quint breathes heavily, but just as he is spoken 7 purple Mettaurs appear
“Viruses!” Rockman begins firing at them with his Rockbuster as the others attack as well. The Mettaurs are completely undamaged by the attacks
“There are no ordinary Mettaurs” Netto gets ready to slot in a chip when suddenly 10 more Mettaurs appear
“Oh no….this bad” Meiru stares into her pet with worry
“Heh….” Quint smiles at the situation, “Watch this! Sakugarne!”
Suddenly a an orange jackhammer with a spring falls from the sky and lands leaving a huge hole in the ground
“Cool” Gutsman stares at the jackhammer in amazement as Quint leaps on to it and than begins pouncing up and down on it like a pogostick and as he lands on the Mettuars they are crushed into pieces. Quint smirks and jumps off
“That was SO cool!” Rockman runs up to jackhammer/pogostick and stares in awe
“Pretty cool eh? This is the Sakugarne, designed specially for me. Its way powerful, it’s based off the same idea as Rush, as it is also a virus. But unlike the mutt, it is actually useful” Quint beams with pride as Rockman walks around the Sakugarne in total amazement
The gang continue walking along the undernet, looking for the real disaster. Rush trails behind with his head down. He approaches Roll as tugs at her hand
“What is it Rush?” Roll looks down at the sad dog
“Do you thing I’m…..useless?” He says with big woeful eyes
“Of coarse not!” She picks up Rush and hugs him, “Your cute and…well….um….you can….er…..WELL YOUR CUTE!” She hugs Rush hard as begins to choke
“Where is this powerful being” Quint continues walking forward, becoming impatient. They all eventually arrive at a huge skull shrine
“Um...I don’t like this place” Rockman says twiddling his hands in fear.
Suddenly a huge skull emerges as lights glow in its eye sockets and robotic arms appear on the side and jet forms on its back
“That must be it!” Roll jumps backwards as Rockman fires at it with his Rockbuster which seems to have no effect as Quint jumps on the Sakugarne and lands on the skull but he is simply sent flying back along with the Sakugarne. The skull opens its mouth and blue flames begin enveloping the navis as they scream in pain
“I….didn’t think….I would need this. Time to use Time Code to its full advantage. Sakugarne, lets do it!” Quint yells as he jumps into the air and the Sakugarne breaks into pieces and attaches to Quint as Quint launches at the skull and begins sending powerful spring loaded jackhammer punches into it, knocking it back and cracking it
“Incredible” Rockman lies on the ground as he stares at Quints power up. Quint continues to attack the skull until it is completely destroyed, “You did it!” Rockman jumps up in joy, Quint just stand there, “Quint….” Rockman motions towards him, but Quint turns around and sends a spiked punch into Rockman sending him flying back
“Quint?!” Roll yells as she and Gutsman rush to his side
“Quint….what are you doing?” Rockman grasps his chest in agony as Quint walks towards them and prepares to send a huge powerful punch into them, but they all manage to logout just in time |
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PyroWarriorZ Net Battler
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:57 am Post subject: |
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Back at Scilab Yuuchiro has been monitoring the situation, Quint has began destroying the cybernet and using the fragments to build himself up to make himself even stronger and even deleting navis
“It was Quint all along!” Dex says as he slams his fists into the ground in rage
“I’m not so sure” Yuuchiro interrupts, “I think it Sakugarne, during the fusion it took over Quint and is using his body to cause this, so he can become powerful enough to destroy the entire net
“Then, I must stop him” Rockman gets up, still in pain
“No! Its too dangerous” Netto yells in disagreement
“I don’t have a choice…I must. I will!” Rockman stands up
“I want to help!” Rush jumps into the conversation as everyone stares in bafflement
“What can you do?” Gutsman giggles at the dog
“I’m going and that is that!” Rush yells in determination
“Very well. Just don’t get in my way” Rockman teleports back to the undernet as Rush follow,. they teleport right infront of the now massive machine Sakugarne.
The Sakugarne is now a huge orange wrecking machine with jackhammers, wrecking balls, hammers, drills and all sorts of construction equipment with an unconscious Quint in the center surrounded by an orange glass sphere. All the weapons begin attacking Rockman as he is bashed around, he takes beating after beating and ends up bruised and barely unable to move on the ground
“Leave him alone” Rush intervenes, but a wrecking ball smashes into him, sending him flying back into the ground. Rockman tries to get up, but he collapses as his particles begin showing
“Netto…” A strange voice appears in Netto’s PET
“Who are you?” Netto stares as a shadowy figure appears in his PET
“I am Quint’s operator, all that has happened was an unexpected event. I am transmitting to you from the future, you must stop the Sakugarne or it will destroy your world and there will be no future. I will transmit you the Time Code to give to Rockman, it is the same code that allowed Quint to fuse with the Sakugarne. I just pray you can use it and stop him before all is lost” The voice fades away
“Lets do it Netto-kun” He says as Netto inputs the code in Rockman, Rockman’s body glows as he gets a vision of the future. He sees the destruction the Sakugarne could cause and the beautiful future that he must save, “We can’t lose!” The Sakugarne raises one of it jackhammer arms and than launches it to Rockman with great speed. Just than Rush runs infront of Rockman to take the full force of the attack, but than there a huge light that surrounds Rockman and Rush. The light covers the entire Undernet and a new Rockman appears, he now has silver and brown armour. He has dog like ears, goggles and a huge jet on his back
“JET ROCKMAN!!!”
(Yes it is Jet Megaman from Megaman 6 and 7, just tweaked a little)
Jet Rockman blastes into the air with great speed as all of Sakugarne’s weapon arms fire towards them as he flies and dodges past each of them. The arms continue to try to hit Rockman, each time missing and smashing into the walls. Suddenly Jet Rockman gains speed and goes so fast he disappears out of sight, he appears behind Sakugarne and sends his fist out which forms a huge red energy fist that smashes into the Sakugarne smashing off 4 of its arms. He does another energy punch destroying more of the arms
“The only way to beat this thing is to destroy its energy source” Rockman tells Netto
“You mean Quint…” Netto looks at Rockman
“It is the only way…..he would want it, we must!” Rockman pleads to Netto
“Right, for the future. Do it Rockman!” Netto grips the pet as Jet Rockman flies up to Sakugarne and charges up energy as Netto sweats with fear.
“I’M SORRY QUINT!” He releases a huge energy fist into sphere containing Quint and there is a huge explosion as the Sakugarne is smashed into pieces with Quint left all bruised and battered
“Thank you…” Quint says his last words as he is deleted and turned to data. Rockman returns to normal as Rush appears next to him
“We did it!” Rush jumps up and down in joy. Rockman looks down thinking of Quint, when suddenly data appears and Quint reforms. Rockman and Rush’s mouths both drop open
“Hey! Whats up? Oh did I forgot to mention that all navis in my time can reform after being delete. It must of slipped my mind” Quint laughs
“Grrrrrrr….” Rockman’s face turns red as he jumps Quint in rage
Back in the Cybernet all the navis have gathered to say goodbye to Quint
“I’m sorry for all the trouble I caused, if I had never come, none of this would of happened” Quint stares at his feet
“Its not your fault, you could have never know Sakugarne would of gone beserk” Roll says to comfort Quint
“Thanks” Quint looks to Roll with a smile back on his face
“Yea, it all turned out ok” Rush adds now as happy as ever as he stands next to Megaman. Megaman and Quint approached each other, they shakes hands and look at each other with a smile, thinking of the future. Quint smirks, he goes up to Roll and gives her a kiss as she turns bright red. He than runs back as he is surrounded in green energy and he teleports back to the future
The End!!!
Last edited by PyroWarriorZ on Mon Oct 24, 2005 2:49 pm; edited 2 times in total |
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PyroWarriorZ Net Battler
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 3:51 pm Post subject: |
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If any of the story is confusing I apologise, but time travel is always messy |
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YurikoOtaku Net Agent
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 272
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:33 am Post subject: |
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First thing. Your story is just screaming for punctuation.
Sample:
“Than I must stop him” Rockman gets up still in pain".
It's then, not than. There ought to be a comma between then and I and up and still.
Also, you're quadruple posting. Try to let some time pass by before reposting, or just paste the story on www.fanfiction.net. To put it on FF, make an account on FF and put your story in a Web document. or if it's possible, put it on the first page.
The story is good though. :3 |
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PyroWarriorZ Net Battler
Joined: 02 Oct 2005 Posts: 50 Location: South Africa
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 2:53 pm Post subject: |
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My punctuation has always been disgusting, my teacher love my essays. It is just my punctuation she hates. She says I would be perfect if I could fix my punctuation
Anyway, besides my atrocious punctuation I want critisicm on story, plot, characters and how I brought Quint, Sakugarne and Jet Rocman into EXE |
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