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Ageman20XX Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 104 Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 9:52 pm Post subject: R Punk |
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I know it's been a while since I posted, and I know this barely warrents a post, but I wanted to try my hand at Meijin cross Punk...so....I give you my first version of R Punk.
http://www.plutolighthouse.net/other/R-Punk.jpg
I plan to redo him seeing as I feel this design is too busy, but alas, someday soon I'll be good at CFs.
Anyway, C&C please... :D
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
Joined: 28 May 2005 Posts: 1723 Location: Glomping Seras
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
Joined: 08 Jul 2005 Posts: 1043 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 10:23 pm Post subject: |
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Though I am pretty sure you messed up the emblem(it isn't supposed to be a mouth), and for some reason it doesnt seem to realy fit Meijin as much as say, R Kendou, or R Gate would. Nice image none the less.
When I saw the name R Punk I thought Classic Punk, with the Punk Rolling Shields, punks Symbol, and a few other minor changes, and of course Meijin's physical features.
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Magicman DX Nebula
Joined: 04 Jul 2005 Posts: 647 Location: long.... long.... ago in the far.... far.... away
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 10:35 pm Post subject: |
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it looks like cross fusion punk, but the face don't look like meijin it's too chubby _________________
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Dark Liger Net Official
Joined: 02 Aug 2005 Posts: 343 Location: Neo Arcadia
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 7:24 am Post subject: |
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I really the design on R Punk, although his size makes him look like someone off of Viewtiful Joe or something. I give you a 9/10. :]
EDIT: You should try more CFs. I would really like to see you do R BurnerMan |
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Unknown Neo Cross Fusion!
Age: 40 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 2933 Location: Unknown
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 8:20 pm Post subject: |
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It's not that bad. It seems a little weird, Like there's not a good enough combination of both famous and punk. Maybe you should try the other three navis he has. |
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Vanilla_Go_Rilla I Used to Be Sexy
Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 776 Location: Lumine av. (c) meh
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 8:30 pm Post subject: |
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Wow. That design is so nicely detailed. I'm rather in agreement that it's a tad busy...but only if this design's what we're actually going to see in the series (I guess the anime designs are relatively simpler to make work easier on the animators XD). At this point, though, it looks really good. A lot like Plantman.EXE's design, too. Nice work, Ageman. _________________ Better to keep your mouth shut and make people wonder if you are stupid, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt. |
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feepitsrule Darkloid
Joined: 05 Aug 2005 Posts: 544 Location: Everywhere You Want To Be
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Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:23 pm Post subject: |
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It doesn't look too much like Famous. I guess Punk took over. It looks officicial art-ish. Good job!
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Xel Dr. Wily's Peon
Joined: 23 Mar 2005 Posts: 60
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:26 am Post subject: |
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Well, the effort you put into it is awesome, I can see all the details you put in and such, but Punk doesn't look so well crossed-fussed. He seems...chubby really. Personally Gateman would have been better. 7/10 |
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Jean Net Police
Age: 37 Joined: 31 Oct 2005 Posts: 428 Location: North Vancouver, BC, Canada
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:32 am Post subject: |
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Ooo it looks pretty good. Nice design. Only problem I see is that I don't think he's tall enough. XD The posing and spikeys are my favourite part. _________________ deviantART / Live Journal / Yaoi Gallery |
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Ageman20XX Net Savior
Joined: 17 Mar 2005 Posts: 104 Location: Niagara Falls, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:53 am Post subject: |
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It wasn't until it was too late that I realised he was too chubby and short, so I guess I sorta fail at that. That's what happens when you try to fit your drawing to the paper..oh well. Thanx though, R GateMan next!
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feepitsrule Darkloid
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 8:08 pm Post subject: |
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Make sure that he's tall enough this time. You don't want a midget version of R Gateman. Oh no, that could be quite terrible. _________________
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