Captain N/Chrono Trigger crossover COMPLETE WITH MEGA-ACTION

**Izumi** · Last edited by Izumi on Tue Nov 01, 2005 11:46 pm; edited 4 times in total

My non-EXE stories never get any love, but I'll try this anyway. XD

Here is the finished story in all its terrifyingness! ^^;;

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Some mature subject matter is implied, and there's death and time travel. Be warned.
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**Sol** · Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 11:45 pm Post subject:

Very nice. =o

Despite me not knowing squat about Captain N, you put the story in such a way that the reader can fully understand the situation wihtout having to have seen the series. You have the Chrono Trigger characters personalities down to the letter, as well. Superb writing style makes this a nice read.

...though, I don't know if Crono is a COMPLETE mute. He obviously has to say stuff for them to understand him. XDD

Nice job, though.
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Mega Man.EXE · Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 12:59 am Post subject:

I'm enjoying this one so far, Izu. You describe things very well, and one does not need to know anything about either series to get into the story. This actually makes me wish that I knew more about the plot of Chrono Trigger and anything at all about Captain N. Anyway, I believe this fic has great potential and the detail paid to each charater is well done. The plot seems well thought out and has pulled me in asking for more! ^_^
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**Izumi** · Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 11:45 pm Post subject:

The fic is now complete and has been submitted for the contest. Wish me luck!

Read the monstrosity here~.
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**Sol** · Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 1:30 am Post subject:

Excellent. Very excellent.

Although it was rushed at places, you did mention that it had to be under 7,777 words, so I don't entirely blame you. Although I am concerned about Marle going OOC so suddenly. XP

Anyways, I look forward to seeing the full version from you, Izu.
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**Izumi** · Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 1:33 am Post subject:

Jean · Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 4:17 pm Post subject:

Ohh, this sounds like my kinda thing. I haven't seen anything Chrono Trigger related in a while, so, why not. I'll just comment as I read... *begins reading*

I already like your writing style. It's simple and worded well, kind of like J.K. Rowling's. The writing styles I like the most. XD I also like how you've made Chrono a mute, because he really did seem like it in the game. And you've portrayed Lucca so well.. she acts so cute.

Oh my God, Kefka goodness. Yaay. I love his entrance.... okay, yeah, I'm really enjoying this Kefka stuff, he's the greatest villian ever. XD

Hmm. It was interesting and pretty good. I'd like to read the full version when you're done, because it feels like it's missing something. The ending was a little sudden, but I like it nonetheless. And Kefka rules, so, y'know, there should be extra points just for that. At least there was for the half-used cherry lipstick.
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**Izumi** · Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 12:06 am Post subject:

I seem to have won second place in the contest, so I guess it wasn't as bad as I'd thought. XDD
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Jean · Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:34 am Post subject:

Ohh, congrats. I certainly think it deserved second place. What was the first place winner about?
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**Izumi** · Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 3:43 am Post subject:

Ah, the first place was a FFVI fic crossed over with Devil May Cry. Zombies had taken over the world, and zombie Daryl killed Celes after Celes used her lipstick. o.O Then Locke let zombie Celes kill him. Um, I think everybody else died too. It was really scary. ^^;;
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Jean · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 4:04 am Post subject:

Wow. XD That does sound pretty good.

At least you get second place X3
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