Kenta's Sprites

Kenta · Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 4:43 pm Post subject: Kenta's Sprites

Now i've really started spriting.

My first work:

PunkSoul!!

Seeya!

Shadow.EXE · Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 8:17 pm Post subject:

First of all, could you change the color of his hands? It's kinda hard to tell where they are. Also, the body needs to be shaded. It's lacking right now. Overall, it's pretty neat, but it could use some improvement.

Filthster · Net Battler Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 52

It needs some smoothing down, you can really tell what you've added.
The bits you've added haven't got an "edge" to them, for example Megaman always has a dark outline, those pieces seem to be missing it.
Also the shoulder has a couple of pixels sticking out, like it's been spun.
I can see some shading, it just needs to be darker.

**Core** · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 4:25 am Post subject:

This sprite looks similar to another one of the same type and design that I helped someone out in the past with. I'm a bit foggy as to whom it was, but from what I can recall is that the version worked on with that person was a bit better in quality then this.
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Blaze · Net Savior Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 139

Am I the only one who thinks that the sprite is copy and paste? o.O"
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Kenta · Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:02 am Post subject:

No Blaze, it was no copy and paste. Look at his legs. Do you think its copy and paste? I edited it pixel by pixel. I just copied the shoulders and Punk's hair.

Kenta · Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 10:49 am Post subject:

I've made more!

ShadeSoul:

BeastSoul:

**Sketch** · Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 11:18 am Post subject:

From what I can tell, the Shade Soul is a recolored Rockman with Shademan's wings, ears, ankle wings, and claws pasted onto his back. A classic Copy-Paste Shade Soul.
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Hikari · Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 11:19 am Post subject:

Shade Soul looks copy-paste-recolored (I'm specifying Shademan's wings). I'm not so sure about Beast Soul; the "mane" seems too short.
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Shadow.EXE · Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 8:10 pm Post subject:

The Shade Soul has way too many cut and pasted parts. You should do some more custom work on the sprite instead of copying and pasting. The Beast Soul is a little better, but you should add some variery to the colors. He needs at least two more colors on him. It looks bland with just gold, brown, and silver.

Kenta · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 10:32 am Post subject:

Ok guys, i've learned how to do a real custom sprite.

I've made overworld sprites of the Soul Unisons!

GutsSoul:

KnightSoul:

What about those?

Kenta · Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 2:07 pm Post subject:

Made another!

MagnetSoul:

Kenta · Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 5:48 am Post subject:

Hey! Why anyone post here?

Filthster · Net Battler Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 52

erm, try not to double post, if no one is posting don't ask them too.

Your sprites desperately need shading, I think Magnetsoul's head is too flat. You can hardly see gutsouls eyes. and his arms are too heavy, meaning way too big for size. Looks like they are dragging him down. His helmet is MASSIVE too, try to keep everything in proportion.

Again, its really easy to tell where you've added stuff like the shoulder things on knightsoul. Try to make them blend with shading and pixel placement (trying to imagine the different layers of the armour, placed one on top of the other, it deepens the image, although it could be quite hard on such a small sprite.

**Sketch** · Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 9:27 am Post subject:

You can double post if you have an update, which you did have one. Don't double, or in the case, TRIPLE post just because no one is reading your thread. :eyes:
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