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PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 8:10 am    Post subject: Rockman stuff... A Tale Of Two Brothers(I guess it's PG?) Reply with quote

Alright, guys. I haven't written but one thing on the computer during my 7 years of being online.. I usually just write in real life. This is about my fan character, Atarashii Karuu (A DarkChip and DarkSoul scientist), and of course, my favorite Rockman character, DarkSoul. And some other stuff. Atarashii is a General for Nation X, but since Regal has turned over a new leaf, he's got someone new doing the lines of running the darkened nation. In my role plays, Nation X and Ameroupe are great rivals. Nation X has always won their wars, encept just one.... And to all of those who are wondering.. I DID put Kraft in here. I just love him so much. >> I put all of my best ideas and war stories in this one, but I'm not done yet, yo!


~A General's Revenge~


A light snowfall fell upon the Nation X Air Force building, and beside this building, was another. Inside his office, a golden haired man with a tuft of hair covering his right eye was writing what seemed to be a letter. Upon finishing it, he sealed it up, and put it on the corner of his desk. He got up, went to the door, and opened it. But he wasn't able to leave yet. A regular sized, grey haired man in uniform stood in the way. But, since Atarashii was quite a bit taller than him, he had to look up. "Atarashii, Sir! I have something to tell you." Atarashii only pat his golden hair down. "Yes, Captain Kanzen?" Kanzen blinked, pausing for a moment. His sight was fixed on tying to see what was actually behind that tuft of hair.. Inly a bit of a scar could be seen. "Well, uh... That chip you made has gotten it's last touch ups... If you could come over to the R&D dept., I'll show you." "Alright.. I'll be there in a second." Kanzen soluted, and headed off. Atarashii took out a dark red PET, and a rather bored Navi was sitting in the corner. It appeared to be Dark Blues. "Well, aren't you going?" he asked to Atarashii. "Cranky, are we? Remember what I did for you." " Feh, you bring my data back from the Ura Internet, and you expect a thank you?" "I would expect nothing less from you." Atarashii walked off, and within minutes, was met yet again with Kanzen in the R&D room. They were standing in front of a hologram, with a DarkChip's picture on it. In a glass box next to the hologram was the actual DarkChip. "Well.. it looks pretty good.. With this chip, my brother will fall, once and for all." Kanzen nodded. "Well, it's ready when you are.""Do not protract this matter, Kanzen. I will send this off when I'm ready. Aftr taking the chip though, and having a small chat, he left, to go back to his office. He got to his office, and began to write an email... To Barrel. The new chip that he had was sitting on the edge of his desk, and after writing it, he uploaded the data from the chip to an attachment in the email. Since his computer was specially made, it could take the darkness from chips like this.

~An Infected Nation~


In the country of Ameroupe, it was raining. Hard. Not to mention, it was cold outside... Sleet covered the streets, and made the driving, and walking conditions quite hard. We saw the dark blue haired Colonel run as fast as he could, to get to the enterance of his military base. Upon arrival, he panted, and met with someone. "Have you gotten any information yet?" "No, sir.. We don't know when they are coming. But, you do have an email... From someone Anonymous?" "I'll check it out.." With a nod, Barrel walked off to the mail computer system. He took out his PET. "Colonel, would you check the email for viruses?" "Of course I will, Barrel-sama. ......... Nothing here.. I'll open it for you." And so, it was opened. It read: "Hello again, my disparager. It's been six months since we met, but judging from this lone, incredulous e-mail, you should know who this is... If you are reading this.. A minute after reading this message, a virus shall be placed in your systems, and will leave it in shambles.. Of course, you can always fix the damage with time. If you would like to have an altercation with me, then you know where my office is... A-147, near the Air Force base of Nation X." -General Atarashii Karuu. After reading it, Barrel's face seemed to drop, then get tense. Sirens and lights flared through the area. "Damn brother of mine... " he aid softly. But then, he yelled over the noise. "KUSO!!"A small fire seemed to break out, but soldier Navis were taking care of the problem. Barrel also plugged his Navi in, to help.Within a half of an hour, the problem was fixed, and Ameroupe had only recieved minor damage.Hey, it was better than just letting it go.Before Colonel was plugged out, he saw the silhouette of a Navi, wielding quite a smirk.


~Fury of a DarkLoid~


Teleporting out of the area, the odd, red eyed Navi laughed. "Atarashii's really not bad with this stuff.. But, even if I am acquainted, and sometimes and ally with Atarashii, I'll show him who's better at destroying.... Besides, I stand alone." He now was in NetFrica. "Ameroupe and Nation X, say goodbye to 90% of your wheat and cotton supplies~!" He put his hands to the ground, and opened up a fissure, where darkness and poison poured out.All that came with it was destruction, coldness, and despair. To speed up the spreading of the darkness, the dark Navi created an explosion of darkness. On the other side of NetFrica, a woman held her baby close, and it was already very cold where she was. She was watching thenews, at an image of a map of the country. Already, 60% of it had been destroyed. She kissed her baby, and tried her best to warm it up, as it grew colder, and the darkness neared. It got so cold, that ice started tocome through the doors, like a monster, and then, a billow of darkness ripped through the house like a ragdoll. When it passed, the body of the baby and woman was ripped like paper, and pieces of flesh, muscle, and bone were pressed against the floor and some of the wall. Soon after,the darkening process was finished.

~Fright, Followed by Light~

Atarashii, observing his computer screen, saw a window pop up on his AIM.
DarkRockmanEguze: Well, Atarashii.
AtarashiiKaruu: DarkSoul...?
DarkRockmanEguze: In the data, fleshling.
AtarashiiKaruu: Wait, you've never called me that before. You only call your human vict--
DarkRockmanEguze: That's right. Nation X is next on my list to turn on my own. Well.. I'll be taking overboth Nation X and the area your brother works at--Ameroupe.
AtarashiiKaruu: I don't believe you.
DarkRockmanEguze: Believe this....
DarkSoul appeared on the computer, and waved. "Bye bye," And then a lamp beside him exploded. Or, at least the bulb.
Atarashii only pounded his fist into the desk. "Damnit to Hell!" That's when Barrel IMed him:
BarrelTheImmortal: Atarashii, brother.
AtarashiiKaruu: Barrel? You've come at a bad time.
BarrelTheImmortal: I know.. Did DS IM you, too?
AtarashiiKaruu:Yes, he did. He threatened that he'd destroy both of our contries next.
BarrelTheImmortal: I think something should be done about this. You're great at making powerful chips.. Colonel and I are light. Can you see something here?
AtarashiiKaruu: Me? Work with you? I decline the offer.
BarrelTheImmortal: But, do you want Nation X to be annihlated?
AtarashiiKaruu: ....
BarrelTheImmortal: I take that as a yes. I'm coming over. Meet me in front of the Nation X Air Force base in 3 hours.

~Joining of Two Sides~

Exactly 2 hours and 45 minutes later, Atarashii began to make his way toward the specified area. Right after Barrel got there, they saw an odd looking girl sitting on top of a building.
"Who are you?!" Atarashii called. There was no answer. Barrel turned to Atarashii. "Looking at that futuristic clothing, she's probably one of your soldiers. If she isn't, she won't be able to bypass security." "I guess you're right. I wonder what she's doing with that paper.. We don't really do much writing in this time period." Barrel's eyes widened, after the sound of a click was heard. "Atarashii, get down..NOW!" Barrel pushed Atarashii down, and pulled out a handgun, shooting something. A red laser just bearly passed them, and Barrel sighed. "Someone's trying to assasinate one of us..." Atarashii ended Barrel's sentence, pulling out a gun of his own. "Or both of us. Fine, I'll work with you on that chip." They turned their backs to the new girl, and they looked to where the laser blast came from.... "KANZEN!?" Kanzen only laughed, blowing the smoke off of his laser gun, which had a bullet going through it, thanks to Barrel. "Yes, me. Atarashii... You took my chance at becomning General! If I kill you, then..." Atarashii jumped in front of Kanzen, smacked the gun out of his hand, and grasped his hands, pulling them back painfully. They snapped, and Kanzen screamed. "You know the concequences for trying to assasinate a General..Or a Colonel. I'll see to it that you'll get your punishment later." Kanzen was soon taken away by a few soldiers.Soon, they began to work on their chip. In 3 days time, it was finished, actually.. This new chip was the 'Light Chip'. "Now that it's done.. I'll find out where DarkSoul is." Atarashii said, getting on a computer. "Heh. No need for that, Atarashii. I'm already here." DS' image appeared on the computer. But Atarashii worked fast, and inserted the Light Chip, causing the DarkLoid to scream in pain. "I'll get you..fleshling!! Later!" He teleported away. Barrel looked over. "That worked well...Much better than I thought." "I agree... He's not dead yet, though."

~The Fight Between the Darkness and the Teal Caped Warrior~

They were right. It was only an hour until DarkSoul struck again, creating a D-Area.This time, he was attacking the very building that girl was on. There was quite a bit of people in this building, too. Of course, DS saw the girl, and it urged him even more to attack it. "Taste this..!! DarkSword!" he activated the Chip, and before he struck, he saw somehing teal, with a bit of gold. This postponed his attack, but afterwards, he went to attack again. His sword started to go down, to release a sonic blast, but a blade hit the middle of DarkSoul's raised it back, and made DarkSoul's arm go back. With this bit of time, the same hand used to counter DS' attack gripped his neck. "I would advise you not attack..." DarkSoul turned his eyes to look at his assilant. "Just, Who the HELL are you!?" "Kraft. Do you know just who is in there?" "Yes. A bunch of humans!" "Exactly.. And who is on top of this very building?" "I don't know, and I don't care. She's going to die." "Her name is Neige. And I'm not going to allow that sort of thing to happen..." "Oh, yeah!?" DarkSoul pulled the hand away, and jumped back. The new, so called 'Navi' did so as well. DarkSoul grinned, showing his fangs. "You shouldn't pick a fight with me, the mighty DarkSoul! I'll tear you to shreds!" "Don't think lowly of my abilities, ethier. I can do more than you think. By the way..My name is Kraft." "Psh! Let's see!" After throwing his cape off, Kraft revealed a large gun strapped to his back. The two dashed at eachother, and DarkSoul was amazed that Kraft was just as fast as he was. "So, you're as fast as I am.. Big deal!" Kraft jumped away, just as DarkSoul passed him, slicing with his DarkSword. "Nice move, DarkSoul.. But this one's better." Putting a hand behind his head, he pulled off his weapon, aimed as he was falling to the ground, landed on his feet, and something at DarkSoul, though it was a little too fast for any human to see. DarkSoul went to the side, and there as an explosion. "Didn't hit me, big guy!" "I think I did." DarkSoul felt something sharp pinch into his back. Shrapnel. "Damn...Smart!" DarkSoul's cuts regenerated, though. During this time, Kraft moved behind DarkSoul. "Dark Soul.. Turn around!" he called from behind. Of course, DS turned to look. He found a bright red light pointed to his head. "Say cheese."Kraft fired a blue laser at DarkSoul, which he bearly dodged. His hair though, wasn't so lucky. It had a hole singed right through it. "You're the best fighter I've seen in a long while, Kraft." "Well... I'm just good at this sort of thing." "I can see..Kraft." The two continued to duke it out, and the entire time, Atarashii was watching.

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~The Shadow Of Death~

The D-Area went down as DS teleported away, but oddly enough, Craft remained in the Real World. He only looked to the red haired girl. "Neige, are you OK?" "Sure, I'm fine." she replied, standing. "That was a great fight you two had." Someone cleared their throat, from behind Craft. Upon turning, he saw that it was Atarashii. "So..Craft... You aren't a NetNavi..Unless you're a Copyroid." "Which I am not. I am a battle Reploid. I was trapped here, but Neige came with me, in an attempt to save me," Craft replied. Soon, Neige joined him. "We were thrown into a portal.. From someone..." Craft nodded. "We have reason to believe it's Wiel, but aren't completley sure." Atarashii shrugged. "I have no comprehension of your world... So." The red haired girl, Neige looked back, and saw some shadowed hand grab her mouth, and her arm. She was drug into the shadows, before anyone could see what she was looking at. Of course, Craft ran after whoever it was, but Neige and her assilant seemed to sink into shadow. Before the two went off, the shadow seemed to speak: "I'll be taking her off your hands, Craft.. Haha!" Craft growled, took out his gun. "I don't think you'll be taking anyone ANYwhere. Especaially when that person is NEIGE!" Before firing, he paused, as he knew Neige was in there, too. So he didn't fire. " and go off at even a speed Craft couldn't go at. Atarashii looked to Craft, after he stopped. "Neige has been taken away... But it doesn't mean we won't find her again." Craft lowered his head, in a sort of a nodding motion. "Hai. But, who was that person who took her?" Barrel sighed, "We'll find out, I'm sure."

~Argument with a Drunkard!~

A week after the incident with Neige, Craft found a D-Area surrounding the city he was in. A NetNavi with a rather dark aura appeared, and immedietley went for Craft. Craft dodged her quickly. "..." The lay Navi chuckled. "I am Taishuka!" [Heavy Drinker] Craft blinked, as Taishuka took out a bottle and started drinking it. She sluggishly waved the bottle around, and hiccuped. "You're pretty good on your feet for someone who drinks. This will be an easy battle." Taishuka grinned. "Well, I was sent by DarkSoul, or whoever he is.. If you delete me.. Your Neige goes bye bye!" "So..DarkSoul took her. Besides..Taishuka, I wouldn't use my ammo on someone like you! I hate alcoholics." The D-Area went down, and Craft sighed. "What an amazing day.. I'll have to find Atarashii, and tell him about this."

~Trip to the DarkNet!~

Soon, Craft met with Atarashii. But, Barrel had gone. He had other matters to attend to.. "Atarashii-san. I have news to tell you.." "What is it, Craft?" "Seemd that DarkSoul and his goonies have taken Neige... But to where?" Atarashii gave a rare smile. All of his smiles were creepy, though. "I know exactly where she is. The DarkNet." Craft blinked. "But, how do we get there?" "Trust me... I am a D.Chip and D.Soul scientist. I KNOW how ro get to the DarkNet. I stole some of the data from Sharo's computers, to make something.... They wouldn't let me use theirs, so I made my own." Atarashii took off the cover to something, and it revealed a large gun. "This is the Gun Del Sol ²."

~Enter - Django!~

Someone stood on top of a building, a red scarf waving in the wind. He held up a gun, which gleamed in the sunlight. Beside him, was something that looked like a sunflower. This was Django and Otenko. He charged energy as the large gun where Atarashii was turned on, and shot at the bigger gun after the coordinated were set for a portal to the DarkNet... He shot, and when the blast of light hit the large Gun Del Sol ², it fire off a big blast toward the portal. Upon hitting it, Atarashii had Craft teleport in front of it, and go into the DarkNet.

~Save her, Dummy!~
Craft looked around, and observed the place which was called the DarkNet. "Intr..esting... I guess they like it cold here..Or else it's winter time here." A scream made his eyes widen, and then he bolted to a large, dark palace. "Neige..I'm coming." Upon entering the gigantic building, he spotted the redhead against a wall, blood dripping down her face fom a cut. DS was standing in front of her, holding a double bladed knife that was serrated on both sides. Craft cleared his throat, and he pulled out his gun, and activated the bayonet on it. Soon, it was pressed against the DarkLoid's neck. "You call that a knife? Mine is better." He sliced DS off of Neige, and set her down. Neige gave a sigh of relief. "You know, you could have come sooner." After another fight with DS and Craft, Craft and Neige went out of the DarkNet. Only to find the Django and Otenko that helped power up the GunDelSol².... Django only held up a hand to the tall Reploid. "I see you fared well against DS." Craft nodded, and shook hands. "Why did you come here?" Django pointed to a large, bright sign. "I have come to take you home. I use this to purify Vampires, but this is also how I come to and from my, and other worlds...I can take you home like this..."Neige blinked, and lowered her head. "I wonder what has happened since we've been gone." Django pointed to the middle of it. "Just stand in the middle of that." With caution, the two approached the said spot.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 12:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, pretty good! Just don't forget that when each charcter speaks, you need to create a new paragraph for each speaker. I really like the storyline too. It's a bit fast-paced, though. It's a great story, but I believe it could be even better if you slowed down a bit and put more detail into it. But, enough with the rants. I like this story quite a bit, so keep it up, 'k? ^^
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

the moral of the story is that all your base are belong to Craft :]
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 11:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bleh, I'll update Monday, for sure. I'mma be busy all weekend. And also, Athrun..
DS: All your military base are belong to me! XD
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK, updated. I put a huge line stopping the old stuff from the new in the first post to help out..Sorry if there isn't much..I've been sick all day... Wahaha.. I dunno if I should put Weil in or not. I don't think I'd be good at him..What do you think I should do, guys?
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