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"At least they can't call me bat ears anymore." Forte remarked, and advanced in the dungeon he woke up in.
HA. One of the various things I like about your fics: There's always a line or two in them to make me laugh out loud. XD
Whoa. You gave Forte red hair? I never thought of that aspect... I always assumed he had purple or silver hair. Red's a cool hair color for him. o.O
I'm focusing too much on Forte. <.< Getting back to the main story, this is pretty good so far. Rockman seemed a bit out of character at the beginning of the first chapter, but it doesn't miff me too much. I've never played Wind Waker (more or less any of the Zelda games besides the first one for N64), so it's kind of a treat to get some of the Wind Waker plot mixed with Rockman characters. XD _________________
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Due to a small technical error, my computer will be in repair for a few days (On my parents comp right now.) Therefore, I can't type without them looking over my shoulder or saving it. I'll post new chapters as soon as my computer gets repaired. I'm putting this message in my other fic as well. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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ZOMG an update!!1! This one's for you, Django!!!
Chapter 04:Forte and Django
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Forte landed on an island far away from the dungeon he just left.
There was a sign that said "Welcome to Windfall Island!"
It was pretty late, and it was raining outside. Forte grunted and wished his helmet hadn't been destroyed. He headed twoards a cafe and opened the door. Inside, the cafe was full of people, all talking and gossiping. No one looked at Forte like he was unusual.
Since my helmet was destroyed and my cloak is covering my body, they must think I'm human. As much as I hate it, I'll have to play along with it for now. Forte though.
He sat down and looked outside at the ocean while rain pelted it.
"How am I going to get back to my world..." He asked.
Forte noticed a huge black shape in the distance. Was it getting bigger? Forte's eyes widened in shock as a huge octopus-like creature sped towards Windfall Island and rammed into it. Everyone shrieked in terror.
"Dammit! That thing'll kill everyone here..." He said.
He heard the clatter of a plate and silverware as someone stood up. Forte turned to see a young boy wearing light brown shorts, a grey shirt, a red scarf, and goggles stand up. He had wild yellow hair and black eyes, plus a strange gun-like weapon hanging by his waist. He grabbed the gun out.
"Thank you for the meal!" He said to the waitress on his way out of the cafe.
Forte watched from the window as the boy dashed down to the octopus. He aimed his gun at the octopus and fired. To Forte's surprise, the gun shot sunlight out, that harmed the huge beast. The octopus's flailing tentacles smacked into the boy and knocked him down. Forte leapt from the window to the outside ground.
He swished his cloak aside and shouted "Dark Arm Blades!"
The twin swords of darkness appeared in Forte's hand. He cut off two of the octopus's tentacles before they smashed the boy. Forte landed and turned to the boy.
"Are you okay?" He asked. The boy nodded and got up.
"Yeah. Thanks." He said.
He got into a fighting position and Forte turned to face the shrieking octopus.
"How do we defeat this thing?" He asked.
"I don't have an idea, really." The boy said.
Forte scanned the beast.
"Maybe...it's his eyes?" Forte asked.
He withdrew his blades.
"Hell's Rolling!" He shouted, and threw two darkness wheels at two eyes. The eyes glowed red, and then turned black.
This seemed to cause lots of pain to the octopus. The boy launched a huge ray of sunlight from his gun into several of the octopus's eyes. The ray was so powerful it caused the eyes to burst open. Forte unleashed a Darkness Overload into the final eye. The octopus shrieked and fell down before exploding in a poof of smoke.
"It's gone." Forte said.
He turned to the boy.
"Thanks for your help." The boy said. "My name's Django."
Forte nodded and replied "I'm Forte. If you don't mind, I have a small favor to ask you." He said.
"What is it?" Django asked.
"Before I came here, I found myself in a place that was dungeon-like. Several undead creature wandered it, and some areas and creatures could only be destroyed by light. Will you help me get through that dungeon?" Forte asked.
Django nodded.
"That is fine by me. However, there is one problem: I have no methods of transportation." He said.
Forte replied "That's not a problem."
He clapped his hands together.
"Come, Gospel!" Forte shouted, and the area started to rumble.
Out of the water, Gospel arose and roared.
"I hope you don't mind riding on my dog?" Forte asked.
Django stared at Gospel in amazement.
"No, not at all. It's amazing how you have control over such a monstrous beast." He said.
Forte grinned.
"You're not the first to say that." He said.
"Gospel! Lower your head!"
Gospel did so, allowing Django and Forte to get on.
"It'd be better if we had sunny weather outside." Django said.
He put down the GunDelSol and raised his hand skywards. Instantly, a beam of sunlight shot up and pierced the clouds. Then more sunbeams shot down through the clouds. Django pointed in a direction, and the sunbeams circled down a path following where Django pointed, clearing the clouds. He pointed in another direction, and kept clearing out clouds until the skies were clear.
"Amazing..." Forte said.
He looked forwards.
"Gospel! Head to the dungeon!"
Gospel howled and ran off.
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Django and Forte reached the island where the temple was. They jumped off Gospel and entered the temple. Then they entered a room where there was a sun-like face glowering down at them, and there was an eerie blue mist beneath it.
"Careful of that mist. It'll curse you to the point where you can do nothing but move your feet." Forte said.
Django said "Hmm...I wonder if..."
He pulled out his GunDelSol and blasted the mist. I mostly went away, but reformed after awhile.
"Maybe if we had some way to light up the whole room..." He thought out loud.
Than he looked at the face.
"Forte. Take my GunDelSol for a second." He said.
Forte took the gun. Django blasted one of the eyes with sunlight from his palm.
"Forte! Blast it's other eye with the GunDelSol!" Django shouted.
Forte nodded and blasted the eye with sunlight. Instantly the whole room shone and the mist disappeared. Forte gave his gun back to Django.
"Look, a door appeared." Forte said, pointing to the door that was hidden by the mist.
Both of them proceeded through it. Next was a room where several ChuChus appeared.
"I can handle this." Forte said.
"EarthBreaker!" He destroyed all of the ChuChus except for one dark one.
"Persistant bastard, aren't we?" Forte asked as he smacked the Dark ChuChu with a Dark Arm Blade.
It shattered into pieces and reformed without being hurt. Than it tackled Forte.
"Dammit..." He said.
Django got an idea.
"Forte, try luring it into a pose where I can blast only it sunlight." He said.
Forte got up and nodded. He got into a position where Django could see both him and the Dark ChuChu clearly. The Dark ChuChu jumped at Forte, but Forte guarded himself with an aura.
"Can't Touch This." He said, smiling evilly.
Django blasted the Dark ChuChu win sunlight, turning it to stone.
"All yours." He said.
Forte dropped his aura and formed dark energy in his hand. The dark energy formed into a gigantic hammer of darkness.
"HAMMER TIME!!!" He said, and proceed to smash the Dark ChuChu into bits.
Forte dispelled the Dark Hammer.
"Alright." He said, grinning.
"Django, I have a feeling this dungeon is going to be easy to get through."
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Both he and Django had proceeded to the final room of the dungeon. They saw several ghosts, now known as Poes, dancing around a mask in the room. They all saw the two, panicked, and jumped into the mask. It all formed a giant ghost, known as Jahalla.
"That thing looks sickening." Forte said.
"Let's take it down." Django said.
The ghost breathed fire on them, hurting them and burning off Forte's cape. Django looked at Forte in surprise.
"You..." He said.
"I know. I'm not human." Forte said.
Django returned to his normal expression.
"Ah well, it doesn't matter. Race doesn't change a friendship." He said.
He thinks of me...as a friend? Forte though.
All of the sudden, Jahalla pinned Forte to a wall. Forte struggled, but he couldn't harm the ghost.
"Put him down!" Django shouted and blasted Jahalla.
The ghost shouted as it turned solid. It than turned and tackled Django, hurting the boy immensly. Django shouted out in pain as blood spurted out of his mouth.
"DON'T TOUCH HIM!!!" He shouted, and blasted Jahalla with a Darkness Overload, sending the ghost flying into a spiked column.
Forte dashed over to Django.
"Are you okay?" He asked, leaning down.
"Yeah...barely..." Django said, limping up.
Jahalla loomed over them. Django blasted it with the GunDelSol, making it solid again. Forte placed his aura over Django and leapt up into the air. A huge Gospel head formed on his arm.
"Get ready for oblivion, asshole! VANISHING WORLD!!!" Forte shouted, and blasted Jahalla.
The ghost was completely destroyed. Forte landed and helped Django regain his composure.
"We did it..." Django said.
Forte smiled.
"Yeah. Looks like we don't make such a bad team." He said.
Clapping could be heard.
"Bravo. Looks like a ghost such as that was easy for you two." A voice said.
Both of them looked in that direction. Django pointed his gun to the shadows.
"Show yourself!" He said.
"I'm sure I'll prove much more diffucult than a wisp such as the on you just fought." The person said, after walking out of the shadows.
"Sabata!!!" Django gasped.
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Napalmman and Tomahawkman walked towards a white temple in the distance. Up above them, the sky looked as though it were water. The whole land seemed deserted, they had only encountered monsters so far. Napalmman read the sign.
"Hyrule Castle, 2 miles ahead." He read out loud.
"Let's go. We might find something worthwhile." Tomahawkman said.
"...Or, it might end up to be completely empty, like other areas we visited." Napalmman said.
"Aw, what do you know?" Tomahawkman said.
"Hey, I know things you've never seen!" Napalmman replied.
"Really? Like what?" Tomahawkman questioned.
"You ever seen someone taking a shit while running speed?" Napalmman replied.
Tomahawkman looked at Napalmman with a disgusted look.
"I don't think I want to." He said.
Both of them stepped up to Hyrule Castle. They entered it and gasped at what they saw.
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 9:57 am Post subject: |
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AWESOME, CFS!! :D It was funny how you made TomahawkMan an NapalmMan argue. And the boss matchup was great: pitting Django and Forte against Jalhalla. But when does Molgera come in? And are TomahawkMan and NapalmMan going to visit the Wind Temple? And what of Rockman and Link?
Sorry for the long post, but I am really curious. Anyhow, GREAT JOB, man!! ^__^ _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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[Computer Error] _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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[Computer Error] _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 10:01 am Post subject: |
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Woah, did you hit submit 3 times? NM it doesn't matter. Molgera...he'll be in there eventually. Tomahawkman and Napalmman at the wind temple...hmm, maybe. And as for Rockman and Link, they'll be in the next chapter. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
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!! WTF!? I think I did hit it 3 times. My computer is really slow, so I thought I just didn't hit it. I'll see if I can get rid of them. _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 10:12 am Post subject: |
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It's fine, I've done it myself a few times. Just edit the posts to say somethnig like "Accidental double post" or "Submit button was hit too many times" _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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Or just try to be more patient when you're posting something. Hammering the submit button won't make the posting faster. _________________
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Great Fan Fic CFS, one of the better ones i've read anyway.
Just one thing that really screws with it though, everyone seems out of character...
Would'nt Forte just let the Octopus kill everyone, he does hate mankind afterall, since Wily framed Forte for Proto's crimes.
Also, I was under the impression only a solar boy such as Django and Ringo could fire the Gun Del Sol.
And could'nt Forte just fly to the Forsaken Fortress, seeing as how his Navi Cust seems to be equipped with Float Shoes.
Another thing, how could Treble get to the area? I find it hard to believe that Gannon could bring him thier, for one thing if Gannon became digitized thru some modified mind pulse system, Treble would break his data down and absorb it.
One more thing, isn't it called a Gospel, or Treble Cannon, rather then Gospel/Treble head?
I also have to wonder why Forte would team up with Django...
I have many other questions/complaints, but i'll spare you. |
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
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Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:05 am Post subject: |
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HyperZeroX wrote: | Great Fan Fic CFS, one of the better ones i've read anyway.
Just one thing that really screws with it though, everyone seems out of character...
Would'nt Forte just let the Octopus kill everyone, he does hate mankind afterall, since Wily framed Forte for Proto's crimes.
Also, I was under the impression only a solar boy such as Django and Ringo could fire the Gun Del Sol.
And could'nt Forte just fly to the Forsaken Fortress, seeing as how his Navi Cust seems to be equipped with Float Shoes.
Another thing, how could Treble get to the area? I find it hard to believe that Gannon could bring him thier, for one thing if Gannon became digitized thru some modified mind pulse system, Treble would break his data down and absorb it.
One more thing, isn't it called a Gospel, or Treble Cannon, rather then Gospel/Treble head?
I also have to wonder why Forte would team up with Django...
I have many other questions/complaints, but i'll spare you. |
My theories:
Forte couldn't fly to the Forsaken Fortress because of 2 reasons; the Helmaroc King ready to blow him apart, and even if he could destroy him from that far away, there is an immensley dark power surrounding it.
Forte could've used GunSol because remember, he and Rockman fused for a while with the Great Program thing, and Rockman can use the GunSol, Django, and SP chips.
Forte could've joined Django because Django can help him turn good.
And it really is called Gospel, because if it was a cannon, than that would mean Forte's about to use Vanishing World.
Since Gospel and Forte are one and the same, Gospel could, in fact, appear anywhere. (Hence the Vanishing World attack in MMBN3)
Forte probably didn't let the octopus destroy WindFall Island because he was worried that Django might be killed.
Whew... -.- But these are my theories, CFS. What do you think? _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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CrossFusionStarman Seras Victoria owns me
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Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 9:33 am Post subject: |
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Okay, let's clear these things up.
It was actually the Earth temple Forte was trying to get to, and while yes, he could fly there, in chapter 02 he was getting his assed handed to him, so he left to find someone to help him. Also, He summoned Gospel because although he could fly there, Django couldn't.
In Chapter 02, Forte had a small near-death experience where he realized that human-kind wasn't all that bad.
As for only Django using GunDelSol, I'm not too good with Boktai things. But let's go with Django's theory :stonecube:
And yes, Django hit it dead on. since Forte and Gospel are one after EXE3, Forte can summon Gospel at any time(At least, that's the impression I got from EXE3.)
As for the Gospel Head thing, I don't think they ever called it Treble. I called it a head because, well, he really did pull out a head.
Oh, and Forte joined with Django because after seeing his GunDelSol and control over sunlight, he realized that this might be the one person he needs to get through the Earth temple. Right now, Forte's getting a little more friendly with everyone because of the time he's spending with Django.
Don't worry, HyperZeroX. I'm glad you liked the fic and that you're asking questions. I like it when people are curious about some of the stuff I write. And those are good theories Django, most of them hit dead on. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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CrossFusionStarman wrote: | Okay, let's clear these things up.
It was actually the Earth temple Forte was trying to get to, and while yes, he could fly there, in chapter 02 he was getting his assed handed to him, so he left to find someone to help him. Also, He summoned Gospel because although he could fly there, Django couldn't.
In Chapter 02, Forte had a small near-death experience where he realized that human-kind wasn't all that bad.
As for only Django using GunDelSol, I'm not too good with Boktai things. But let's go with Django's theory :stonecube:
And yes, Django hit it dead on. since Forte and Gospel are one after EXE3, Forte can summon Gospel at any time(At least, that's the impression I got from EXE3.)
As for the Gospel Head thing, I don't think they ever called it Treble. I called it a head because, well, he really did pull out a head.
Oh, and Forte joined with Django because after seeing his GunDelSol and control over sunlight, he realized that this might be the one person he needs to get through the Earth temple. Right now, Forte's getting a little more friendly with everyone because of the time he's spending with Django.
Don't worry, HyperZeroX. I'm glad you liked the fic and that you're asking questions. I like it when people are curious about some of the stuff I write. And those are good theories Django, most of them hit dead on. |
One last thing to clear up Shin Bokura No Taiyou.
Only a Solar Boy can fire the Gun Del Sol, they even state it at the beggining of the second game.
Right now only two people can fire it, Red Ringo, and Django. |
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Oh, I see. Hmm, but in the EXE5 games, all the navis you control can use it, so I'm going by the fact that any navi can use it as well. _________________ EXEHQ. Click now, I demand it.
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CrossFusionStarman wrote: | Oh, I see. Hmm, but in the EXE5 games, all the navis you control can use it, so I'm going by the fact that any navi can use it as well. |
My theory:
The battle chip version of Gun Del Sol, is only a digitized version, and not the original which Django owns in Shin Bokura No Taiyou.
Which would mean, Forte can't fire the original version. |
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Fic revival > Seriously, I want to thank DjangoSP. He gave me a great idea for this fic, and if it weren't for him, this thing'd still be dead right now. Just a slight recap that this continues immidiately after Tomahawkman and Napalmman enter Hyrule temple. So...chapter commence!
Chapter 05:Destined For The Sword.
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The whole temple was completely stone. Several monsters were frozen as stone statues, not moving.
"What on Earth...?" Napalmman asked.
Tomahawkman poked one of the statues and accidentally knocked it over. It shattered, making both navis jump.
"Dumbass! Don't touch the statues!!!" Napalmman scolded, and smacked Tomahawkman upside the head with one of his gun arms.
"Okay, okay! Ow..." Tomahawkman said, rubbing his head.
Both of them proceeded down the steps and saw three triangle blocks.
"Those look pretty odd..." Tomahawkman said.
"Hey, look on the floor." Napalmman said.
Both looked down and saw black, triangle shaped designs.
"I'm guessing we have to move these triangles over the floor designs?" Tomahawkman asked.
"No shit, sherlock." Napalmman said.
"Oh, shut it." Tomahawkman said.
Both of them moved the triangles to their proper places, and the huge statue moved aside, revealing a staircase.
"Ooookaaay...this just gets wierder and wierder." Napalmman said, and both of them went downstairs.
It looked like an underground church, and in the middle, a sword stood in a pedestal.
"Woah, that's pretty damn freaky looking." Napalmman said.
"Why don't you try to lift the sword out?" Tomahawkman said, and got another whack from Napalmman's gun arm.
"I don't have hands, idiot!!!" Napalmman shouted.
"Geez, someone's cranky..." Tomahawkman said.
"Well, I'll try to lift it." He added, wrapping his hands around the blade.
Tomahawkman pulled up and the sword came out.
"Hey, I did it!" Tomahawkman said cheerfully.
Suddenly, the knight statues all around him placed their swords out in a circle, creating a skylight around Tomahawkman. And than, everything returned to color.
"What just happened?" Napalmman asked.
"I don't know. Let's get out of here." Tomahawkman replied.
Both of them went upstairs and gasped. All that was stone had returned to normal, including the monsters. When they saw the two navis, they got ready to attack.
"Heh, a battle, eh?" Napalmman said, readying himself.
Tomahawkman put the sword in his left hand and morphed his right hand to his signature tomahawk. Suddenly, the sword and his tomahawk glowed, and the sword floating next to the tomahawk. Both navis watched in amazement as two lgihts became one. When the glow vanished, Tomahawkman's tomahawk was no longer there.
Instead, a large tomahawk with small wing-like blades at the end and the blade of the sword he found rising up from the tomahawk replaced it.
"Woah, that was unexpected." Napalmman said.
"Hey, Napalmman? Can I test this new blade out on these freaks?" Tomahawkman said, and without waiting for a reply, jumped into the horde of enemies.
Napalmman watched in awe as Tomahawkman suddenly started pulling off all sorts of acrobatic moves and amazing swordplay, slicing open the enemies armor, parrying, rolling, and slashing.
He was like a whirling tornado of death. In a few minutes, all enemies were slain.
"...How did you do that?!?" Napalmman asked.
"I...don't know..." Tomahawkman replied.
He who is the chosen one... A new voice said.
Both Tomahawkman and Napalmman looked in the direction of the voice. It was a ghost, a ghost of the same man in a picture on the temple walls that was labled "King Of Hyrule."
"Waitaminute...you're the spirit of the Hyrule King!" Tomahawkman said.
"Indeed I am." King Hyrule replied.
"But why are you here before us?" Napalmman asked.
"Tomahawkman, you are the chosen one." King Hyrule said, indirectly answering Napalmman's question.
"Chosen one? For what?"
"To wield the Master Sword, the Bane of Evil. Have you not noticed it has fused with your weapon?" King Hyrule said.
"You're right..." Tomahawkman said.
"Tomahawkman...a great evil has brought you, Napalmman, and several other friends of yours to my world. If you wish to return, trust in that blade, and defeat the great evil."
Napalmman interjected "But...where is this evil you speak of?"
"First, explore this sunken land of Hyrule. When you reach the Royal Valley, enter the tomb of the king before me, and you shall go to the surface world. At that point, you will know what to do." King Hyrule said.
Tomahawkman got down on one knee.
"Thank you, your majesty." Tomahawkman said, and King Hyrule disappeared.
Tomahawkman got back up.
"Well, let's go to that Royal Valley place he spoke of!!!" Tomahawkman said cheerfully.
"Wow. You never cease to amaze me with your sudden atitude changes." Napalmman said.
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Rockman was on Link's boat with they boy, and they were sailing the Great Sea.
"Hey Link?" Rockman asked.
"Yeah?" Link replied.
"We're in a whirlpool..."
Link looked over his boat's side. They were indeed, in a whirlpool.
"Uh, this isn't a good thing, is it?" Rockman said.
"Yeah, because whenever you're in a whirlpool, a---"
A gigantic octopus that was almost as big as an island itself popped up from the depths.
"---giant octopus comes to try and kill you." Link finished.
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NapalmMan was hilarious and Tomahawkman wielding the master sword is awesome. Youre fusion of Zelda and Rockman is wonderful and all of the characters are well portrayed. NapalmMan's "no shit, sherlock" line was funny and I can picture him saying it. Keep up the good work CFS. _________________
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DjangoSP The True Solar Boy
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Excellent work, CFS!!! :D You described the part with Tomahawkman and Napalmman perfectly!! And now, Rockman and Link are going to battle those squid things? (Sorry, I forgot their name, I haven't played Wind Waker in a while) -_-;. Anyway, great job, and I hope you write more soon!!! ^_^ _________________ I am Solar Boy Django! TAIYOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!
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