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shadien Net Agent
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 218 Location: Sudbury, Ontario
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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You did work for a long time so i will reply:
-the animations are not constant. Hole is the coloring appear as of nowhere.
-taking that you just took a megaman sprite and added features it's not exacly a new sprite just a new animation.
-don't get discouraged though cause you are going to get better. You should have seen my first mangnetman soul... -_-;
-I do believe that you worked hard. It is hard to use firefox or flash.(or for me it is) I can't use it at all.
-Good job and keep practicing you'll eventually be able to get to add-ons to using basses, to scratch then pro if you want.
Don't give up! |
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ProtoSword.EXE Banned, obviously
Joined: 07 Oct 2005 Posts: 160 Location: Liberating the net
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 2:56 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you! But I need to ask a question. Considering the aniamtion that I made of Megaman reaching Saturn, I need to know how it looks like inside the planet. Could you tell me? Because if there isn't anything inside the planet, I'll have to do a different one. :/ |
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 12:18 am Post subject: |
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Snare wrote: | But saturns gravitational pull would crush megaman and his rocket! Plus, the planet it made of gas! |
I think that qoute from Snare should answer your question, and the qoute was taken from the last post on the first page. I think that you might want to read the comments more closely, also don't be afraid to redo the work that you are doing with the suggestions people are making to correct the errors they are finding.
I can see some errors in your new animations that are in the previous ones that you have yet to fix, also in some of the animations you can see the bubble helmet changing shape to be pointed in some frames. _________________
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ProtoSword.EXE Banned, obviously
Joined: 07 Oct 2005 Posts: 160 Location: Liberating the net
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 3:43 pm Post subject: |
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I see, that's why I made this one instead.
So THIS is why Megaman was going to the planets, he was studying and observing them! He seems to be observing Saturn's rings. Guess he's just getting info. for Dr. Light! I wonder what's next...?
Looks like Megaman's done with studying Saturn's rings, looks like he's heading back to Earth probably...?
Looks like he's made it to Jupiter! Why he didn't head to Jupiter before Saturn was beyond me! Better be careful, Megaman! We don't want to lose you if you go into that Big Red Spot!
Megaman is observing the Big Red Spot(I don't how it's like inside it, this is my theory of it)And what a storm it is! Good thing Megaman is studying it while being protected by a powerful barrier!
(I guess this one was a mistake. Jupiter has no surface, and heck if we know how it's like inside that storm...)
I'm thinking Megaman's done with everything! Looks like he's heading back home!
And if you were wondering about Protoman, he's STILL STUCK IN MARS!!! And he can't get out! Poor guy...
And so, that ends series 2 of the SpaceMegaman animations! Thank you all for watching! :D
Some of the animation errors is probably due to the size of the picture! The animations are choppy because the pics are over-sized. That flattens the animation, so that must be the problem! :/ |
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:40 pm Post subject: |
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You have made at least one improvement to a sprite that I can see, but I still see errors. One that I lacked to mention because I thought it was obvious was the rocket, which looks like something made by my young cousin playing with her finger paints. I wouldn't even classify it as a sprite, and I had hoped that in all the comments made that you would have gone back and worked on that in addition to what was pointed out as being wrong.
Some of the images look like they are blurred now, which I can only guess comes from the format that you saved them in. Judging from the distortion I'm guessing you are saving some of your work in the JPG format, which is not friendly to sprites. Try saving them in PNG or GIF format after making new ones to replace those that have been deformed.
The reason for posting work here is not just to show it to others, but to get feedback on it, and how it might be improved. The fact that you seem to be just plowing ahead without even a thought to the comments made that point out errors for you to work on is kind of disheartening. At the least try to improve on your work and address the errors that are pointed out, pushing them off on a program that you are using is not an excuse for many of the errors that others and myself are seeing in your work, because the errors are in the sprite maker and animator not the program. _________________
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ProtoSword.EXE Banned, obviously
Joined: 07 Oct 2005 Posts: 160 Location: Liberating the net
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 7:09 pm Post subject: |
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Gosh, Core, thanks you for your help! :D |
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Magicman DX Nebula
Joined: 04 Jul 2005 Posts: 647 Location: long.... long.... ago in the far.... far.... away
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Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 3:18 am Post subject: |
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hmm it's much better than the last one....!!! _________________
The Revenge of Dianna the D.N.A. Doll |
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ProtoSword.EXE Banned, obviously
Joined: 07 Oct 2005 Posts: 160 Location: Liberating the net
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Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 5:33 pm Post subject: |
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I'm now making new animations of Megaman, this time, not in Space. Instead, he's going to another place on Earth--by crossing the ocean! Here's the first one!
As Megaman stands at the beach, with the ocean across(It's either the Pacific or Atlantic, since they're my favorite, I couldn't decide which)he waves goodbye to us as he will be leaving us! He'll be crossing the ocean by boat(I guess he doesn't want to use plane). So, if there's anything you need to say to Megaman before he leaves, now is the time! GOOD BYE, MEGAMAN!!! BE CAREFUL ON YOUR TRIP!!! :D
Yes, Megaman is crossing the ocean. I'm surprised to see nobody's going with him. I hope you be careful, Megaman! The ocean is a BIG place! |
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ProtoSword.EXE Banned, obviously
Joined: 07 Oct 2005 Posts: 160 Location: Liberating the net
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 7:48 pm Post subject: |
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Alot of new animations today! Check 'em out!
Well, Megaman has started his big ride in the ocean, so I guess there's no more goodbyes from now on. Well, until he reaches his destination(If I'm mistaken, I'd say he's in the Atlantic). Megaman, I wish you good luck! The Atlantic has harsh winds and lots of storms, so be careful!
While Megaman is still riding his boat in the depths of the Atlantic Ocean, yep that's the one, he watches the beautiful sunset. It's not the only one he'll see. He'll still be gone for a few days. He better be careful now, cause it's getting dark!
Well, it's dark now in the Atlantic, and Megaman continues his ride in the Atlantic. It's a good thing his boat has a flashlight! And check out the beautiful stars! Hopefully Megaman should get some rest, he's not just gonna be riding the ocean wide awake without sleep.
Looks like Megaman's trip is getting longer and longer, but hopefully, he'll be alright.
If I'm mistaken, he's probably gotten this far already.
He's still got a long way to go. *praying* Megaman, please be careful!
Looks like Megaman's finally getting some rest, but it looks like he's driving with his feet now. Hopefully he'll still be on the look out! Good night, Megaman, and be careful!
Well, good morning, Megaman, or good mornings.
Looks like he's back on the run. I'm thinking he's THIS far in his trip!
Wow...! Megaman's gotten far! He's already going past the North Atlantic Basin! Way to go, Megaman, you're halfway there!
Looks like we're getting a bit of rain here today! I guess Megaman's gonna have some competition now! Megaman, PLEASE BE CAREFUL!
OMG, IT'S A STORM!!!! :meeek: Oh no, oh no, oh no.....! MEGAMAN!!!!! PROMISE US YOU'LL MAKE IT, PLEASE!!!! T_T
YES!!!!!!! Megaman made it past the storm!!! I wonder how far his is already? Let's see.
Wow!!!! Look how close Megaman is! YAY, MEGAMAN!!!! YOU'RE ALMOST THERE!!!
Megaman rests again as he seems to be getting closer to land! Way to go!
FINALLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D After a long, and perilous journey across the Atlantic, Megaman FINALLY MADE IT TO EUROPE!!!!!!!!!! I wonder what he's gonna do first? Well, it's obvious, he's gonna call Dr. Light! CONGRATULATIONS, MEGAMAN!!!!! :D
Here's a brand new animation that was to occur before Megaman got to Europe, and it looks like he's got trouble!
It appears that while Megaman is still riding in the ocean, an unexpected surprise occured! It looks like Megaman has ran into the Bermuda Triangle! What is he gonna do now?!
For those who's gonna argue with me about this, I just wanna say that I KNOW THE BERMUDA TRIANGLE ISN'T REALLY A TRIANGLE! But in the cartoons, it is! So there!
Now look what he's gonna do!
Did you ever know that when someone goes in the Triangle, they dissappear? So, why should Megaman dissappear when his charged shot can? It seems that by doing that, it goes in a time warp and then the Bermuda Triangle dissappears, leaving Megaman completely unharmed! Nice thinking, Megaman! XD
To me, I don't think it works that way, but what can I say?
I hope you'all enjoy!! |
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Core Folf Samurai
Age: 42 Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 700 Location: Frederick, Maryland
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 8:53 pm Post subject: |
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Protosword, I have tried to be patient with you in the hopes that you would improve your work and maybe listen to what others have said. This is the last action that I can take, maybe it will promote you to start taking things seriously, but I am forced to lock this thread. The reason for this is because there is a lack of trying to improve on the work you are doing, and apparent disconsern for what others tell you that you need to work on. From what I can see most of the work you are doing is not even sprite based. Sure you are using Rockman sprites, but the backgrounds and everything else involved in the animations that you are doing are not.
Also since you are posting these animations in a similar story telling fashion just like Dan Miller's comic "Kid Radd", this is basically an animated sprite comic. A lot of the images that you are posting are also rather large and stretch out the page, which means you should have just posted a link going to them rather then posting them here. Add all of these together and you can get this thread locked, as well as any other made by a member on this forum. _________________
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