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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 11:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks, the next chapter should be up around saturday, the third chapter was slightly behind schedule because I struggled with outfit design. But now everything is straightened out. The next chapter will reveal the other mechs, and weapons, along with the mechs combined form. But yes like I said thanks for the comments.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

At first I thought that this chapter wouldn't go well but when I read it, it was not bad. I really liked it when they got their mechs. I wonder what can happen next? I don't know for sure but I really want to find out.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ch 5, Beast Robo

“Spark Arm!” Sparkman shouted as he fired his attack at a light blue navi.

“Iris LIGHT!” the navi shouted and raised her arms causing Z Sparkman to scream in pain as he was flung through the air as he glew bright yellow, then exploded.

***

Z Flameman appeared in the middle of a mall. “Flame Breath!” he shouted as he fired his attack through a closed store burning it with ease.

***

“Netto, you and Meiru need to head to the mall, a Zoan navi is attacking. We’ll dispatch Iris as soon as we are able to contact her. Hopefully Enzan and Laika will be able to assist you soon.” Meijin said as soon as he received the signal.

“Ok, Meijin-san we are on the way!” Netto said as he skated in the direction of the mall.

“San wa iranai!” Meijin shouted through the PET.

***

“Hold it right there freak!” Netto shouted as him and Meiru ran up behind Z Flameman.

“Flame Breath!” Flameman shouted as he attempted to burn Netto, and Meiru up.

“Beast Chip, slotto in! Beast Up!” Netto and Meiru shouted as the flames flew towards them. They slid the chips in and transformed into their ranger forms.

“Wolf Blades!” Netto shouted as he jumped to avoid the attack. He touched his visor and pulled out the wolf head crest, and touched his chest. The light engulfed him and his blades appeared on his feet.

“Tiger Claws!” Meiru shouted as she pressed her fingers against her visor and then pulled out the tiger head crest. It exploded in light and a pair of tiger claws appeared on her hands.

***

“Enzan, Netto and Meiru are currently fighting a Zoan navi in the mall. You and Laika need to head there as soon as you can. He hasn’t transformed yet but it is only a matter of time.” Meijin said as he contacted the two net saviors.

“Right, we’ll go right away.” Enzan said as he put his PET back into his pocket and dismissed the meeting. Him and Laika, ran out of IPC and got into the limo.

***

“Phoenix Flame Slash!”

“Tortoise Aqua Blast!” Enzan and Laika shouted as they launched their weapons attacks at Z Flameman. Though Enzan’s attack did nothing to the flaming Zoanoroid, Laika’s blast from his shield/spear sent the navi through a wall.

“Enzan, Laika thanks for the help.” Meiru said as she stood up and put her hands to gather “Tiger Terra Wave!” Meiru shouted as her claws slammed into the ground and sent the ground flying towards Z Flameman.
“Electro Wolf Slicer!” Netto shouted as he skated toward the fallen navi and sliced him with his wolf blades.

As soon as Netto landed on Z Flameman he transformed. Feathers sprouted from his head, and his flames flared up. “CANDLES!” He shouted as he summoned his candles that started to burn green, and his flame changed from red to green, protecting him from Netto’s attack.

“What now? We can’t hurt him!” Netto shouted as he got up from were he landed.

“Netto-kun, allow me.” A soft voice said, the yellow ranger had just arrived and she stepped in front of Netto. In her hand was a flower. She started to use it as a flute, somehow this extinguished the flames. “Iris Staff!” she said as the flower shot out and slammed into the head of Z Flameman cracking his symbol in half.

“What the, Nooo!” Z Flameman shouted as he realized that he was about to be deleted. His crest shattered in whole and instead of being destroyed he grew, just like Z- Swordman had.

“Embers!” Z Flameman shouted and sent several yellow flames from his giant candles at the rangers.

“Beast Wolf!”

“Beast Phoenix!” Enzan and Netto shouted as soon as Z Flameman launched his attacks.

“Don’t forget about us. Beast Tortoise!”

“Beast Tiger!” Laika and Meiru shouted as they raised their hands to call on their mechs.

The four mechs ran, or flew in the case of Enzan’s mech. At the giant navi that was sending wave after wave of embers, and Flame breath attacks at them. Iris stood on the ground and watched as the others were getting their mechs clobbered. “Queen Butterfly, I call upon thee!” Iris said as she raised her flute to her facemask and started to play it. A large yellow butterfly mech flew above and started to release some sort of dust on Z Flameman putting out his candles and flame attacks.

“Iris, how about we try to take him down as one.” Enzan suggested through the com system.

“Sounds good to all of us but how?” Netto questioned.

“Like this.” Laika said as his mech stopped and folded in half to form the legs and torso.

“Coming in!” Enzan said as the Phoenix swooped down and landed on the Tortoise. The wings folded around the chest, the head tucked itself in. Netto and Meiru’s mechs leapt into the air and formed the left and right arms respectively. Then Iris leapt atop her mech and flew to where it attached to the back of the Phoenix. The head of Iris’ mech, slid so it connected to the head that just popped out of the phoenix.

“Beast Robo, Formation Complete!” they shouted as the mech struck a pose.

“Butterfly Beast Shuriken!” Iris said as the butterfly wings shot off the back and landed in the robo’s hand. The Beast Robo threw the Shuriken in the direction of Flameman. The large weapon spun straight at the enemy navi and sliced his two front legs off, then returned to the back of the Beast Robo.

The candles turned green to protect what was left of Flameman. “What now?” Netto asked his fellow rangers.

“Beast Robo Saber!” Enzan said as the image appeared on the screens. The Beast Robo brought its right hand to its waist and the Phoenix head detached to reveal a handle. The Tiger’s mouth grabbed the handle and the Phoenix opened it’s beak to generate a sword out of pure energy. Then the blade proceeded to flash a variety of colors. “Elemental Beast Slash!” The rangers shouted as the flashing blade was brought down on Flameman several times each time sending a different colored blast towards the opposing navi and his candles.

Flameman tried to use the red flame of the candles to heal himself only to be hit by the blast when he stopped the green, protective, flame. He screamed as his body exploded and the small copyroid pieces fell to the ground and burnt up.

***

Netto, Meiru, Enzan, Laika, and Iris walked into the Science Bureau’s secret hangar and stared up at the two winged mechs. “So where are ours?” Netto asked as clueless as ever.

“Netto, you realise that Joker and the other Sharo Net Saviors were the ones researching the wolf chip. Well from what we can gather from the data on the computer chip it would be better to call it the Greiga chip. The one Meijin, and your dad were deciphering is the Falzor chip.” Laika said staring up at Iris’ Queen Buterfly Mech.

“Iris do you know why your mech isn’t called Beast Butterfly?” Meiru questioned.

“Your four mechs are needed to form the Beast Robo, though mine completes it, it isn’t required in order to form it. My Mech functions as a weapon, and the helmet for the Beast Robo. It also adds the ability of flight.” Iris said, answering Meiru’s question.

“Yes but if we didn’t have the Queen Butterfly then we’d be down a very effective weapon, and useful mech.” Enzan said as he leaned against his mech. “Why were we all told to come here?”

“I think Dr. Hikari has something for us. That is the only reason I could come up with.” Laika said.

“Catch!” Yuuichirou shouted as he tossed a chip at Enzan. ”Normally when you summon your mech we are the ones who dispatches it. This chip is designed to tap into the launch commands of the mech and hangar, like our controls, and dispatch the mech with out our aid. Iris’ flute has the special ability of summoning the Queen Butterfly with out the aid of us. Netto, Meiru and Laika’s mechs use a large Dimensional Transporter program to teleport them to you and then they pick up on your remote signals and come to you. The reason for that is so they can be stored in Sharo, but reach you when you are in Japan.

“Thanks Papa.”

“Netto, this is just so you can summon the mechs with out much delay. You simply slot the chips into your PET, which can be summoned by reaching for it, and saying the name of your mech, just like summoning through the com link in your helmet. This should have a much shorter delay because we don’t have to open the hangar or release the restraints holding them in place. This will all be done by the chip.” Yuuichirou said as he turned and walked out after tossing Netto, Meiru, and Laika their chips.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Like I told you, it's pretty good. The robo sounds pretty well though out.
Are they ever going to have to fight without iris?
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is possible that they will have a fight with out Iris, she isn't needed to form the robo anyways and there will probably be a chapter where they don't use the butterfly.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 8:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good chapter. Parts I liked~ The intro of the mega-beast-zord, and other characters weapons. Parts I did not like. Attack name of Meiru's attack was a little off. Also, the ending was kinda slow. Still, it was a good chapter, and I hope the next one is even better.
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I realize that Meiru's attack is well the most off of them all, and The ending was kinda slow but I had a bit of writers block, and I worked on it for periods of like 10 minutes throughout the entire week.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ancient Trouble?

“Why are we at a boring museum. I mean why do we have to learn about ANCIENT Egypt?” Netto asked as he leaned against a wall inside the museum.

“Netto, it’s so we can learn from events in the past. Egypt was an important nation in its time. Japan is also flourishing so we don’t…” Meiru stopped as she turned to noticed the inside of the museum start to change. “What is going on?”

“Looks like something straight out of an Ancient Pyramid.” Rockman said as he noticed the doors and every thing change.

“ Pharohman?” Roll questioned as the new décor appeared.

“Zoanoroid.” Netto added.

“Beast chips?” Meiru asked as she pulled hers out of her pocket.

“Not yet, lets wait till he actually shows himself.” Rockman said. “You two should act like nothing different is happening, sure the surroundings are slightly more Egyptian that two minutes ago but I doubt any one other than us noticed. Maybe it is holographic Recreation.”

“A what?” Netto asked confused.

“He means this might be part of the exhibit. Using holograms to show what Ancient Egypt looked like based on what is left of it now.” Meiru said as they continued to walk around the newly formed tomb.

“Ahh!” Dekao and Yaito screamed as several needles shot from the wall straight at them.

“Tomahawk Swing!”

“Medi Capsule!” two familiar voices cried out as their attacks collided with the spikes and destroyed them.

“Are you two ok?” R Tomahawk asked as he bent over to check on Yaito and Dekao.

“Dingo, thank you!” Dekao shouted as he hugged the Indian Cross Fusion member.

“Yeah, well maybe you should quiet down. This is not part of the exhibit, unless the exhibit involve, how to die like a tomb robber.”

“Dingo, Jasmine. The two of you should help get everyone out of here. We have some work to do.” Meiru said as she ran up to were Dekao and Yaito’s scream came from.

“But I want to help Netto!” Jasmine said after the dimensional area vanished.

“Umm Ok.”

“NO!” Meiru shouted at Netto.

“Why can’t she help?”

“Because we are members of a special task force. Jasmine is just a member of the order, not a member of our task force that is why!”

“C’mon Meiru.”


“Foot Bomb!” a voice shouted as a football flew towards Netto and Meiru. They dodged it only for it to slam into the floor, explode and trap them in the corridor.

“Beast Chip, Slotto in! Beast UP!” Netto and Meiru shouted as they slid their henshin chips in and transformed into their ranger forms.

“Wolf Blades.” Netto said as he summoned his weapon.

“Tiger Claws!” Meiru said doing the same as Netto.

“Dice Bomb!” Another voice shouted as a dice bomb landed near another corridor caving it in when it exploded.

“Looks like we only have one route, straight a head.” Meiru said as they started to walk down the corridor.

“Numberman?” Netto questioned when he noticed a green and orange navi standing before him and Meiru in the corridor.

“Zoanoroid Numberman!” the figure shouted before he tossed several die bombs at the two rangers.

“Electro Wolf Slicer!” Netto shouted as he skated towards Z-Numberman, leapt into the air, and kicked him several times with the electric skates.

“Tiger Terra Wave!” Meiru shouted as she slammed her claws into the ground causing a shock wave to send “Earth Towers” in the direction of the Zoanoroid.

“Dice Bomb!” Z-Numberman shouted as he used several bombs to halt Meiru’s attack.

***

“Meiru and Netto have engaged the enemy. They are currently trapped in an ancient tomb and could probably use some assistance.” Meijin said as he contacted the two net saviors after receiving notice about what was going on in the museum from Dingo and Jasmine.

“Right, we will be there shortly.” Laika and Enzan said.

“I hope that the Dimensional Transporter program was improved enough to accommodate two transfers in a row.” Meijin said as he waited for Enzan and Laika to materialize. Laika was first to materialized, he had fallen to his knees after words but didn’t look like he was in too much pain when he got out. Next was Enzan, who was screaming bloody murder as he materialized. When he finally got out of the transporter he looked at Laika and asked him how he could handle that with out screaming.

“Enzan, it gets easier after each time, I’ve used it what, three times now. Or was it four?”

“Yeah well that was my first, you could of told me how painful it was.”

“Actually I would of found it hard to explain the pain to you, unless you wanted be to stab you a few times with my spear, and then ran over by my motorcycle, and then shot by my scope gun.”

“I think I’d pass on all that.”

***

“Foot Bomb!”

“Die Bomb!”

“Coffin Laser!” The three Zoanoroids shouted as they launched their attacks. Z Numberman had just beasted out, with the arrival of Z Footman, and Z Pharohman to the battle.

“Number Ball!”

“Tortoise Aqua Blast!” Laika shouted as he jumped down from above, stabbed his spear through the top of Z Numberman’s head and fired his attack. When he jumped away Z Numberman let out one final Number ball attack and then exploded.

“Get behind me you two.” Laika said as he held his shield up to block one of the balls as the other two went by.

“So, what is the score?”

“Them 0 us 1.” Meiru said happy to see assistance arrive.

“I guess you two were out numbered just a bit ago?”

“Yeah, but they were out classed!” Netto said cockily.

“Foot Copy!” Z Footman shouted as he beasted out and summoned an entire team of himself. “Try to stop us now!”

“Phoenix Flame Slash!” Enzan shouted as she sliced a couple of the copies in half, only to be hit by one of Pharohman’s lasers.

“Any ideas Laika?”

“You mean that won’t resolve in us all getting trampled by Zoanoroids, then the answer is not at this moment.”

“I might have a way through them.” Netto said as his blades turned back into the wolf head shape and he grabbed it.

“Netto, do you mean?” Meiru asked unsure if she actually knew what Netto had planned.

“That’s right, if we have a joint mech attack, why shouldn’t our weapons also be able to function as one.” Netto said

“He has a point, if our mechs are practically giant weapons that combine, and our weapons are based slightly off of them then why couldn’t our weapons combine.” Laika said as his shield and Meiru’s claws turned back into the shapes of their visors.

“I am surprised Netto actually had a good idea.” Enzan said as he followed the lead of the others. They all tossed the crests into the air. The base of the wolf blades along with the blades connected and formed what looked like a base and wings. The Tortoise Spear landed on top, with the spear handle folded under. Then the Phoenix Saber landed on top. The Tiger Claws attached to the bottom. Netto and the others grabbed it when the spear handle opened and let a gun handle drop out.

“Beast Cannon, Yonzokusei Blast!” They all shouted as Enzan pulled the trigger and fired an powerful combined blast from the Wolf Blades, Tiger Claws, Phoenix Saber and Tortoise Spear. The blast destroyed all of the Foot clones but 3 and the original.

Pharohman suddenly transformed into a sphinx like form, and the remaining Footmen all tossed a Mega Foot bomb at the four rangers.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 4:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You know with iris being such an extra member, you'd think there was a yellow candle or something. Ha Ha Ha. But seriously, I know no one knows about her in the anime so it's hard to write for her.
By the way did you know that sentai teams are always 3 or 5 people and never 4? I think it's something about how 4 is pronouced and it being simular to the word death.
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yes I know that. Technically there is 5 members. there is only going to be a couple chapters with out Iris being a main focus. Heck she is getting more and more complecated in the anime. [spoil:1634f32ac4]first people think she has a navi, then they think she is a navi then she is seen running with a PEt but never seen talking to her navi.[/spoil:1634f32ac4] Iris is too damn confusing. But I'll figure out some way to get her worked out, might wind up just making up a name for her navi. Then she will be AU but this fic is slightly AU, mainly because I try to keep the characters true to the anime, so it doesn't matter.

Yes 4 can be pronounced Shi or Yon, they never sell fruits and stuff in fours because of the Shi pronounciation. Shi also means DEATH, different kanji though. I think this will be the one and only time they use the YonZokusei blast. ANd the 7th chapter will be the only one with wingless Beast Robo. Beacause I should have the AU Iris all worked out by Chapter 8.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2005 10:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great, but it started without much of an intro. Aside from that it was really good. I like how the team was outnumbered right out of the gate. I think it's cool you made a Zoanroid Numberman. After all, if[spoil:0b4a16dd7e]Quickman[/spoil:0b4a16dd7e] can be a Zoanroid, and he has a Net-Op, then Numberman can be too. Zoanroid are basically copies, right? Too bad you deleted Z Numberman a little fast for my taste. He should have lasted more than two seconds. Alternate note~ Isn't his Die bomb called "Doom Dice?" A cliffhanger chapter? That's cool. Also, including some of the other CF capable characters was a nice touch, but seemed a little out of place. I would have thought that other CF'ers would make up an alternate cell of rangers (There are several groups of rangers in the Sentai world, after all), but it was still nice to see Dingo and Jasmine get screen time.

P.S.~ Where did you get the name for their special weapon combination attack? Yonzokusei blast?
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2005 3:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mugen.exe wrote:
Great, but it started without much of an intro. Aside from that it was really good. I like how the team was outnumbered right out of the gate. I think it's cool you made a Zoanroid Numberman. After all, if[spoil:16d02486ec]Quickman[/spoil:16d02486ec] can be a Zoanroid, and he has a Net-Op, then Numberman can be too. Zoanroid are basically copies, right? Too bad you deleted Z Numberman a little fast for my taste. He should have lasted more than two seconds. Alternate note~ Isn't his Die bomb called "Doom Dice?" A cliffhanger chapter? That's cool. Also, including some of the other CF capable characters was a nice touch, but seemed a little out of place. I would have thought that other CF'ers would make up an alternate cell of rangers (There are several groups of rangers in the Sentai world, after all), but it was still nice to see Dingo and Jasmine get screen time.

P.S.~ Where did you get the name for their special weapon combination attack? Yonzokusei blast?


Numberman's main attack is called Doom Dice in the US Dub version of Rockman.EXE, while its original name is, in fact, Dice Bomb. Maybe there will be another set of Rangers, after all, that was the case in Power Rangers DUO.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2005 6:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He'd have to think up more animals for them but we'll see what happens later.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 12, 2005 8:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

like Unkown Neo said another set of rangers would require more animals. As of now there is 1 set of rangers for this series. I might add a ranger or two later on though. The Yonzokusei Blast, Yon=4, Zokusei= element or Atribute, though I might be slightly off on the last part but that is what it seemed like in the EXE 6 booklet.

This was a cliff hanger chapter because the next chapter will finish it. Also this is the ONLY time that Iris will not be involved in the battles. Mainly because well she isn't essential for the robo or for the weapon but since 4 can be pronounced Shi or Death having her not involved too much wouldn't be too good.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 9:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

VS The Pharoh!

“We only have five opponents this shoulder’s be to hard.!” Netto said as he skated towards one of the foot clones.

“Netto you idiot!” Meiru shouted as the Foot clones all rushed at Netto and slammed him while Pharohman summoned a coffin and is shot a laser at him. The clones jumped away and Netto was sent through a few walls.

“So they are good at strategies. Searchman we need a plan.” Laika said to his navi.

“I’ll see what I can do.”

“Phoenix Flame Slash!” Enzan shouted as he slashed at a couple of the Foot clones only to get a similar treatment as Netto. However this time he was sent flying by a couple ancient Rattons.

“Terra Tiger Wave!” Meiru shouted as she tried to attack only to be sealed in a coffin then blasted out.

“Searchman any idea would be nice.”

“Nothing seems to work against these enemies. Anything we try they seem to expect so I can’t come up with a way around it.”

“Ok, then I’ll have to try. Aqua Tortoise Blast!” Laika shouted as he fired his blast. The Foot clones all launched their foot bombs and Pharohman fired his Coffin Laser, sending Laika through a wall just like Netto.

***

“Netto and them need our help!” Dingo shouted at Yuuichirou.

“It may seem like they do, but we have no signal from them so we aren’t sending anyone in because of the odd energy signal that is blocking our scans. We can’t locate Netto and the others so no one who isn’t a member of the Cyber Task force will go in!” Meijin said as he kept trying to check on the status of the rangers.

“But …..”

“But nothing! Dingo, you may want to help as a member of the Order of Cross Fusion but you can’t.” Yuuichirou said as he started to scan the mechs to make sure they were ready to be launched as soon as they were called. “Meijin any word from Iris?”

“No Dr. Hikari, She might be in the Pyramid though because I can’t find any hint of her anywhere.”

***

“Meiru-chan where are you?” Dekao shouted as he walked the halls of the pyramid , heading further down into it.

“Dekao what are you doing here?” Yaito asked as she bumped into him.

“Looking for Meiru, you?”

“Same but I think I got lost, I was trying to get back to were Dingo and Jasmine saved us and find them from their but this place changed right after it was evacuated.”
***

“Netto, we need to tag team them.” Laika said

“So was this Searchman’s idea?”

“Yeah, he mentioned that they expect what ever any ONE of us do, then they counter it.”

“Good Idea!”

“Aqua Tortoise Blast!” Laika shouted as he fired the water blast from his spear.

“Electro Wolf Slicer!” Netto shouted as he leaped into the air and skated along the water blast, then kicked a Footman in the head, and the water slashed the remaining 3 Footmen. The clones were deleted and the real one went flying back and was sealed with in one of Pharohman’s coffins.

“Terra Tiger Wave!”

“Phoenix Flame Slash!” Enzan shouted as he lit the ground on fire as it slammed into Pharohman causing him to loose a leg.

“Lets finish him off! Yonzokusei Blast!” They shouted as they combined their weapons and fired it at Z Pharohman. When they went to fire a second blast at the wounded Sphinx, Pharoh brought two open coffins in front of him. In one coffin was Dekao, and in the other was Yaito.

“You wouldn’t risk your friends to delete me now would you? COFFIN BLAST!” Pharohman summoned another coffin and fired a large laser at the rangers sending them through a wall again.

“Yonzokusei Blast!” the rangers shouted as they fired the attack from behind Z Pharohman, by time he had turned it was too late, the blast ripped his body in half. “He shouldn’t of let his guard down.” Meiru said as she struck a victory pose.

“Rarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!” Z Pharohman and Z Footman shouted as they grew, breaking through the pyramid. “How did you get behind me?”

“The first time we went through the walls we made a hole in the ceiling, and then made one behind you before we decided to tag team Footman.” Laika said happily.

“Well lets take them out, Beast Wolf!”

“Beast Phoenix!”

“Beast Tortoise!”

“Beast Tiger!” The rangers shouted as they slid in the mech chips, then formed the Beast Robo, Ground Mode! “This looks like it will be fun, two on one, plus we can’t fly.” Enzan said

“That also means we are down one weapon.” Meiru added as she used the right fist to grab a hold of Footman’s head and squeezed it.

“Coffin Laser!” Pharohman shouted as he fired a laser at the Beast Robo separating it from Footman.

“So at least we don’t have to worry about hurting either of them.” Netto said as he pointed at Yaito and Dekao who were still tied up, and sleeping peacefully in the back of the cockpit.

“Yea but we need to figure out how to stop Pharohman and Footman before they destroy everything around us.” Laika said as Searchman’s face appeared on his visor.

“We should try to use a new technique to take them out. The Beast Robo Saber, and the Wild Beast Cannons should do.”

“What are you talking about Searchman?”

“The Beast Wolf and Beast Tiger’s heads can detach and form shoulder mounted cannons, plus the Beast Robo Saber has some power so if we use them at the same time the power should be able to wipe them out.”

“Enzan, Beast Robo Saber, Onegai!”

“Beast Robo Saber!” Enzan shouted as the head of the Beast Phoenix shot off and formed a sword of energy.

“Beast Slasher!” Enzan said as the Beast Robo dashed at Footman and Pharohman then started slash wildly at them.

“Wild Beast Cannons, ONEGAI!” Laika shouted and they nodded as the Beast Robo tossed the sword into the air and the Wolf and Tiger heads launched off then attached to the shoulders and then the Robo caught the sword.

“DUAL BEAST BLAST!” Netto and Meiru shouted as they fired large lasers from the shoulder cannons and attacked the two enemy navis who successfully evaded the attack.

“What now?” Netto asked .

“We spin that’s what.” Laika said as the two halves of the tortoise shell lowered over the legs then rotated and connected under the feet and the Beast Robo started to spin.

“Spinning elemental SLASH!” They shouted as the Beast Robo Saber started to build up energy, and siphon energy from the Wild Beast Cannons as the Beast Robo started to spin at incredible speeds. The attack ripped through Z Pharohman’s defenses, and both Z Pharohman and Z Footman as the attacks slammed into them.

When the Beast Robo stopped spinning and turned, the two navis exploded and then the museum returned to normal and the rangers demorphed. “Yaito are you all right?” Meiru asked.

“What happened?”

“A couple Zoanoroids decided to cause trouble. But the Beast Rangers saved you, and Dekao.” Netto said as he stepped out of the museum. “The museum is normal, no signs of Zoanoroid activities, people may now reenter.” Netto shouted to the crowed that had gathered.

***

“Falzor-Sama, allow us to try to take care of those annoying rangers. That stupid Greiga is weak. We will crush them in the great name of Falzor, then we can march on to destroy Greiga and his forces!” a cloaked figure said to the large bird head.

“Yes we shall triumph, where Greiga’s forces failed.” two other figures shouted at the large statue, which only growled in response.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 10:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good chapter. I liked how thought out the attack combinations were. The attack names could have used work, but they were still great attacks. I liked how Laika said something happily. Usually he has a rather straight face when discussing tactics, ne? Cannot wait for the next chapter.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 6:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah it's pretty good. Wonder who those other navis are?
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 4:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 8, VS Falzor's elite

“Meiru are you feeling alright?” Netto asked as he started to eat his lunch.

“Yeah I am fine, just a little tired.”

“You look sick.”

“I am fine, I was just up all night working on a few assignments.”

“Meiru it isn’t like you to wait till night to do homework.” Rockman said as he projected himself onto Netto’s desk.

“She has been going over the stats for the Beast Tiger, Beast Robo, and her own uniform every night for the past week. Ever since the museum incident.” Roll said very quietly as she projected herself onto Meiru’s desk.

“Meiru, why?”

“I just well, we could have been killed. Each one we face seems stronger than the last, plus they seem to be competing with each other as well. I mean there seems to be two groups of them.”

“I know, I noticed some seem to do the bidding of Falzor, and the others seem to work for Greiga. But that doesn’t matter, as long as we work as a team they won’t be able to win!” Netto said with a big smile on his face.

“Netto-kun, we need to go.” Iris said as she walked up to Netto and grabbed his arm.

“Iris, what is it?”

“Zoanoroid.” Iris said as she pulled Netto out of the room only to be chased by Meiru.

***

“Gate Cannon!” Zoan Gateman shouted as he fired his cannon at R Searchman.

“Invisibility!” R Searchman shouted as the Zoanoroid fired the attack at him, he quickly turned invisible and was able to avoid the attack with ease. Zoan Gateman fired several more attacks unable to see R Searchman, however R Searchman snuck up on him and fired his Scope Gun knocking Z Gateman off of the building.

“Laika!” Netto shouted as him, Iris, Enzan, and Meiru ran up behind him, after the Dimensional area had vanished.

“I am fine but we still have a Zoanoroid to finish.” Laika said as he pulled out his Beast chip. “Beast Chip, Slotto In! Beast UP!” all five rangers shouted as they slotted in their beast chips and morphed.

“Phoenix Flame Slash!” Enzan shouted as he pulled out his Phoenix Blade and attacked Z Gateman.

“Transport gate!” the Zoanoroid shouted as a large gate appeared behind him and he disappeared into it, right as Enzan’s attack was about to hit him.

“Gate Soldiers!” he shouted as he opened his chest and let out several little soldiers that ran towards the rangers.

“Iris Staff!” Iris shouted as she pulled out her Noi-bo-flute and used it to smash the little soldiers. She then tried to hit Z Gateman but that resulted in him summoning a gate and teleporting behind them.
“Gate Cannon!” Gateman shouted as soon as he appeared behind the rangers, he opened his chest and fired a large cannon.

“Zoan Boomerang!” another voice shouted as a large boomerang went flying at the rangers. They were trapped between to attacks now.

“Pollen AURA!” Iris said as she started to play her flute. A light yellow power sprayed from the flower end and formed a force field around them. The boomerang hit the aura and flew back to the Zoanoroid that had fired it, and the Gate Cannon was reflected at Gateman though he dodged it.

“Thanks Iris, but we still a have to take them both out.” Meiru said as she stared at Z Quickman who was laughing at them.

“You really thought that little dust would save you? You rangers are more pathetic than I was lead to believe. Zoan Boomerang!” Z Quickman shouted as he launched another boomerang, however this time a gate appeared behind him and a purple hand shot out and started to squeeze him.

“Fool, you are a servant of Greiga, I am going to destroy these fools in the name of Falzor-Sama!”

“Falzor is a stupid BIRD!”

Z Gateman simply laughed at Quickman’s comment. The hand squeezed around Quickman and crushed him. Gateman started to laugh as he saw Quickman crushed to deletion by the large hand.

“Now GATE ARM!” Z Gateman shouted as a gate appeared behind Netto and Meiru and a purple hand preceded to squeeze them.

“Ice Tower!” another voice shouted as Enzan, Iris, and Laika attempted to free the two rangers who were being squeezed.

“Freezeman?” Enzan questioned as he turned to see Zoan Freezeman standing next to Z Gateman.

“Laika do you think you and Iris can free them?” Enzan asked as he pointed at Netto and Meiru.

“Yes, we should be able to.”

“Ok then, Phoenix Flame Slash!” Enzan shouted as he dashed towards Z Freezeman and slashed at him with his blazing sword.

***

“How are they?” Meijin asked as he walked into Dr. Hikari’s lab.

“They seem to be doing fine, though Meiru and Netto are in a bit of a bind. But Iris and Laika are trying to free them.”

“Should we send some members of Cross Fusion to help?”

“No that isn’t necessary unless they call for help.”

***

“Aqua Tortoise Blast!”

“Iris Staff!” Iris shouted as her attack slammed into the hand at the same time as Laika’s forcing the large hand open and dropping Netto and Meiru to the ground.

“Electro Wolf Slicer!”

“Terra Tiger Wave!” Netto and Meiru attacked in unison as they fell to the ground, Gateman was knocked back into a wall and got ready to fire another attack from his Gate Cannon.

“So what now?” Laika asked as he stood in front of them with his shield ready to block Gateman’s attack.

“Gate Cannon!”

“Ice Tower!” Freezeman shouted, firing his attack at Enzan’s relentless assault.

“Reflect Shell!” Laika said as the Gate Cannon blasted his shield and he sent it right back destroying the Cannon with ease.

“Enzan how long are you going to take?”

“Not much longer Laika, just keep on the defensive!”

“Ok, I am glad to hear that because this is one quick opponent.” Laika said as Gateman disappeared again through one of his gates.

“Flame Slash!” Enzan shouted as he followed through with his attack and sliced Z Freezeman in half, then leapt back to join his team.

“Ready?” Meiru asked

“More than you think.” Enzan said.

“Then lets bring them together.” Laika said as his shield and spear formed the body of the cannon. Netto’s blades, formed the wings, Meiru’s claws formed the claws, Enzan’s sword formed the beak, and Iris’ Noi-bo Flute formed the crown.

“What are we waiting for as soon as he appears we fire.”

“But won’t he just slip away?” Netto questioned

“If he could, when they weren’t looking we placed stun mines all over, we also made sure that you didn’t step on them.” Laika said with a gleeful tone.

Gateman appeared and like planned he stepped on a mine that stunned him. “Gozokusei Blast!” The rangers shouted as they fired their strongest attack. Five blasts were sent flying at Z Gateman and ripped him to pieces. However seconds later both Zonaoraids grew to amazing size.

“You realized that was too easy right?” Meiru asked

“Of course, they didn’t even transform but lets kick their but non the less! Beast Phoenix!”

“Beast Wolf!”

“Beast Tiger!”

“Beast Tortoise!”

“Queen Butterfly!” the rangers shouted as they summoned their mechs then formed the Beast Robo.

“So we are up against two navi’s again, what is the plan this time?” Netto asked.

“Well one is of the aqua attribute so he should be weak against electric techniques, I don’t know why Enzan rushed him considering aqua beats heat, and electricity beats aqua. But of all of us that could attack when it comes to close range Enzan was the best choice.” Laika said.

“Electricity, you mean the wolf shocker?”

“Not exactly, the other will be much harder to defeat, he has his gates.”

“So we take out Z Freezeman first?”

“Exactly so get ready Netto because you are going to fly!” Laika said

“What do you mean?”

“Iris are you ready?” Meiru asked

“Yes, Beast Shuriken!” Iris said as the Tiger arm grabbed the wings and spun it towards Z Freezeman.

“Now!” Laika shouted and Enzan hit a button launching the Beast Wolf from the arm socket, it retuned to beast form and landed on the butterfly wings.

“Wolf Shocker!” Netto shouted as he fired an electric blast from the mouth of the wolf and as the attack approached Z Freezeman there was no way fro him to escape the spinning electric attack that sliced through him and the Shuriken returned to the Beast Robo and then they turned their attention to Z Gateman as soon as Z Freezeman exploded.

“So what now?” Netto asked.

“Well we each have two beast attacks, But I don’t think that fighting in our individual mechs would be a good idea against an enemy that can dodge anything with the help of his gates.” Enzan mentioned as he pondered a way to defeat Z Gateman with ease.

“That is true so what should we do?” Meiru asked

“GATE SOLDIERS!” Z Gateman shouted as he released several little soldiers who ran towards the Beast Robo.

“How did you win last time?” Iris questioned as she noticed the oncoming soldiers.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 4:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is pretty interesting. I wonder how they beat him.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 4:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow. Good chapter. A ton of villains in that one. Gateman is really powerful, ne? I wonder how they will defeat that sort of broken Gate Magic. Freezy sort of seemed a bit tacked on. He got beat so easily. Quickman too. Hopefully other Zoanoroids aren't as easily defeated as those two.
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