MMBN 7

[Jeremi the NetSaver]

It is the year 20XX, and technology has inproved quite some much. The world has gone into the computer age where everything is connected to the internet and people carry around PETs.

Right now, the famous NetOp, Lan is at home in ACDC Town. As usual, he is napping while doing homework...

Lan: ZZZ....
MegaMan: Lan!
Lan: ZZZZZ......
Megaman: :/
Lan: Mmm??
MegaMan: Lan, are you done with your homework?
Lan: *stares at paper* Yeah...those math problems were easy.
MegaMan: OK, is that it?
Lan: Yeah. We only got math...
MegaMan: Yeah, you're right. Wanna go on the net?
Lan: You bet! Jack in, MegaMan, execute!

*megaman is sent to the cyber world*

Lan: Go explore a little bit.
Megaman: *looks around* I see some Mystery Data...
Lan: It might be useful. Pick it up.
Megaman: *picks up data* It's a battlechip. WideBlade.
Lan: Thanks, MegaMan! Let's go onward!
Megaman: *runs to portal and ends up in ACDC1*
???: Hi, Mega!
Megaman: Only one person I know calls me that...
Roll: Hey, Mega!
MegaMan: Hi, Roll!
Maylu: Wow, Lan! That was fast!
Lan: What?
Maylu: You finished your homework?
Lan: Sure! it was just math!
Maylu: Yeah, but...how did you do it?
Lan:.....
Maylu: *giggle*
Lan: ....!! Hey, you think I wouldn't finish it?
Maylu: Well, you always slack off....
Lan: *smile* Not this time!
MegaMan: Let's go on! *runs*
Roll: Right behind you! *runs after mega*

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{Far off on a deserted island, a group of teens are conversing- DJ, Rickie, Claudia and Sandy}

DJ: Is it ready?
Rickie: YO, DON'T RUSH ME! This kinda thing takes a while to download!
DJ: Yo, don't waste time, bro! We need that data for that plan to work, ya know what I'm sayin'?
Rickie: Sure thing, dawg!
Claudia: Just jack into my PC. Your navi can handle it more than you.
DJ: *snickers*
Rickie: Jack in, DolphinMan!
DolphinMan: OK, time to rock!
DJ: There! We got it!
DolphinMan: Easy! No sweat!
Claudia: Told ya your navi can handle it more than you!
Rickie: Shut up...

{Meanwhile, Roll and Megaman meet a familiar navi...}

Megaman: Colonel!
Colonel: Long time, no see, huh?
Megaman: Yeah!
Roll: .....
Colonel: Something wrong, Roll?
Roll: Just thinking about Regal....and that NebulaGray monster...
Lan: Yeah, me too....
Colonel: Good thing Wily wiped out his memory so he'll have no intention for any malicious plans...
Lan: WILY??? He's ALIVE???
Colonel: *sigh* How late does news get to you?
Maylu* *snicker*
Lan: .....
Maylu: Hey, Lan, I gotta jack out. Yai is here.
Roll: Bye guys! *jacks out*
Megaman: So what are you doing now, Colonel?
Colonel: The usual....patrol...
Megaman: I see....
Lan: Yikes, Megaman! Let's jack out! I'm hungry!
Megaman: As usual...
Lan: WHAT??
Megaman: Nothing. Bye, Colonel... *jacks out*
Colonel: Bye...
Baryl: Good to see them again, huh?
Colonel: Yeah. Let's keep patrolling. *runs off*

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{After eating, Lan is back on the net..}

Lan: Let's go deeper, Megaman. I'm in the mood for a battle.
MegaMan: OK, so you want to find a virus to delete?
Lan: Heh...what else?
megaman: I'll take that as a "yes".
???: Wanna battle huh?

{Megaman turns around and meets a green navi}

Navi: I'll take you on!
Lan: Great! Cannon! Battlechip in!

{Megaman shoots at the navi.}

Navi: Longsword! Hya! *attacks*
Megaman: *dodges* MEGABUSTER!

{Megaman shoots at the navi repeatedly before it logs out}

Megaman: Let's keep going! I'm all fired up now!
???: Oh, really! Lemme cool ya down!

{Another navi jacks in--DolphinMan!}

Megaman: WHO ARE YOU??
DolphinMan: Well, my name is DolphinMan! Are you the famous Megaman I've heard about?
Megaman: Yeah... (Wow. I'm more prominent than I thought...)
DolphinMan: I WOULD fight you, but I can't right now. I have to find some data.
megaman: What kind?
DolphinMan: I have to find MemData 1, 2 & 3.
Megaman: What is it for?
DolphinMan: *whispers* A project to restore the net. You know the attacks from WWW and Nebula. They destroyed the net completely!
Megaman: How? it's normal now!
DolphinMan: Ey, I gotta go kid! See ya later! (Looks like I made a new friend!)

{DolphinMan jacks out...}

Megaman: That's wierd... The net SEEMS OK...
Lan: Well, we can't be TOO sure!
Megaman: Amen!

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{Megaman makes it to ACDC3, where he is encountered by a SciLab Navi}

Navi: Excuse me, Megaman...
Megaman: Yeah?
Navi: Dr. Hikari needs you and Lan over at SciLab.
Lan: Why?
Navi: He has made a very interesting discovery and he wants you to witness it.
Megaman: OK, let's go, Lan!

{Lan jacks out and goes to SciLab}

Lan: Hmm....where is he?
Dr. Hikari: Lan!
Lan: Hey, dad!
Megaman: You said you made a discovery?
Dr. Hikari: Yeah...but there is something wrong with him...
Lan: Him?
Dr. Hikari: Come with me to my office.

{Inside the office...}

Lan: A virus defender?
Dr. Hikari: Yes. A virus that eats other viruses
Lan: AWESOME!
Dr. Hikari: Heh...Well, I guess it is--if I do say so myself. The prototype was a gold Spikey virus. It broke loose, though...
Lan: Is it dangerous?
Dr. Hikari: Not at all.
Megaman: What happened?
Dr. Hikari: We were testing him, when he got a bug and broke out. It's likely he went to the SciLab Area on the net. There is a program there who raises viruses. Since the SpikeyEX senses viruses, he might go there.
Megaman: Lan, jack me in somewhere, so I can access SciLab.
Lan: OK, Megaman. Dad, where do we jack in to go to SciLab?
Megaman: The meeting room. And if you need help finding him, just call out "Chubba."
Lan: "Chubba?" That's his name?
Megaman: *snicker*
Dr. Hikari: I know it's a silly name, but he seemed to like it.
Lan: Heh, anyways dad, we'll find him!
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[Jeremi the NetSaver]

{Lan jacks in to the SciLab HP.}

Lan: Jack in, Megaman!
Megaman: Hey, Lan, I'll get some info!

{Megaman runs to a nearby program}

Megaman: excuse me, have you seen a virus defender named "Chubba"?
Program: Oh, you mean that gold Spikey! I saw him come here through a portal. One of the SciLab navis told me to pursure him...but....GOSH is that thing FAST!!
Megaman: Where'd it go?
Program: It seemed to have gone to SciLab2. There is a virus rancher there and I heard "Chubba" likes to eat those things...
Megaman: Thanks!
Program: WAIT! Take this!

{The program gave Megaman a "ToyProg"}

Program: That's a toy program. "Chubba" likes it A LOT!! Just squeeze it, and it'll make a squeaking sound. "Chubba" might come to you.
Megaman: Thanks!

{Megaman proceeds to SciLab2}

Lan: See him?
Megaman: Well, I see the Virus Rancher...
Lan: Wait...what is that thing over there?
Megaman: It's "Chubba"! But...what is he doing?
Lan: Looks like he's helping out that navi.

{Megaman runs to the navi.}

Megaman: What's wrong?
Navi: Some viruses encountered me and tried to steal this data from me, but this golden virus deleted them!
Megaman: "Chubba"!
Chubba:....?
Megaman: Here! Want this?

{Megaman gives ToyProg to "Chubba"}

Chubba: YIPPEE!! I've been looking for that!
Lan: (Whoa! A talking virus!)
Megaman: That's why you broke out of SciLab?
Chubba: YEAH!
Megaman: Dr. Hikari is worried about you. Let's go!
Chubba: OK. I miss Daddy....


{After Megaman takes "Chubba" back to SciLab, Dr.Hikari talks to Lan.}

Dr.Hikari: Lan, I have a special surprise for you.
Lan: Really?
Dr. Hikari: Yeah. Someone special will arrive here.
Lan: When?
Dr. Hikari: Tommorrow...
Lan:......
Dr. Hikari: Yeah, I kinda made you a little excited. But why don't you go home and rest?
Lan:....Sure...

{Lan goes home and takes a nap...}

{The next day, Lan is at his fahter's lab}

Dr.Hikari: Here he is. Lan, meet Jeremi.
Jeremi: Hey!
Lan: Hello!
Dr. Hikari: His family just moved here, and he's been thinking of working as a NetSaver. Looks like you have a lot to show him.
Jeremi: I heard you guys participate in all sorts of experiments to stop NetCrime! Totally awesome!
Lan: Yep! It's pretty amazing. Speaking of which, who is your net navi?
Jeremi: *pulls out PET* TalonMan. Yours?
Lan: *pulls out PET* Megaman!
TalonMan: The famous Megaman! Good to meet you face to face!
Megaman: Heh...nice to meet you as well.
Dr. Hikari: I hope the two of you will be the best of friends!

{Meanwhile, the group of teens are plotting...}

Sandy: Ready, JokeMan?
JokeMan: Am I ever!
Sandy: I'll jack you into my laptop. Go to SciLab and get that SpikeyEX project!
JokeMan: *giggle* Time to "clown around"! Get it? HAHAHAHA!
Sandy: *giggle* Good one! OK, let's go! Jack in, JokeMan, Power up!

{JokeMan hacks into SciLab and encounters "Chubba"}

JokeMan: *giggle* Why hello there!
Chubba: GRRR...
JokeMan: What's the matter? Afraid of clowns?

{"Chubba" attacks with a heatshot, but JokeMan dodges it.}

JokeMan: You're coming with me!

{JokeMan successfully kidnaps "Chubba" and the SciLab computers go haywire!}

Lan: What's going on?
Dr. Hikari: Someone hacked into SciLab's HP! "Chubba" has been stolen!
Jeremi: "Chubba"?
Lan: It's a long story!
Dr. Hikari: Both of you! Jack into SciLab! I'll see what I can do about this.

{Lan and Jeremi jack into SciLab1}

Lan: Jack in, Megaman! Power up!
Jeremi: Jack in, TalonMan! Power up!

TalonMan: OK, this is a first.
Megaman: What do you mean?
TalonMan: I've never been on the net in a dangerous circumstance such as this. Jeremi usually keeps off the net in this case.
Megaman: Well, let's just find out who's behind this.
Lan: Megaman! Find a clue!
Megaman: OK!

{Megaman runs foward, but trips on a BananaProg}

Megaman: ACK!
Lan: Was that....
Jeremi: .....a banana peel?
TalonMan: Are you OK?
???: HAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT WAS FUNNY!

{JokeMan appears before the two navis along with "Chubba"}

TalonMan: WHO ARE YOU??
JokeMan: *giggle* I am JokeMan. The prankster of the net! Try to catch me!
Megaman: "Chubba"!
Chubba: MEGA!
JokeMan: Oh, no ya don't! You're coming with ME! *giggle* Let's go!

{JokeMan takes "Chubba" and logs out.}

Lan: Oh no!
Jeremi: ....
Megaman: Sorry Lan...
Lan:....
Jeremi: Lan?
Lan: Hm?
Jeremi: There something I have to attend to. Jack out, TalonMan...
TalonMan: *jacks out*

{Jeremi runs out of the meeting room and past Dr. Hikari}

Lan:...?
Megaman: Heh, I'm more confused than you are...

{Meanwhile, Jeremi was contacting a family member on his PET...}

Jeremi: SANDY! What's wrong with you?!
Sandy: *giggle* What?
Jeremi: Oh, you're getting GOOD laugh outta that!
Sandy: Oh, calm down little bro! We need "Chubba" for our plan.
Jeremi: And that plan is...?
Sandy: ....Defeating the NetAssassins...
Jeremi: ...who?
Sandy: The NetAssassins!
Jeremi: Who are they?
Sandy: ....
Jeremi: And how will you stop them anyways?
Sandy: ....a secret!
Jeremi: ....

{JokeMan returns to Sandy...}

JokeMan: HEHEHEHEHEHE! I did it!
Sandy: Good work, JokeMan!
DJ: Send the virus to my HP.
Sandy: JokeMan, go ahead.

{JokeMan jacks into DJ's HP and places "Chubba" there.}

"Chubba": GRRRAAAGGGHHHH!!!

{"Chubba" is angry, and fires a heat shot at JokeMan. JokeMan is hit, and the blast burns off some of his data...}

JokeMan: ARGH! That thing almost deleted me!
Sandy: You know how to punish...
JokeMan: Yeah, I do!

{JokeMan brings out his CrushHammer....}

"Chubba": GRRRAGGGGHHHH!!!

{"Chubba" fires another heat shot at JokeMan, but JokeMan smacks it away with the CrushHammer.}

"Chubba": I WANNA GO HOME!!! GRAAGGGHHH!!! WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME?? GRAAAGGGGHHHH!!!

DJ: Yo, ToughMan cool his jets, you know what I'm saying! Jack in!

{ToughMan is jacked in.}

ToughMan: Better act straight, bro. You're still a virus and you can be deleted...
"Chubba": You're stil a navi, and YOU can be deleted!
ToughMan: You gettin' smart with me, boy? ToughPunch!

{ToughMan stirkes "Chubba" with a ToughPunch, hitting it severely. "Chubba" is thrown down...}

ToughMan: Now...lie there like a good boy.
JokeMan: *giggle*

{Both ToughMan and JokeMan jack out.}

{Back at SciLab...}

Lan: The Liberators?
Jeremi: Yeah...they claim to be restoring the net after the attacks of WWW and Nebula.
Megaman: Hey, Lan...
Lan: Yeah, Megaman?
megaman: That sounds familiar...
Lan: Oh, yeah! A navi named DolphinMan told us the same thing!
Jeremi: DolphinMan? Uh oh...He's one of their navis....And JokeMan belonged to my sister, Sandy...
Lan:...
Dr. Hikari:...
Jeremi: Dr. Hikari? Can you assign some security navis?
Dr. Hikari: I can. I just hope they'll be strong enough...
Jeremi: They will.
Lan: How are you so sure?
Jeremi: 'Cause Megaman and TalonMan will be the security navis!
Lan: Hey, I can invite Dex and Maylu! GutsMan is strong, and Roll is quick!
Jeremi: Great!
Lan: I'll go to ACDC Town and get them. Be right back!

{Lan exits SciLab...}
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[Mari]

Double post is only allowed when you have an update to make; but that only applies when it's been past a day or so, not fifteen minutes. Please edit your previous post with the new chapter.
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[Mari]

Double post is only allowed when you have an update to make; but that only applies when it's been past a day or so, not fifteen minutes. Please edit your previous post with the new chapter.
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[Haly K]

Hm, this fic reminds me of my first real story, The Star Pendant. Too much diaolouge,( In script format, too.) and too little details. I've improved a bit since then, thou. ( Kupo.EXE, why didn't I listen to you before?! The Star Pendant probably would've ended better if I had listen. T_T )

Anyways, try to ditch the script format. { Characters' name, then their diaolouge. EX: Lan( Screaming): MegaMan, are you ok?! : MegaMan( Getting up): Yeah, I'm ok...} Writing in a regular format gives a chance to add more details. ( Trust me, it worked for me!..... I think. :O ) Plus, make sure you don't have too many charaters talking/in the same area at once. It makes the scene a bit confusing. Also, make sure that the plot is simple to understand, but still exciting/suspenseful/funny/etc. And try throwing in a cliffhanger now and then. That's all the advice I can think of right now. Good luck! :]

P.S.: Random side note - I make up a ton of Navis, and one of them is named JokeMan. I should show you a picture of him sometime.
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[Jeremi the NetSaver]

[Mari]

That's comprehensible. However, next time it would be good to leave at least an hour in between each chapter.
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[Mari]

That's comprehensible. However, next time it would be good to leave at least an hour in between each chapter.
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[Midnight]

OK, since this is your first fic here, I may as well leave my thoughts. Bear with me, since this may be a tad long.

1. Eliminate the script format entirely. It just does FAR too little justice to the imagination. All you pretty much have here is a dialogue between characters that have been established in the series already, and characters that you have introduced that you expect the reader to know about instantaneously. This is preposterous. By switching over to paragraph form, not only is it mopre manageable to read, but it will be a lot clearer to the reader, since that allows room for the description to come in.

2. The characters' personaes seem WAY too narrow. All you have is a randoms smattering of dialogue. While this may not be bad for the more established characters, this is bad for your original ones, since they have no depth and thus will have little impact on the reader.

3. Random cameos=not good. It seems as if you just threw in some characters simply for laughs--in this case, Colonel. I see that he has almost no purpose in the story as of yet, and was just thrown in simply because perhaps you needed another character. It's probably a good idea to bring in characters is and only if they will serve a decent purpose to the plot. It doesn't have to be a permanent role.

4. You have included a "self-insertion"--basically turning yourself into a character in your own story. While this may not be bad at first, it is often frowned upon because of the extreme risk it poses to becoming what is known as a "Mary Sue"--where the author gives the projection of him in the story almost ungodly abilities, places the focus nearly square on said character, and makes him far outshine everyone else. While I did not see any indication of "Mary Sue"-ness yet, tread lightly--don't cross the Rubicon.

And that seems to be it. It's still a decent start.

Edit: One final nitpick--couldn't you possibly think of a slightly more imaginative title for your work?
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[Jeremi the NetSaver]

(Well, I like the script format though....and Colonel DOES have a sufficient role in the story...)

Maylu: Of course I'll come! But not right now...
Dex: I'll come. But I'm too busy.
Lan: Well, I guess we just wait.
MegaMan: Seems so...let's go back to SciLab...

{Later on....}

Dr. Hikari: Jack in to the server in the meeting room to get to SciLab. I've tracked down JokeMan. He's lurking in SciLab 2....

{Lan and Jeremi jack in...}

TalonMan: So should we wait for your friends, or...
MegaMan: We'll wait.
Jeremi: OK...

{Afterwards, GutsMan and Roll jack in}

GutsMan: Let's get this on!
Roll: I'm ready!
MegaMan: Great! Let's find JokeMan and "Chubba"...
GutsMan & Roll: "Chubba"?
TalonMan: It's a LONG story...I think...

{GutsMan charges straight on, followed by TalonMan, Roll and MegaMan. Meanwhile, JokeMan is waiting at SciLab 2}

JokeMan: (Where are they?)
"Chubba": LET ME GO!!! GRAAAGGGHHH!!!
JokeMan: Calm down. I won't hurt you. I just need some of your viral data.
"Chubba":....
JokeMan: *sigh* Nevermind...

{"Chubba" coughs up a BugFrag}

"Chubba": That?
JokeMan: THAT'S A BUG FRAG, YOU....Hmm....
"Chubba": What's that?
JokeMan: It's that navi! MegaMan!
MegaMan: Found him, Lan!
Lan: Let's get him!
JokeMan: Play along, "Chubba"!
"Chubba": ....?
MegaMan: Let him go!!
JokeMan: *giggle* Fools...
Lan: Battle routine set!
MegaMan: Execute!

{Roll, TalonMan and GutsMan follow...}

TalonMan: Time for battle!
Megaman: MEGABUSTER! *shoots*
JokeMan: *is hit* YOWZA! That burns! Now I'm mad! LaughingEcho!

{The navis cover their ears to the sound of echoing laughter}

Roll: GAHH!!! MY HEAD!!!
GutsMan:
TalonMan: GutsMan? You OK?

{GutsMan charges at JokeMan and gives him a GutsPunch. JokeMan begins to explode...}

JokeMan: GWAAGHHH!!! THEY'VE PASSED!!
TalonMan: ...?
Sandy: Jack out! QUICK!
JokeMan: *jacks out*
Lan: What did we pass?

{Later on, "Chubba" is returned to SciLab}

Dr. Hikari: Thank you, guys.
Dex: No sweat!
Jeremi: .....
Dr. Hikari: You OK, Jeremi?
Jeremi: Yeah...but I'm still confused...JokeMan was giving us a test? What could it be?
Lan:.....
MegaMan: :/
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[Midnight]

[Jeremi the NetSaver]

(Deep within the UnderNet, a group of navis met to plan a mysterious revenge... One of them was a cloaked navi named DarkMan and he was the leader of a group of DarkLoids called the NetAssassins. )

DarkMan: Is everything set to go?
DarkLoid: Yes, master DarkMan...
DarkMan: Heheheheh...BrightMan! Do what you do best!
BrightMan: I'll wreak havoc! Check it out! *leaves*
DarkMan: Our revenge begins now. They will FEEL OUR WRATH!

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(Meanwhile, MegaMan is talking with Glyde, GutsMan and Roll in ACDC Square)

MegaMan: ....That's what happened.
Glyde:....
Roll: I'm really confused, but at least that navi is gone.
MegaMan: We wasn't deleted. His operator jacked him out in time.
GutsMan: I could've deleted him!
Roll: But you didn't...
GutsMan:
Roll: WOAH! Take it easy, Guts!

(Suddenly, the area grows cold and dark..)

MegaMan: Uh-oh, Lan.... I feel a dark energy...

(BrightMan jacks into ACDC Square wearing a "bright" smile)

BrightMan: HEH! HEH! Check it out!
Purple Navi: Who are you??
BrightMan: I'm BrightMan!
Green Navi:
Yellow Navi: Never heard of him...
BrightMan: I'M A DARKLOID, OK?? Now enough! I have to wreak havoc! Check it out!

(BrightMan conjures a glowing energy and fires it upward. The entire area is now infested with viruses, and suddenly, there is a blackout in the entire city!)

Maylu: WOAH! The lights just went out!
Dex: YEAH! Here too!
Yai: I CAN'T SEE IN THE DARK!
Dex: No duh...
Yai: .....
Lan: MegaMan!
MegaMan: Right! MegaBuster! *fires at BrightMan*
BrightMan: *escapes*
MegaMan: DARN! I missed!
Roll: We've gotta do something!
Glyde: That navi must still be in ACDC Area...

(The navis head to ACDC, but there is no sign of BrightMan)

MegaMan: Nothing.... I'll try scanning...
Lan: OK...
MegaMan: :/
Lan: What?
MegaMan: He's not....wait...I found him! He's...HEADING TOWARD YOUR HOMEPAGE!!
Lan: Hey! No worries! It's guarded against viruses, and only you can access it!
MegaMan: But Lan...
Lan: Fine, go ahead.
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[Jeremi the NetSaver]

BrightMan: DARN IT! Where am I?
MegaMan: You're in MY domain! (I've ALWAYS wanted to say that! )
BrightMan: Check it out! I've got power! BrightWave! *fires a beam of light)
MegaMan: *dodges* MegaBuster
BrightMan: *is hit* Ow! Ack! Grrr.... fine! Wanna play rough? BrightWave!
MegaMan: *dodges*
BrightMan: Grrrr!
Lan: Now MegaMan!
MegaMan: Right! MegaBuster---
???: Ready?
MegaMan: :/
???: Yes! I'm on it!

(Colonel jacks in and attacks BrightMan)

BrightMan: GAAACKKKK!!!
MegaMan: Colonel!

(Roll and GutsMan run to MegaMan)

Roll: :D Colonel! So nice to see you again!
Colonel: ....
GutsMan: What's wrong?
BrightMan: I'M SORRY TO HAVE FAILED YOU, MASTER DARKMAN, SIR!! THESE DWEEBS ARE STRONG!!

(BrightMan explodes...)

Lan: Thanks a lot, Colonel...
Baryl: No problem. But there seems to be a new organization brewing up..we'll check into this more!
Colonel: *jacks out*

(TalonMan flies down)

TalonMan: I saw what happened. You guys OK?
MegaMan: Yeah! Colonel saved us.
Jeremi: Colonel? OK, we have GOT to be up-to-date on these things!
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[Jeremi the NetSaver]

(Meanwhile within the UnderNet...)

DarkLoid 1: Master DarkMan. That fool DarkMan failed...
DarkMan: DON'T CALL HIM A FOOL!! I planned for this to happen. BrightMan gave my viruses enough time to retrieve the DarkChip data....
DarkLoid 1: >.........
DarkLoid 2: But Master! What about the HolyChips?
DarkMan: All in good time...but right now, we seem to be low on members. ArtilleryMan!

(A navi sporting huge rifles and guns jacks in)

ArtilleryMan: Yes, Master?
DarkMan: Find some navis to join our legion of DarkLoids...
ArtilleryMan: AH! I know the perfect one!
DarkMan: Oh?
ArtilleryMan: Yes...BubbleMan. A former WWW (World 3) navi.
DarkMan: WWW? Those bumbling fools! Why would we...*sigh* Very well!
ArtilleryMan: *jacks out*
DarkMan: WWW? Hmmm....

(Meanwhile, "The Liberators" are on another "mission"...)

Sandy: *phew* JokeMan is alright...
DJ: Wow! These kids are tough, you know what I'm saying?
Rickie: I think we should include more members...
DJ: That's right, dawg! Stronger memebrs, you know what I'm saying?
Sandy: Stop saying that!!
DolphinMan: Jack me in! I'll post an advertisement on the BBC!
DJ: Cool! We're gonna have much more members, you know what I'm---
Sandy; SHUT IT!!
DJ: .....

(At ACDC Square, MegaMan is talking to Roll)

Roll: It's getting pretty boring here all of a sudden...
MegaMan: Yeah, but at least nothing bad has----!
Lan: What?
MegaMan: That navi! Isn't that DolphinMan?

(DolphinMan posts data on the BBC and jacks out. A navi comes by and reads it.)

Black Navi: The Liberators? Cool!
Green Navi: Wha? Who are they?

(MegaMan comes by and reads it...)

MegaMan: They're accepting new members... :/
???: I think we should join, Trixie! Blub! Blub!
???: Sure! Blub! Blub!
MegaMan: What the....
Lan: Is that.....?
BubbleMan: I don't think I'll be that good, though! :puku:
Trixie: Don't worry! Blubby!
BubbleMan:
MegaMan: BUBBLEMAN??!!!
BubbleMan: :puku: AHH!!
Lan: ...........
BubbleMan: Huh? MegaMan?
MegaMan:
BubbleMan: Great to see you again! Blub! Don't scare me like that!!
Trixie: EEEEKKK! BubbleMan knows MegaMan???
BubbleMan:
Trixie: BubbleMan knows hot Lan?
Lan: Hot....Lan???
Trixie: EEEKKKK!!
BubbleMan: :puku: (Pleeeeeease stop screeching...)
MegaMan: So BubbleMan! Good to see you have an operator. Everyone stops making fun of you, right?
BubbleMan: Yep!
Roll: :D You're soooo happy now!
BubbleMan: I am! Blub!

(Suddenly, ArtilleryMan invades ACDC square)

ArtilleryMan: OK, I'M LOOKING FOR BUBBLEMAN!!!!
BubbleMan: :puku:
MegaMan: Who are you??
ArtilleryMan: I am ArtilleryMan! And BubbleMan is going to be the new members of the NetAssassin DarkLoids!
BubbleMan: NEVER!
Trixie: Aqua Tower! battlechip in!
BubbleMan: HIYA! *attacks*
ArtilleryMan: *is hit* ARRGGHH!
Trixie: BubbleMan! Jack out!
BubbleMan: *jacks out*
ArtilleryMan: NOOO!!! I have failed...*jacks out*
Lan: WOAH! What a day, huh?
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