CHAPTER 3-SPHEAL!!

[Plantman]

In fact, that should be '¿Entiende Usted?' That said, you're completely ignoring Izumi's point, and your attitude overall towards following the suggestions has no changed.

Pete is a common name in the english language -and their equivalents in other languages. And therefor, almost everyone knows a 'Peter'.

Izumi is just telling you you shouldn't expect people to KNOW he's your brother and then yell at people about it. This kind of things with your brother you deal with them at home or via PM.

I expect you to apologize for your attitude towards people and that you try and follow the rules and recomendations of this section, or I'll lock your post.
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[Plantman]

In fact, that should be '¿Entiende Usted?' That said, you're completely ignoring Izumi's point, and your attitude overall towards following the suggestions has no changed.

Pete is a common name in the english language -and their equivalents in other languages. And therefor, almost everyone knows a 'Peter'.

Izumi is just telling you you shouldn't expect people to KNOW he's your brother and then yell at people about it. This kind of things with your brother you deal with them at home or via PM.

I expect you to apologize for your attitude towards people and that you try and follow the rules and recomendations of this section, or I'll lock your post.
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[Malik]

I BELIEVE a feepit is some Neopet Petpet that released after I became disgusted when it came out with the card game. Sariously.

1.) Naming: For the love of Luther-Lansfeld-on-a-pogo-stick, pick one form of naming! Why are you using "Maylu" and "Netto" together? Keep it consistant! Also, whatever names you're going to use, have your characters' names go along with the culture. Granted, people do name their kids in different languages, but it usually goes with what country they live in. Having Japanese names with Japanese names and American names with American names fits.

2.) Word Choice: She said, he said, she said, he said, said said said said. There are more words than "said" for dialouge.

4.) Author notes: "Author notes" wa iranai! Honestly, things in parenthesis disrupt the flow of a story, ESPECIALLY when what's in them are notes from the author to the reader.

5.) Bickering: Never argue with a mod or admin over... something off topic! You'll never win.
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[Malik]

I BELIEVE a feepit is some Neopet Petpet that released after I became disgusted when it came out with the card game. Sariously.

1.) Naming: For the love of Luther-Lansfeld-on-a-pogo-stick, pick one form of naming! Why are you using "Maylu" and "Netto" together? Keep it consistant! Also, whatever names you're going to use, have your characters' names go along with the culture. Granted, people do name their kids in different languages, but it usually goes with what country they live in. Having Japanese names with Japanese names and American names with American names fits.

2.) Word Choice: She said, he said, she said, he said, said said said said. There are more words than "said" for dialouge.

4.) Author notes: "Author notes" wa iranai! Honestly, things in parenthesis disrupt the flow of a story, ESPECIALLY when what's in them are notes from the author to the reader.

5.) Bickering: Never argue with a mod or admin over... something off topic! You'll never win.
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[Core]

Something to add about the "for Pete's sake" thing, it is a reference to Saint Peter I believe, the one is at the gates to meet the departed. Just a little tid bit of information for you to gnaw on when using it in an arguement again.
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[Core]

Something to add about the "for Pete's sake" thing, it is a reference to Saint Peter I believe, the one is at the gates to meet the departed. Just a little tid bit of information for you to gnaw on when using it in an arguement again.
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[feepitsrule]

SORRY...It won't happen again. For everyone questioning my spanish speaking, I know, I have very dismal spanish speaking skills. Also, I forgot Meiru;s japanese name... my bad.

Isn't it weird that the replies given are all mods and 1 admin?
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[DjangoSP]

Sorry it took so long for me to see this, feepits. The plot line seems pretty straightforward, but it's still really funny! And I liked how you made it that Spheal and her NetOp argue like a brother and sister in the 1st chapter! I hope you start writing more!!! ^_^
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