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Sketch The Boy who is Very Sart
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That's Elementman's real operator. Just to let you know. _________________
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Mugen.exe The Original Amish Technogeek!
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Ch 19, Clowning around or taking a dive?
"We should split up." Laika said as he stared at the three way fork infront of them. Enzan and Iris chose on taking the outer paths, and Laika took the center one. They had decided to go on with out Netto and Meiru because they were capable of catching up with ease.
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"Shoot that Butterfly out of the sky!" a slim girl with black hair in two braids shouted as she pointed at Iris' beast machine which was flying in their direction.
"Chirol, are you sure about this?" The clown navi with four floating arms that was standing next two her asked.
"Of course Circusman, our master gave the order so we must oblige." Chirol said angry at her navi for questioning her order. The airplane viruses took off and started to shoot at the large butterfly that flew through towards them.
The Butterfly gracefully dodged the oncomming bullets, and retaliated by firing an acidic dust from its wings, causing the plane virus' wings to break apart. Then Iris flew at the troops on the ground and noticed Chirol and Circusman. "It is them! World Three, well looks like we have our hands full." Iris said as she set her machine on auto pilot then ejected from the cockpit to face Chirol's ground troops, and army of lion viruses created by Circusman.
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"Submarine viruses in a wooded area? That doesn't seem to make any sense unless...."
"Someone put them there!" Searchman shouted, finishing his Net ops comment.
"Like who?"
"Well I'm betting that would be Kurohige of WWW and his netnavi Diveman. They are the only people I can think of that would put submarine viruses in the woods."
"So you think it was a trap, set up for which everone of us came this way?" Laika asked his netnavi.
"Actually, I think it was set up for us. As a beast ranger your weapon uses water based attacks, as does this machine. I also believe that they set it up so that after they noticed who stayed behind to fight Mach Gou and Blastman they could set up where to wait. I believe that since both of the trails on the sides had a slope then they placed them selves so at least one would go against who they wanted."
"So since they couldn't gaurentee which direction Iris or Enzan would go then Kunio must of wanted to go against me, and the others probably didn't care. So this is obviously a trap ment for me." Laika said as he pressed on, the virus' attacks slammed into the shell of his tortoise but barely scratched it as he just pushed his way through ignoring the viruses.
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"Hello Iris, what are you doing with those outsiders?" Chirol asked as she stared at the Yellow Beast Ranger.
"Chirol, you are not a nice person, and I am not going to listen to you." Iris said as she pulled out her Noi-bo flower staff and aimed it at Chirol and Circusman.
"Circusman! Take her down!" Chirol attempted to leave the battle field.
"Chirol, you can't escape that easily." Iris muttered as her staff shot out, through the gap between Circusman's body and hand and slammed into Chirol's back knocking her down.
"Circus Clap!" Circusman shouted as his hands vanished and then appeared trying to squish Iris. Iris quickly turned her staff to stop the hands from crushing her, then several lion viruses attacked her from behind, knocking her to the ground.
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"Torpedos!" Diveman shouted as soon as Laika's tortoise came into range. Two torpedo's rose up from the lake and shot themselves at Laika's machine.
"Incoming" Searchman informed Laika who instanyly turned so the side of the tortoise took the attack instead of the face.
"We need to fight back!" Laika said has he ordered his machine to start to expell water from under the shell, as this started the waster caused a ball like shape to appear around the tortoise as the water spun until it was a perfect sphere and started to roll straight at the lake.
"What is that?" Kurohige shouted from the opposited side of the lake as he saw a large ball of water heading towards them, this caught Diveman of guard and the tortoise slammed into him, knocking him under.
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"Big Top!" Circusman shouted as he jumped into the air, turned into a tent and started to beat up Iris, who was now inside.
"Pollen Blast!" Iris screamed as she fired a blast of pollen from her staff, paralyzing Circusman. She then extended her weapon causing a hole to be ripped in the tent and she escaped.
"Attack my pets!" Circusman screamed and his viruses started to attack Iris again who simply spun her staff above her head and used it to smack all the oncoming viruses away, then she lunged at Circusman, put it to his head and made it extend causing him to flyback into a tree. Chirol quickly decided to retreat with her navi and she ran as fast as possible from the battle field.
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"Hydro Blast!" Laika said as he fired two blasts of water at Diveman, when the blasts hit him he slammed into the edge of the lake, causing a rock to fall on top of him trapping him. Laika then had the tortoise surface to take care of Kurohige.
"What did you do to my navi?" Kurohige shouted at Laika as he got out of his machine and aimed his weapon at him.
"I defeated him, and I advise you to leave now or I'll do the same to you." Laika shouted and Kurohige aimed his BLG at the lake to pull Diveman out then he turned around and ran away.
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"Enzan-sama, we should try to contact the others, see how they are doing." Blues said to his net op.
"Right, try to contact them, I am busy flying this thing, after all it didn't do to well considering that it was under the dirt for at least half a week!" Enzan shouted.
"Meiru and Netto just got to the split, Laika said that he just got done going for a swim with a member of WWW, and Iris said that she was attacked my lions and a clown." Blues said
"Well then, I guess Laika and Iris were unlucky now weren't they, we need to keep an eye on the sky!" Enzan said as he powered down so he'd be able to hit the mute button on his PET. "Damn, sometimes I wished those helmets had a mute button, Blues can be soo anoying sometimes!" _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Unknown Neo Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 3:09 pm Post subject: |
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It's a pretty good chapter but would enzan actually say that at the end?
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 5:51 pm Post subject: |
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yeah Enzan was slightly out of character at the end but ohwell. If he was stressed enough it is possible that he could say that _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Unknown Neo Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 6:55 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, maybe stress could work for that. |
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Mugen.exe The Original Amish Technogeek!
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 1:31 am Post subject: |
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And the hits just keep on coming. Looking forward to seeing [spoil:f9c4d24442]Dark Kiriseki [/spoil:f9c4d24442]in the next chapter! If indeed he does show up, that is. (trying to have ESP is hard!) _________________
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 1:46 am Post subject: |
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Mugen, you should spoiler tag that for politeness even though he is in the beast opening.
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Ch 20, Judgement! The Sword V. the Whip?
"Enzan-sama!" Blues tried to shout but was unable to due to the fact that Enzan had recently muted the audio on the PET and set it so Blues couldn't unmute it. Enzan stared at the visual screen in the cockpit of the Beast Phoenix as it flew onward in the same direction it had been going for a few hours. However the flight was suddenly disrupted when several bubbles shot up from below, followed by fire, and then by a fist. Enzan quickly pulled up then manuevered the machine to where he could look down at the ground. Directly below him were two figures, one human with black hair and a very serious, legal look to his outfit, and the other, a navi, looked like his head was a book, he was blue and white with small amounts of yellow.
"Damn it!" Enzan shouted as he quickly switched to auto pilot and opened the cockpit to jump out. While he was falling he quickly slotted in his Beast Chip and shouted "Beast Chip Slot in! Beast Up!" Enzan's body was engulfed in a bright light as he quickly changed into his ranger form and safely landed below.
"Judgeman, get him now!" the human shouted, giving an order to the net navi as he pulled out a book and held it infront of his face. Judgeman quickly pulled out his whip and started to whip Enzan who easily evaded most of the attacks but was hit once or twice.
"Phoenix Saber!" Enzan shouted as he pressed his hand against his visor and summoned his weapon, however right as he was about to grab the handle Judgeman's whip caught it and tossed it towards his net op.
"You are a bad boy. You aren't old enought to be waltzing around with such dangerous weapons." the net op said as he put his book down. "Now, Prosecutor Kenji will have to make sure that the honorable Judgeman teaches you your lesson." Kenji said as he grabbed a bunch of books and tossed them at Enzan. "Your first charge is assaulting a Judge, and your second charge is possesion of an unlicensed, and extreamly deadly weapon!" Kenji shouted as the books opened up and the pages shot at Enzan, making dozens of paper cuts on his arms.
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"Kiriseki-kun, how much longer till you are ready?" Kunio Kurogane asked as he walked into a hangar in the Railroad kingdom. The person he asked was a short kid with dark hair and a purple outfit.
"Go-fun!" the kid shouted in response.
"Good, Futen Roushi is ready to go, and so is Elec Fujin." Kunio said as he glanced at a large train with three crates already on it.
"Owarimashita." Kiriseki said as he closed a box car and hit a button to raise it to the surface where it was placed on the train with the other three. "Ikimasho Kurogane-san." Kiriseki said as he headed out of the room and up to the train. When he got on he noticed an old man with a bamboo umbrella hat, and a long nose sitting next to an old lady in yellow. Kurogane was right behind him as he climbed aboard and started the train up and they headed out down the tracks.
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"I don't know what your problem is, nor do I really care. However your navi was the one who was attacking my machine!" Enzan said as he continued to try and evade Judgeman's whip, and Kenji's storm of paper.
"You were the one to fly into our area, you were tresspassing and we just wanted to let you know. It isn't our fault that you took it as us attacking you." Kenji said as he tossed more books, as Judgeman continued to whip Enzan relentlessly.
"Guess what, you aren't the only one who has a surprise up their sleeve!" Enzan shouted as he stared at his Pheonix Saber that was behind and off to the side of Kenji. "Maiagare Phoenix Saber!" Enzan shouted and his Saber started to glow bright red as it shot out of the ground and flew towards him. This caught both Kenji and Judgeman of gaurd, Enzan cuaght his sword then imediatly when to work making all the paper around him burn to ash, then he struck back at Judgeman using his Phoenix Saber to block the whip.
"How did you?" Kenji shouted in confusement, he turned to notice that the Phoenix Saber wasn't were it had been a second ago so it wasn't an illusion.
"Your books won't protect your now!" Enzan shouted as he went to swing his weapon, Judgeman summoned three small books that instantly merged and bit Enzan who tossed the sword into the air in shock allowing Judgeman to catch it.
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"We are almost in range, I'm detecting four PET signals in one location along with four metalic signatures. However the fith is not with the group." Kunio's conductor said to him after looking at a screen.
"Ok then prepare the Phoenix for launch and contact the fith signal. He is locked in combat right know isn't he?" Kunio asked.
"How did you know I was refering to the red signal?"
"I am not blind I can clearly see a blue, green, pink, and yellow dot in a cluster. That means Enzan isn't with them but if Meiru is then he must be in combat right now!"
"Right sir!"
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"Enzan-sama, this is the Conductor of the Charge Express, we need to know if you are in need of assistance" a voice said into Enzan's helmet.
"Well only if you can stop this freak from whiping me!" Enzan shouted as he was getting tired of being whiped by this netnavi.
"Ok, then we will be preparing aid right away!" the conductor said before terminating the link.
"BEAST OUT!" Enzan screamed with rage as the whip collided with him for the millionth time. Red armor appeared on his chest with wings attached to the back, His boots gained talon like toes, and his right glove because a sword that appeard to have two hinges at the hilt, and his left glove turned into a talon as well. His helmet gained more phoenix like attributes as a beak formed over the mouth guard.
"What....?" Kenji muttered as he noticed Enzan's transformation.
"The Phoenix Saber isn't nescisarry when I have this!" Enzan shouted as his blade opened up, he dashed forward at Judgeman who quickly summoned an army of giant books. When the blade pierced one of the books the other two pieces closed in like scissors then caused the book to burst into flames. However Enzan wasn't having much luck due to the large quanity of books that Judgeman was summoning.
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"Daaku Kiriseki, Gaajian Finikusu, Ashinteru!" Dark Kiriseki shouted as the final box on the train opened to reveal a red phoenix with more detail than the original Beast Phoenix. The pheonx took off to reveal that it was more of a Jet than a Phoenix, though the wings and cockpit on top looked like the wings and head of a phoenix the rest revealed that it wasn't much more than a decorated jet. Kiriseki turned on the boosters and shot forward, as soon as he detected the Beast Phoenix he contacted Enzan then ejected from the cockpit.
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"Kiraaman Toransumishion!" Kiriseki shouted as he aimed his BLG at the ground and his shinigami netnavi Killerman appeared below him, caught him and landed.
"So you are my help?" Enzan asked in a repulsed tone as he noticed the new arrival.
"Hai, watashi namae wa Daaku Kiriseki desu." Kiriseki mumbled before his netnavi begun to slaughter the books.
"Jigoku ni Ochi na!" Killerman shouted as he slaied the large books exclaiming that they were all going to hell. Enzan glanced up after he remembered that they seemed to of dropped from the sky, when he looked up he notice a red jet slam into the Beast Phoenix and instead of it resulting in an explosion they merged into a large phoenix that appeared to be twice as powerful as the original.
"What is that?" Enzan shouted slightly confused.
"Gaajian Finikusu desu." Kiriseki said as he glanced up realizing what Enzan was asking about.
"Guardian Phoenix? You mean that is mine?"
"Hai, Enzan no Gaajian Finikusu desu." Kiriseki said answering Enzan's question in a very annoyed manner.
Enzan simply nodded before flying straight up and then entering the cockpit. When he did thei shis talons fliped up so that the toe part of his boots were normal, and his wings vanished so he could sit properly. The talons on his glove also folded back so he could easly use the controls and the swrod vanished revealing a normal gloved hand. "Guardian Phoenix online!" Enzan shouted as he commanded the machine to dive down at Judgeman.
"HyaaaA!" Killerman shouted as he swung his scythe at Judgeman right as the beak of the Guardian Phoenix opened to release a fire blast. As soon as these to attacks collided Killerman shouted "Jigoku ni Ochi na!" and Judgeman exploded.
Translations
Go-fun = five minutes
Owarimashita = ended, but used as done in this case due to the fact that i don't know the exact word for done
Ikimasho = let's go
Maiagare Phoenix Saber = Maiagare is Chinese(i think) meaning rising dance but is sometimes translated as soar high, or at least was in the official subtitles for the opening theme of the dub of Fushigi Yugi
Daaku Kiriseki, Gaajian Finikusu, Ashinteru= Dark Kiriseki, Guardian Phoenix Launching(or at least I belive that Ashinteru is launching becuase I believe that is what Shin says when he launches the core splendor in Gundam Seed Destiny, though I could of heard wrong.)
Kiraaman Toransumishion = Killerman Transmission
Hai, watashi namae wa Daaku Kiriseki desu = yes, my name is Dark Kiriseki
Jigoku ni Ochi na = Fall into hell
Hai, Enzan no Gaajian Finikusu desu = Yes, Enzan's Guardian Phoenix _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Geez, feel like I've been cyber-nannied (IE slapped). Oh well, corrected it. I liked the chapter! Da-ah ha ha, caught myself there. [spoil:7b172261e9]Dark Kirisaki's[/spoil:7b172261e9] dialogue was strong, and he was as awesome as ever. [spoil:7b172261e9]Kenji[/spoil:7b172261e9] was also as diluted as ever. Creepy, with a side of ham. Good job portraying him! Paper master was my first thought, and I know how you love da paper! _________________
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kram_elbog Cross Fusion!
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Thanks Mugen, The main reason I had [spoil:dee71cc112]Dark[/spoil:dee71cc112] speak only in Japanese is because I realized that I had planned on using Japanese throughout the fic but I forgot that in past chapters so I decided to bring it back though I don't have much chapters till the end, and I personally feel this was better than my past couple chapters because it was more focused and descriptive. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Ch 21, Enter Guardian Kaiser!
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"Netto, I think that Kurogane-san, should be here soon with tools to fix our machines."
"Meiru-chan, why would you think that?"
"I sent him a message, and I saw a red jet fly over head."
"That doesn't mean anything, though it might be a good sign." Laika said as he leaned against his Beast Tortoise.
"Laika has a point Meiru, for all we know that jet you saw could of belonged to World Three." Netto said as he heard a loud sound overhead. He glanced up and noticed a large brilliantly colored red phoenix heading their way, preparing to land. When it did land two people jumped out, one was Enzan, and the other was a dark haired kid.
"This is Dork Kiriseki, he is a pain to try and talk to." Enzan said as he walked over to the group.
"Iie! Watashi namae wa Daaku Kiriseki desu!" Kiriseki shouted at Enzan correcting his name.
"All he does is speak Nihongo, I know he knows Eigo but he just refuses to use it."
"What do you mean by that?"
"Are you guys deaf? I know he knows it becuase when I use it he understands me because he replies properly, just in Nihongo, and not Eigo!" Enzan shouted at his four team mates who seemed to be rather brainless at the moment.
"So where did you get that?" Iris asked as she pointed at the Guardian Phoenix.
"Him." Enzan replied pointing at Kiriseki.
"Really, well what happened to the Beast Phoenix?" Netto asked in amazement.
"Aparently the jet he was flying and my Beast Phoenix merged into one. I don't know how."
"So you are saying that this machine is an amalgamation of the Beast Phoenix and a jet?" Laika asked slightly confused.
"Hai, Gaajian Finikusu!" Kiriseki piped up happily.
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"Any word from Kiriseki-kun yet?" Kunio Kurogane asked as he glanced at the time.
"No, I haven't heard from him yet?" the old lady in yellow said calmly.
"Well lets head towards the group, we should get as close to them as possible before launching the remaining three machines." Kunio ordered the conductor.
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"Nyuudou! It is your turn!" a loud voice shouted at a crazy looking person.
"Right, I'll serve you well!"
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"Wood Tower!" A navi shouted as several wood towers shot towards Netto and co.
"What the hell?" Netto shouted as him and the others jumped to the side in the nic of time.
"Nani!" Kiriseki shouted as he noticed the towers, barely in time to dodge.
"What navi did that?" Enzan asked curiously.
"Nyuudou no Erementoman!" Kiriseki said in shock.
"Nyuudou's Elementman?"
"Netto, Pakuchi said they were members of World Three."
"Well we already knew it was a World Three attack Meiru, we aren't that stupid, though I am not sure that I should say that about Hikari-kun." Enzan said as he pulled out his PET and his Beast Chip.
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"Sir, we are detecting another energy signal. I believe that it is a net navi. However I can't identify it." the conductor shouted.
"Elec Fuujin, Futen Roushi go!" Kunio shouted at the two people sitting at the back of the engine car. They opened the door and went back through the cars to the first and third cars. The third car opened up and a ramp flipped out and down as the train started to slow. Elec Fuujin got on vehicle that was inside it, a pink motorcycle, and speed off of the train. The first car opened and another ramp flipped out as well allowing the old man with the umbrella hat to drive the green tank out.
"Meiru-chan, help is on its way!" Kunio shouted as soon as he was able to contact Meiru's PET.
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"Beast Chip, Slot in! Beast Up!" Enzan, Netto, Meiru, Laika and Iris all shouted as they slid their Beast Chips into their PETs and changed into their ranger forms.
"Phoenix Saber."
"Tortoise Spear!"
"Tiger Claws!"
"Wolf Blades!"
The four who didn't have their weapons on them shouted as they summond them. Enzan was the first to attack, he rushed forward and fired his Phoenix Flame Slash, only to be frozen by a sudden ice attack. Netto was the next to go, he dashed forward and attempted to hit the large robot like net navi with his Electro Wolf Slicer, he almost made contact but Elementman shifted to a green color and fired a Wood Tower, sending Netto flying backwards. Laika fired his Aqua Tortoise Blast only for the navi to change to a yellow color and strike him down with a lightning attack. Iris an Meiru nodded and attempted to launch their attacks, however the second Meirus Terra Tiger Wave started to move rocks a tornadoe struck them and sent the rocks flying at her, burying her in a large pile of rocks, and Iris's paralyzing dust from her Iris Flute went was blown at her making it so she couldn't move.
Dark Kiriseki looked at the mess before him, Enzan was frozen in a pillar of ice, Laika had been knocked out by a lightning bolt, Netto was down thanks to being above a wood tower when it surfaced, Meiru was burried under her own attack, and Iris was paralyzed. He just stood near the Guardian Phoenix and the four Beast Machines making sure that they were still alright.
"Elec Bolt!" Elecman's voice rang out catching Elementman by surprised as he was hit with a bolt of lightning from the sky.
"Tengu Thrust!" another voice called out as a tengu navi's nose shot at Elementman and paralyzed him.
"Elecman, help the rangers." Elec Fuujin shouted at the electric navi. He quickly flew over to the frozen Enzan and used his Elec Bolt to shatter the ice, and at the same time send the rocks that covered Meiru flying.
"Thanks... Elecman?" Enzan said surprised to see who he remembered as a former World Three navi.
The old man got out of the tank as he pulled up and quickly helped Laika and Netto up. Then he went to focusing on trying to help Iris.
"BEAST OUT!" Laika, Iris, Netto, and Meiru all shouted at once. Laika's outfit took on an armored form, his back was compleatly covered in armor, and his chest barely had any at all, his gloves and boots becamse harder though, and then a Scope Gun appeared on his right arm. Iris grew her Butterfly wings, and light weight armor appeared on her arm, chest, and legs, while two antanae appeared on her helmet. Netto's helmet's shape turned into the shape of a wolf's head, his gloves suddenyl became clawed and armored, along with his boots, his oufit also grew a bladed tail that was giving off electric pulses, and finally. Meiru's helmet changed its shape to that of a tiger's head, her gloves and boots changed like Netto's did however her tail was not too impressive and looked like it was a Sanseklon, a three sectioned staff.
The four Beasted out rangers instantly jumped into attacking Element man who quickyl surprised them all when his Net op, Nyuudou, shot him with some unknown beam causing hm to grow.
"Netto, lets go!" Enzan shouted as he Beasted out then leaped into the Guardian Phoenix, right around this time Elec Fuujin, the old lady in yellow drove the motorcycle into the Beast Tiger and jumped off right as it collided to form a large white tiger with pink stripes. Futen Roushi, the old man with the long nose drove the tank into the Beast Tortoise and it changed into a large green turtle, with a snake wrapped around it, sticking through a hole in the shell.
"Kurogane-san, now!" Elec Fuujin shouted into her Beast Link Gate.
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"I'm going out!" Kunio Kurogane shouted as he ran to the second car. When it openend so did all third and fourth cars, when this happened it revealed that the motorcycle and the jet were stored in semi trailers inside the train cars. The two semi trailers connected to the semi truck that was inside the second car. The back of the fourth car had lowered, forming a ramp for the semi to back down on.
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"What is going on?" Meiru asked when she noticed what had happened. Laika had already jumped into his new machine and his back armor had retracted to the size of Searchman's chest armor, and his Scope Gun had vanished. Meiru decided that she would also jump into her machine and her claws slid back onto her hand so her fingers could move easily, and her claws on her boots retracted allowing her to easily use the feet controls, her tail had faded though.
"Guardian Turtle ONLINE!"
"Guardian Tiger ONLINE!" They shouted as they stood next to the Guardian Pheonix in order to protect Elec Fuujin, Dark Kiriseki, Futen Roushi, Netto, and Iris. However Netto turned to see a Semi truck driving straight at the Beast Wolf, and Queen Butterfly, when it slammed into them, as it turned, Kunio jumped out and if all became one machine, a large, flowing azure dragon. Netto and Iris nodded at each other and lept into the final Guardian Machine, Netto's claws flipped up like Enzan's talans had, and his tail vanished like Enzan's wings. Iris' wings also vanished when she landed in the Guardian Dragon.
"Guardian Dragon ONLINE!" Netto and Iris shouted in unison.
"Lets not waste any time at all. Lets bring them together!" Enzan shouted.
The Guardian Turtle launched the snake and then started to change. Its shell opened up by sliding apart forming three sections lengthwise. Then the top of middle section slid down and the entire shell slid up. The back part of the turtle then folded up so that the hind legs were pointing straight back. Next the Guardian Tiger's legs and tail disconnected from it and the tiger attached to one of the two turtle legs in order to be a leg itself. Then the snake split in halve and the tiger legs all connected the snake then closed around it makind it wider than it originally was allowing it to connect to the Guardian Turtle as well forming the second leg. The Guardian Dragon flew towards the turtle and seperated, the front turtle legs turnd outward for the dragon to split in the middle and attach to them, the front half formed the left arm and the rear half formed the right arm. Finally the Guardian Phoenix flew into the air and the head and back of the phoenix seperated from the body. The body then droped into place inside the Guardian Turtle allowing it to bee seen through the front. Then the claws of the Guardian Dragon detatched from the arms and attached to the back of the turtle, and the back of the phoenix then attatched to these claws and formed the wings, while the head lowered onto the head of the Guardian Turtle and they formed the head. As soon as everything was together a hand slid out of the mouth of the Guardian Dragon, and it's tail opened and slid back to refeal the hand. The tail of the tiger quickly flew into the hands after seperating into a Sansekkon staff connected by energy.
"Guardian Kaiser, formation complete!" All five rangers shouted in unison. The large Elementman was caught entire off guard allowing the Guardian Kaiser to use the Kaiser Sansekkon to take him down with only a few hits considering it was able to change its elemental attribute just like Elementman could. Within seconds Elementman was defeated and the Guardian Kaiser turned and Elementman exploded.
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Iie! Watashi namae wa Daaku Kiriseki desu! = No! My name is Dark Kiriseki
Nihongo = japanese language
Eigo = english language
yes I know this seemed odd for Enzan to be complaining about someone speaking only Japanese but for one like I've said before it is Alternate Universe so that allows stuff to be changed and obviously they have a universal languange since I doubt many Russians can speak flawless Japanese and it seems where ever they go to in the anime they have no problem communicating with other people. So more than anything it is representative that I had [spoil:ef4ff07039]Dark Kiriseki [/spoil:ef4ff07039] speaking differently than others. Obviously he wouldn't be under stood by some one like Laika who is not Japanese though in the anime speaks Japanese I feel they did that to show a universal Language and I just basically made the universal language English since it seems that is the second language of the world, or is becoming that way. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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basically the dragon is the arms, the turtle is the chest and torso, the tiger and the turtle's snake are the legs, and the pheonix forms the head and wings. I know it was a little hard to follow cause of the fact that I probably tried using too much details. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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First of all here is the disclaimer for this chapter.
I don't own Tsubasa Chronicle, or any CLAMP characters. I don't own Chichiri, or any Yuu Watase Characters. And I don't own any Rockman characters, however my ideas of the ranger forms for all the rangers in this fic do belong to me.
This may contain some spoilers for series like Tsubasa, which's manga is available in english, this has references to stuff in the first 2, and the 5th and 6th volumes only.
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Ch. 21.5, Cyber Sentai Beast Ranger VS Tsubasa Sentai Kudan Ranger
"Those Beast Rangers are such pests! They must be stopped but they are proving too difficult for my underlings." An man with gray hair said as he played with his mustache. "However this will allow me to get rid of them, and I only need one thing." He said as he stared at a white feather that was in a glass case inside a drawer of his desk.
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"Sakura-chan! Wake up!" A short brown haired kid wearing gray jeans, a green shirt, and green gloves shouted at a girl who had just fainted. The girl had light brown hair and was wearing a light pink dress.
"Syaoran-kun! She's all right she just wore herself out. After all Sakura-chan can only stay a wake for so long since she only has a portion of her soul." a tall blonde wearing a white shirt and black jeans said as he kneeled down to help pick Sakura up.
"Baloney's got a point. You need to stay strong for her squirt." A tall guy with black hair, who was wearing a black sleeveless shirt and black jeans, said as he rubbed his hand in the kid's hair.
"Kuro-rin, leave Syaoran alone!" the blonde said as he held Sakura up in front of him. "You can carry her, just because you were picking on little Syaoran!"
"Then you can take the little pork bun!" The tall one shouted as he pulled a small white puff ball with long ears and a red jewel on it's forehead at the blonde.
"Fai, catch Mokona!" the white creature screamed as he flew towards the blonde.
"Hey Mokona, any signs of a feather in this country? I mean we've been looking for a while and haven't found one so why haven't we left yet?" Syaoran asked.
"Mekkyon!" Mokona shouted and his eyes widened.
"Where is it?" Syaoran asked as he got ready to chase after it.
"That way!" Mokona said pointing to their right, and Syaoran took off running. As he rounded a corner he bumped into someone with blue hair that was wearing an kasa and wielding a mandalla staff. The odd figure was wearing a black chinese shirt with a swan on it, and a red sash.
"Watch where you are running, someone could of got hurt ya know!" The person said in a cheerful tone.
"Where is it Mokona?" Fai asked as him and Mokona rounded the same corner skidding to a halt mere inches from Syaoran.
"His face!" Mokona shouted as he pointed at the blue haired guys face.
"How can it be in his face?" Syaoran shouted confused.
"It isn't a real face, he must be wearing a mask." Fai said as he walked over to the figure. "Hi my name is Fai D Flowrite, this is Mokona Modoki. I feel odd asking but can we borrow your mask?"
"I can't take my mask of ya know! Oh yeah by the way my name is Ri Houjun, but my friends call me Chichiri ya know!" Chichiri said as he introduced himself.
"I take it that your mask is important. Well you see we need it to help a friend regain her soul." Syaoran shouted.
"I guess I can help but I don't have any spare masks ya know!" Chichiri said as he glanced at the direction they came from and then disappeared into his kasa and stuck his hand out to pull in Fai, Syaoran, and Mokona. Once all of them were inside the hat flew towards the Inn that Syaoran and co. were staying and dropped them in front of it.
"Sakura-chan!" Syaoran shouted as him and the others rushed into the room, she was sound asleep and Kurogane was napping by the window.
"Mokona said that your mask has a feather that contains part of her soul in it. So maybe you can extract it and give it to Sakura, I know you are a man of sacred powers." Fai said as he stared at Chichiri.
"So that means you are a man of magic as well. Only magic can see magic when it is not being used ya know!" Chichiri said as he shoved his Mandalla into the floor and then placed his fingers in front of his his mask and a blast of light shot over his finger tips and into Sakura making her open her eyes as the feather shot from his mask into her body. "Well I did what I said I would ya know! I have to go get me some holy water know ya know!" Chichiri said as he vanished into his kasa and flew off.
"Mokona, should we go know?" Sakura asked as she came to. Mokona smiled and opened his mouth up, when he did this everyone got sucked into his mouth and then he vanished in a bright light.
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"Meiru-chan!" Netto shouted as he stared over a cliff in Beyondard, below them was a bunch of red matter that was slowly making it's way up the cliff.
"What is it? Meiru asked as she stared at the odd red stuff."
"I don't know but I don't think we should stay here too long."
"Netto, zoanoroid?" Laika said unsure of himself as a rather generic looking net navi approached them covered in red goop. The navi stared at them before dropping a note and attacking them.
"Rockman, transmission!" Netto shouted as he quickly summoned his net navi and then slotted in several battle chips. "Program Advance, Dream Sword!" Netto screamed as the program advance activated and Rockman sliced the navi in half causing his data to scatter on the winds.
"This note is a warning." Enzan said as he picked it up and read it. "It says beware of Proto's bugs, for it is a sign that the great Proto will rise."
"What does that mean?" Netto asked curiously.
"I think it is talking about those!" Laika said pointing at all the red goop climbing the cliff, and then turned to see the red goop that was on the navi that Rockman had defeated lunging at them.
"Roll arrow!" Roll shouted as she shot the virus in the back deleting it with ease.
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"Where are we?" Syaoran asked as he looked around him. They were in the middle of a mountainous region and he wasn't sure what kind of country they would find, or how far they were from one.
"Do you really think we know, I doubt this is Kuro-woof woof's world, and it isn't mine. Plus since you didn't recognize it then it is safe to say it isn't your country either." Fai said as he starred at the barren lands.
"What, really, okay, Mokona will do!" Mokona said, looking like he was talking to himself.
"So I wonder what the witch is telling him, they are keeping it quiet so I guess she doesn't want us to know." Kurogane mumbled to Syaoran. Mokona suddenly opened his mouth and three wristbands, a necklace, and an earring shot out of his mouth.
"Yuuko sent these to help you. Yuuko said that she think you need them." Mokona said after the jewelry shot out of his mouth.
The three wristbands were gold with pink trim. In the center of these were a singe jewel, one red, one black, and one white. Syaoran grabbed the one with the red, Kurogane grabbed the one with the black jewel, and Fai took the one with the white jewel. Sakura grabbed the necklace and put it on. The necklace consisted of a feather shape with a pink crystal attached at the bottom. Syaoran grabbed the earring which was the least detailed of them all, it was identical to the earring that Mokona wore on his right ear, this new earring was put on his left ear.
As soon as everyone had their new accessory they started to walk in the direction that Fai felt would be most likely to have a town.
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"So how much further till we get to take a break?" Netto complained.
"Our machines don't need repaired so we don't have to worry about them not coming if we called them, therefore we don't need to rely on them!" Enzan said as they continued to walk on. Not far in front of them a wall of red goo blocked the path and was rushing towards them "Proto bugs!" Enzan shouted as he pulled out his Link Pet and beast chip, and the others quickly followed. They all morphed and then summoned their weapons and started to fight of the army of constant healing slimy leach like viruses, with little success.
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"What is that?" Syaoran asked as he noticed that there were proto bugs heading towards them.
"I don't know but they look like they want a fight!" Kurogane shouted as he pulled his sword that he had got when in Oto, the country where they fought against creatures known as Oni, and he was referred to as Big Puppy.
"Big Puppy wants to play, you should help him Little Puppy!" Fai shouted ecstatically when he realized Kurogane had pulled Sohi from it's scabbard.
"I'll kill you if you don't shut up this instant blondey!" Kurogane shouted angrily.
"Kuro-tan, use your changer." Mokona said as he jumped onto Kurogane's head.
"Get off of me!" Kurogane screamed as he grabbed the weird creature that was on his head and through it at the wall of proto bugs.
"So these are changers?" Syaoran said in a confused tone staring at his wristband.
"Thanks to Kuro-pun we don't know how to use them." Fai said getting slightly on the angered side which was extremely abnormal for him.
"KUDAN change!" Syaoran shouted as he held his wrist in front of his face. When he did this the jewel erupted in light and his outfit was suddenly changed. When the light had died down he was wearing a red ranger suit with a multi feather design in red on a white circle on the center of his chest, and his visor resembled a flame.
"Syaoran-kun how did you do that?" Fai asked as he stared in amazement at the newly transformed Kudan red.
"Rayearth told me." Syaoran said in a happy tone.
"Rayearth?"
"My kudan."
"So these contain the powers of our kudans?"
"No I feel that our kudan's are still in us and never left, they just went to sleep and these allow us to harness their powers in new ways." Syaoran said as he dashed towards the proto bugs and started to fight with his hands.
"KUDAN change!" the other two with wristbands shouted as they held them in front of their faces. When this was done they wore similar outfits, however Kurogane's was black with a crescent shaped visor outlined in silver. Fai's was white with a yellow circle around the pattern on his chest, and his visor resembled that of a rupee from The Legend of Zelda. The two rangers quickly ran to aid Syaoran who was now calling on the help of the sword he received in Oto, Hien.
"Flame Slash!"
"Dark Ice Slash!"
"White Magic!" the three rangers shouted as the unleashed their attacks, Syaoran and Kurogane used their Oni killing swords, and Fai used some basic magic, and together they blasted away half of the proto bugs revealing the Beast rangers who were fighting on the other side. With only half of the blockade left the eight rangers had no problem destroying the proto bugs before powering down.
Everyone introduced themselves, and Syaoran told the net ops about how they had arrived were they currently were and the net ops explained to them about Beyondard. They came to a conclusion that these new viruses must be linked some how to one of Sakura's feathers.
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"Proto is finally ready to take out my foes, that is good, release him now!" the old man shouted through his phone. He then turned to a tv screen and saw a section of the ground in the desert open and a large silver super virus emerge, he was surrounded by a shiny liquid substance but appeared to be rather powerful.
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"Mekkyon!" Mokona shouted before pointing in the direction of the feather he detected and everyone ran towards it only to come face to face with a large super virus.
"Proto?" Netto asked staring at the armored virus.
"I think so." Enzan said as they all glanced at each other and quickly morphed. Again the Beast rangers pulled out their weapons, and Syaoran and Kurogane pulled out their swords. However after a few attacks, and realizing that it wasn't having any effect on the giant virus they all pulled back for a short time. The Beast rangers combined their weapons to form their Gozokusei blaster.
"Ku Da N Wolf!"
"Ku Da N Dragon!"
"Ku Da N Avian!"
The three Kudan rangers shouted as they summoned their Kudans for help. The fiery wolf kudan, Rayearth was summoned by Syaoran. Kurogane called on the blue dragon kudan, Seres, and Fai called on Windam the four winged green bird.
"Seres no kokoro!"
"Windam no kokoro!" Kurogane and Fai shouted respectively allowing their Kudan's to change from their creature form and to give them power. Windam entered Fai to give him the ability of flight, while Seres merged with Kurogane's sword to increase it's power. Rayearth and Syaoran charged Proto, while the Beast rangers charged up their weapons.
This attack proved very effective because the Kudan rangers succeeded in revealing Proto's core and the Gozokusei blaster's Gozokusei blast slammed into him causing a large explosion, however this only resulted in Proto growing to about three times his size.
"Kudan Mahou!"
"Madoki Mahou!"
Sakura and Mokona suddenly shouted when they realized that the Kudan rangers needed their help. Sakura's ranger outfit was pink and similar to the others but the chest bore the shape of a cherry blossom, and so did her visor. Mokona took on a humanoid form as he transformed, when this was done his out fit was white with red gloves, and boots. The symbol on his chest was a pure red circle, as was his visor. However Mokona's helmet had ears shaped like his on it.
"Kudan Princess"
"Kudan Modoki!" They shouted when their had completed their transformations.
"Guardian Kaiser!" The Beast rangers shouted as they summoned their Guardian Machines, when they leapt into their machines they took on their half beast out forms.
"Rayearth!" Syaoran shouted as his kudan took a large metallic form. Kurogane and Fai shouted the names of their kudan's respectively causing them to change into large robo forms as well. "Kudan King!" all three shouted as they landed in their robo kudans and transformed. Seres's body folded in half, with the wings wrapping around to form a waist and the four legs combining to form the Kudan King's legs. Windam changed into the chest. Then the neck and tail of Seres disconnected to attach to Windam as arms, while Rayearth leaped into place and changed into the head.
"Spinel! Kero! Jogress Shinka!"Kudan Modoki and Kudan Princess shouted as they summoned their Kudan's the two cats flew in circles before colliding and merging into a very humanoid figure with for wings, two insectoid, two avian. The robot was a mix of gold and black. "Kudan Beast!" They shouted when they landed inside their robot.
"Lets all do this the right way!" Enzan shouted as the Guardian Kaiser dodged a proto beam and the Kudan King dodged a couple claw attacks.
"Kudan Fury Storm!" Syaoran, Kurogane, and Fai shouted in unison as the claws of Rayearth on the shoulders of the Kudan king started to glow along with it's horn. Windam's wings, and Seres' head also started to glow as they all fired at once.
"Kudan Beast Slash!" Mokona, and Sakura shouted as the claws of the Kudan Beast all extended, and it pulled a sword that consisted of it's tails. The blade swung down and slammed into Proto's armor.
"Kaiser Sansekkon Flash!" The Beast rangers shouted as they pulled out their Sansekkon and started to strike Proto with it as it started to change it's element after each hit. The three machines had made it so Proto couldn't fire an attack with out hurting himself so they were able to quickly rip open his core and destroy him, after retrieving the feather from with in so he couldn't grow again. When they all turned around he exploded and everyone powered down.
"We have to get going, but it was nice to meet you, we hope that you'll make it back to your home easily." Syaoran said to Netto and co. after giving Sakura her feather.
"We'd try to take you but we don't think the dimension witch would like that." Fai said politely.
"Yeah, who knows what that witch will try to charge us for these gadgets. I mean we didn't ask for them but I bet she'll want our souls." Kurogane said sarcastically as the dimension hoppers surrounded Mokona who's wings sprouted and he he transported them to another dimension.
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translations and notes.
kasa- a straw hat, the umbrella like hats from japan.
mekkyon- what mokona says when he detects one of Sakura's feathers.
Kudan- what the Mashin, are called in Tsubasa Chronicle
Mashin- evil spirit, and when written in katakana- machine
Hien= scarlet flame
Sohi= blue ice
The feather shape i refer to in this chapter is the shape that is recurrent in Tsubasa cronicle, basically a feather made up of curved lines.
Yuuko who is mentioned in this chapter is the time space witch from XXX Hollic
And Chiriko is the same Chiriko from Fushigi Yugi but just different because it is an alternate him in an alternate world.
In this ch I refered to Sakura's feathers as fragments of her soul. This isn't entirely the case in the first ep it is mentioned that her "kokoro" left her and that she was an empty shell. though kokoro does mean soul they also later say that her feathers are fragments of her memory so since in the beginign of the seires the high priest said she would die if who feathers weren't returned it is safe to say they are both fragments of her memory and fragments of her soul. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Can you take Apocalypse.EXE there? I can't imagine if the Beast Rangers began bashing with Apocalypse.EXE and can you butt in some Gransazers?
Sorry kram but some of my episodes will be catering these mecha-like battles but I'll make use of Vandread method instead.
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Thanks Hatsuya Kanzaki, I know I won't have any non-Rockman characters outside of Ch 21.5 beacause my fic is almost over, I only have four chapters left till I am done with it. Mine just has mechas because it happens to be based on supersenai.
The only cross over was in this chapter because it is VS special chapter where two sentai series team up. I just happend to choose a series that was a crossover itself, Tsubasa Chronicle by CLAMP, though it in reality only uses characters from CLAMP series but my knowledge of CLAMP series is retained to Card Captors(haven't seen the original just the english dub), and Tsubasa Chronicle which i have the first 6 volumes of the Manga. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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Very interesting pair of chapters... where do I start? The most recent Beast (non .5) chapter was pretty good, but the finishing of Elementman seemed a tad rushed, like you wanted to finish it ASAP to get on to the cross-over. Which is fine, since the cross-over was really entertaining.
I liked it, but some characters were a little OOC. That's alright though, because later on they got back to basics. The team-up was very rapid, and with little-to-no preparation. Kudan Rangers just hopped on the scene and struck, without much talk between the pairs. Introductions were really all done in one paragraph, which made it hard to get a feel for the character's reactions. Aside from that, the team-up went off without a hitch. Team-ups usually can be pretty tough to work with, and I remember you talking about how hard it was to work up a reason the Kudan Rangers got to go Henshin. Pretty lucky for them Yuuko-sama happened to have a few morphers sitting around the house. Wonder if Watanuki-kun was using them on his own time. That part was good.
The Proto battle was good too. The teams used er (can't think of a better term, so)... team work... very well, so... it was good? Yeah, it was! After they got down to fighting (which took approx. 10 seconds!) they hammered that oh-so-vile-prototype-net-freak into next month, year, oblivion (whatever). They killed him/her very quickly, which got to me. But he did put up a decent fight, so... I'm conflicting.
The mechs took him down in a split-second, it seemed. Aside from that it was great.
The start of it was pretty funny though. I like seeing Chichiri, as he's an awesome character, and the Proto minions reminded me of the Delibird (Or is it D-Reaper) from Tamers season of Digimon. That was pretty cool, since I could relate. It was cool!
In summary, aside from the many small beefs I had with the chapter, it was very well-written and entertaining. Great job! I look forward to seeing how you wrap Beast-Rangers up ^_^ ! _________________
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Mugen as you know It took me some time to get Beast to flow properly, tons of preperation. Same for Duo Ranger I took like 3 months planning to even start Power Rangers Duo, and I hopped onto Beastranger shortly after beast started. With having one chapter, pretty much a single episode dealing with Tsubasa Sentai Kudan Ranger I had a feeling it would be rushed and after I set it all up I realized that maybe I should of had them already have their henshin devices before hand but ohwell.
I live, I learn, I don't get Luvs, instead I improve my fic skills. LOL. _________________ I didn't lose my mind, I sold it on eBay!
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You know, I thought you meant a different show. I've heard of that series I just never watched/read it. But it wasn't that bad. I don't know anything about the others but I got some of it. |
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