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RocknRoll4ever
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 Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 8:20 pm Post subject: Megaman Animanga: programed Destiny: |
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gomen nasi eveyone T_T i'm really really really sorry i broke the rule, somebody told me it was ok to post new updates in different posts. so from now on u can find updates here:
http://paintbrushplushi.deviantart.com tis my DA homepage
again gomen nasi!!!!
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Hikari
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This builds up more suspense to the plot... >_<
Nice work!
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Judgement.EXE
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That had to hurt.
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| Ow Now that's good. It's well drawn and a good plot. |
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Trowaessy
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| Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 9:20 pm Post subject: Re: Megaman Animanga: programed Destiny: |
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| RocknRoll4ever wrote: | | ^^;; hi i have no idea where my other post w/ this stuff on it got too... |
Oh, none of the old post were sent over. So in a way, we're starting fresh.
Good to see your comic back (good to see you back too!). I can't wait for the next page already... |
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Ageman20XX
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:] ....Beautiful! You're an amazing artist...you do rockman so well! And the colours are just....amazingly accurate and...delightful! Rock out!
-Age
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Prime-chan
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Very well done. Some of the characters are a bit out of proportion, but I do the same thing sometimes so it's nothing to fret about. Also, if the leg that's kicking rockman had a motion blur from below instead of just bluring the leg; it would look like more of an impact. Keep up the good work. :D
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| The comic is very interesting, and the drawing good. There are a few mistakes with the proportions but that isn´t matter. It´s good and it´s very well coloured, Rock looks very cute. |
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ooh a new chapter  |
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RocknRoll4ever
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| Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2005 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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| MH Alia wrote: | | The comic is very interesting, and the drawing good. There are a few mistakes with the proportions but that isn´t matter. It´s good and it´s very well coloured, Rock looks very cute. |
yeah i'v noticed the proportion thingy and i'm glad somebody else said it and i'm not just paranoied :D how exactly is it out of proportion, i need outside help if u plz -_-;
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| As Alia said that little mistakes to the toilet :D (<--- doesn't matter) Keep the good work!!.. <3 the purple ebil navi... |
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Ooh goody! more pages! Your comic is great. Keep it up! :]
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| Wow..... those are noce comics! Keep them up! |
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RocknRoll4ever
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| RollEXE wrote: | | Wow..... those are noce comics! Keep them up! |
^^; thank u
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"Out of proportion", probably because they still have a chibi-esque quality, even for the official (game) art style. However, compared to the earlier pages, you did improve; fewer panels but larger figures to fill them, overall much better arranged than before. And the characters lost the weird 'stick figure look'; good to see how you got used to the whole matter during the process of creating a comic.
A few spelling mistakes - "And quite playing with that!" - I guess she meant "quit playing", for it makes much more sense ;)
The panel before - "Soul keep that blue navi..." - punctuation demands a comma right there --> "Soul, keep that...".
So, an overall nice installment with some old mistakes you´ll surely get over while you keep on developing both your story and stylistic aspects, just as you finally got over the "many panels - small charas" thing that slowed the action down.
Keep it up! |
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RocknRoll4ever
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| Meta wrote: | "Out of proportion", probably because they still have a chibi-esque quality, even for the official (game) art style. However, compared to the earlier pages, you did improve; fewer panels but larger figures to fill them, overall much better arranged than before. And the characters lost the weird 'stick figure look'; good to see how you got used to the whole matter during the process of creating a comic.
A few spelling mistakes - "And quite playing with that!" - I guess she meant "quit playing", for it makes much more sense 
The panel before - "Soul keep that blue navi..." - punctuation demands a comma right there --> "Soul, keep that...".
So, an overall nice installment with some old mistakes you´ll surely get over while you keep on developing both your story and stylistic aspects, just as you finally got over the "many panels - small charas" thing that slowed the action down.
Keep it up! |
thank u so much for u'r incites ^_^ i can't tell u how much i appreciate them.
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Riokenn
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Great drawing style, I love the coloring and shading and lighting areas. The only thing that seems to bother me are the Special Effects. I understand if you have a program you do this comic on doesn't do special effects. But it seems like it would be great if you had some. Another thing that bothers me is the last panel where she kicks Rockman. It looks like shes kicking: A) A doll of Rockman OR B) A lifeless Rockman. Theres not that much "hurting" emotion on Rockman when she kicks him. But thats just me. -_-;
This comic your working on reminds me of my Rockman doujinshi, and how I need to work on it. :< I've been getting lazy with it these past months...<.<
But all in all, I think its a pretty good comic you got there. :D
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RocknRoll4ever
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| Riokenn wrote: | Great drawing style, I love the coloring and shading and lighting areas. The only thing that seems to bother me are the Special Effects. I understand if you have a program you do this comic on doesn't do special effects. But it seems like it would be great if you had some. Another thing that bothers me is the last panel where she kicks Rockman. It looks like shes kicking: A) A doll of Rockman OR B) A lifeless Rockman. Theres not that much "hurting" emotion on Rockman when she kicks him. But thats just me. -_-;
This comic your working on reminds me of my Rockman doujinshi, and how I need to work on it. :< I've been getting lazy with it these past months...<.<
But all in all, I think its a pretty good comic you got there. :D |
don't get me wrong, i LOVE getting critiques, the only problem is that people tell me what is wrong but nobody tells me how to fix it :grr: so if you would please be more SPACIFIC as to what kind of special effects would be great then PERHAPS i could fix them ><
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RocknRoll4ever
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| Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 2:17 pm Post subject: new pages |
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^_^ pages 14-15! home u like 'em
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17546099/ ~new
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Awsome job on Lan's expression in panel 4. I like it. :D One thing I don't get though. In panels 5-7 does she hit Megaman while shes still on his Mega buster? Or does she jump then do that Black Lightning attack 
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