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LanceLite and MaxMan
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 Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 10:13 am Post subject: MaxMan Battle Network 1 - The Dual Soul Saga |
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| LanceLite and MaxMan wrote: | | alright!! my first fanfic based on my navi and er... me and my friends and their navis. read and review, i'll be uploading new chapters shortly ^_^ |
"No Lance, you cannot have a navigator," said Lance's dad.
"How many times must we tell you? Netbattles are violent things and are dangerous. To be safe it is just best not to have a navigator," Lance's mom said.
"But mom, EVERYONE has them. I'm thirteen now! Don't you think I can handle a few netbattles?" Lance said to them.
"Lance, one more time you..." Lance's mom was stopped.
"Its true dear, Lance IS old enough now. We should let him now." Lance's dad said. Lance looked at them hopefully. Lance's mom sighed.
"Oh alright. But don't come back telling me you've hurt yourself," Lance's mom gave in easily, much to his surprise. She got up and went to the kitchen.
Lance's dad got up from the couch. He pulled out his wallet and handed Lance 5000 zennies.
"Go get a navigator. But be careful, you know you mother is over-protective, but that does not mean that netbattling and all that are completely safe," he said.
"I know, I know dad. I'll be careful and all that," Lance said. "Can I go get one right now?"
"Ask your mother," his dad replied. This meant something was to go wrong now.
"M.. mom can I go get one now? Dad gave me the money and..." Lance began. But to his surprise, his mom did not say anything strict.
"Yes you can. I have been pretty strict about this, and it's time you got a navigator. Now go get a good one, " Lance's mom said.
"Thanks mom," Lance said and headed out of the house.
Dekai town never looked so great, Lance thought. He was finally getting his own navigator. But there was one problem. Where is a good shop to buy navigators?
"Hey Lance! Wait up!!" a familiar voice called him. Lance looked back. His best friend Anno was running after him.
"Guess what!! My parents told me I could get a navi!! I'm going to get one now!!" Lance shouted at him. Anno ran up and stood in front of him.
"That's awesome! You're finally getting a navi! Guess what as well! I'm getting a new navi too, to replace my old deleted one," Anno answered.
"Oh yeah! Lets go get our navi's together! Hey you know where we can buy them?" Lance asked.
"There's a promo sale on navi's at the Jomon outlet down the block, I was going there to get one now," Anno said.
"What are we waiting for, lets go!" Lance shouted.
Jomon was a very crowded place. The navi promo attracted a lot of customers. The usual shelves of electronics were filled with PETs, Battlechips, Navi Creator programs and Navi Customizers.
"Wow, these stuff are awesome.." Lance gazed at them.
"The new navi's are all that way in new PETs. I'll go get a few battlechips first, you go get your navi. I'll meet you at the programs corner," Anno said.
"Alright! I'm gonna get the best navi!" Lance walked towards the navi selections.
"Fire types, water types, normal types, electric types..." Lance sifted through all the PETs. "I didn't know NetYellow navi's were also electric types.. maybe a girl navi will be good for me..."
The female navis in their PETs giggled. Lance picked up a PET and looked at its case. Behind it it said,
CUSTOMIZABLE!!
NAME THE NAVI AS YOU LIKE!!
BE ITS BEST FRIEND AS IT WILL BE YOURS!!
FREE BATTLECHIPS!!
As Lance slowly moved sideways down the aisle, he did not notice the box in the way. His feet hit it and he almost fell over. The female navis giggled harder.
"Wow, there are more PET's here... what the? This PET is different from all of these!" Lance said. He picked up the brown-and-black colored PET. It was different from the other PETs. The others were all red, white or blue, and each had free battlechips. But this one did not have any battlechips in its case.
"Hey, I'm Max!"
Lance fell over this time. Both the female and male navis laughed hard. Lance looked into the PET. On the screen an electric type NormalNavi_α was waving at him.
"So you're the one who talked!!" Lance said. He turned the odd PET's case over. It was same as the others. But one thing caught his eyes.
NAME THE NAVI AS YOU LIKE!!
"Say what?" Lance said. "It says here that I can name the navis as I want..." Lance turned the PET over again and looked at its occupant inside. "But you already have a name!"
"I do? My name's Max, but it says you can name me as you want?" The navigator inside seemed surprised.
"Something's got to give, or else..." Lance looked around the PETs surrounding him. "This one is different... I'll get you as my navi Max."
Lance suspected something was up. Max was pretty happy that he was being bought, and being odd did not matter to him. As Lance walked towards the counter something scratched underneath his feet. He looked down and saw a battlechip.
"ShotStar 40 R?" he picked it up. He noticed that there were no price tags on it.
"Its a pretty good chip, I think you should take it." Max advised.
"Think so?" Lance asked, and put the chip in his pocket.
He walked to the programs corner, and Anno was already there.
"Took you long enough... hey that's a pretty cool PET!" Anno said.
"Its more than cool, something's wrong about it. I'll tell you later. First let me buy this little guy." Lance said and headed to the counter.
Outside Jomon, Anno and Lance started to walk back home.
"You didn't tell me what navi you got Anno," Lance said.
"I didn't! I got a Navi Creator program, the best one there was. Cost me little more than a new navi, and with this I can create and customize my own navi!" Anno said.
"Wow that's pretty cool!" Lance said.
"I'd not be so sure, it looks complicated..." Max said. Lance looked surprised.
"Sorry, still gotta get used to being with a navi," he said.
"Really get used to it. No privacy, even in toilets," Anno said laughing.
"Oboy..." Lance muttered. He then told Anno about Max and the PET being different.
"Hm.. oh well, think over it, could be something pretty cool but I can't say what it is," Anno said.
"Alright then. See you tomorrow at school. And give Lefy a call? Tell him about Max," Lance said.
"Roger that," Anno said and walked off towards his house on the other side of the street.
"Welcome.. to your new home," Lance told Max and went inside.
Lance's parents were waiting for him. As Lance walked into the living room, they got up from where they were sitting and went over to him.
"Did you get a navi?" his dad asked.
"Is it any good?" his mom asked as well.
"Of course it is! Meet Max, Max, meet my parents," Lance introduced them.
"Nice.. to meet you guys," Max said.
"Now Lance you know getting a navi means lots of responsi...." Lance's parents started. But Lance stopped them.
"Mom, dad, I know!! Getting a navi is pretty cool, and I gotta recharge him, clean the PET, get battlechips..." At the last word Lance's mom gasped.
"Oh oh oh, netbattling... Well since you've got a navi you can.." she started to say. But an ad on the TV caught their attentions.
DEKAI TOWN JUNIOR NETBATTLE CHAMPIONSHIP!! EVERY SCHOOL IN TOWN PARTICIPATES! ACE YOUR FRIENDS' NAVIS TO BECOME THEIR BEST!! THEN COME OVER WITH YOUR School-ID AND ENTER THE TOURNAMENT!! ITS THE ULTIMATE CHALLENGE TO BE THE BEST JUNIOR NETBATTLER IN DEKAI TOWN!!
"That was what I was going to suggest to you, you can enter that tournament!" Lance's mom said.
"But mom I thought you hated netbattles..." Lance said.
"That was before you got Max. Now that you got him, some of my other dreams about you becoming a great person can be fulfilled!" mom said.
"Does that include being netbattle champion?" Lance asked. Once again the TV caught their attention.
TOURNAMENTS IN SCHOOLS dps31 and dps32 WILL BE HELD ON THE 30th OF JUNE!!
"Oh yeah dps32!!" Lance shouted.
"Dekai private school number 32. Lance your tournament will be held day after tomorrow. Today's the 28th." Lance's dad told him.
"Uh oh, I still have to master netbattling and make a chip folder!" Lance said.
"Well what are you waiting for then? Go get ready!" Lance's mom said.
"Wait, here's 1000 zennies, buy some good chips and get ready," Lance's dad handed him the money.
"Thanks dad!" Lance said.
"Lots of encouragement, huh Lance?" Max said.
"Oh yeah!" Lance said.
| LanceLite and MaxMan wrote: | | seems normal doesnt it? it'll soon change... and im making a MMBN website, and pics and stuff will be on it too. i'll be posting its link too as well shortly. stay here!! |
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LanceLite and MaxMan
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| LanceLite and MaxMan wrote: | Hey ya'll! Here's chapter two! Not much fun to read probably, but a little more advancement in Max's character developments... And yeah, people who don't play the MMBN/EXE games might not understand how I describe battles, but I've never seen the anime so please bear with me. So er... ENJOY!!
EDIT: Site cannot be accessed in whatsoever forms, so it will have to wait. I have posted link to the SpoilerCard of [spoil:a88ce55975]ProtoDodgeMan[/spoil:a88ce55975] so beware for spoilers when you click that link. |
Lance took his time at night to master some netbattling techniques. He was battling a Mettaur and two Spikey viruses right then. As he did so, he noticed some more differences in Max.
"Max why do you keep using an ElecSword? Aren't electric types supposed to be using ZapRings?" he asked.
"Say what?" Max said.
"Hm.. weird..." Lance muttered. Max didn't hear this so he kept on running after the Mettaur he was battling.
Max moved forward one panel towards the Mettaur, and sliced the virus up with his ElecSword.
"There you did it again. I pressed B-Button on the PET, and the manual says you'll use NormlBstr. But you use ElecSword. If I charge it, your ElecSwords range changes to a 3x3 panel attack..." Lance said.
"Admit it. Its cool." Max said.
"'Course it is! But don't you find it weird at any little way?" Lance asked.
"Not really...." Max said and moved over a few panels to avoid a Spikey's attack.
"Hey Max, here's that weird chip you told me to pick up at the store!" Lance sent the ShotStar chip data to Max.
"Alright! Now see why I told you to take it," Max said.
Lance activated the chip, and the battle-time froze. The viruses lifeless emotions grew frightened, and Max let out a short laugh. Then meteors blasted down like rain on the viruses. The Spikey's were deleted, but the meteors did not stop falling till a lot more of them fell. The battle-time un-froze and Max won that battle.
"Omigosh..." Lance gasped.
"You're welcome!" Max said.
"Er.. how did you know I was going to thank you for telling me to take that chip?" Lance asked.
"LANCE! GO TO SLEEP! I KNOW I TOLD YOU TO GET READY FOR THE TOURNEY BUT IT'S OVER 12AM!!" Lance's mom's voice came from somewhere in the house.
So Lance's question was not answered as he quickly put Max and the PET to recharge batteries, and getting ready for bed he one last time thought what happened that day.
"LANCE! I CAN'T DO IT! I CAN'T DO IT! TOO HARD!" Anno shouted through the PET phone.
"Calm down! You've been at it since morning. Why can't you?" Lance said.
"Needs special Navi data to be re-cloned... I need another navi to create another..." Anno explained.
"Okay... why don't you bring that CD over here? I'll see what I can do with that thing." Lance said.
"Alright, be right running," Anno said and hung up.
"So?" Max asked. Lance explained.
"He coming over?" Max asked.
"Lives across the street so its no problem." Lance said.
The doorbell rang, and in a few seconds Anno was in Lance's room.
"What took you? Last time you made it here in less than a minute!" Lance said.
"Mom says I gotta go get some stuff from the mall. Boring stuff. Take this and see what you can do. I'll be back later, and make me a good navi. PLEASE try to make ProtoMan, 'cause you know why." Anno quickly said.
"So that's what you've been trying to make all morning long?" Lance said. "I'll try my best."
"Right, thanks. I gotta run now!" Anno headed out.
"See ya!" Max shouted out.
"..you said what I was gonna say..." Lance said. "Like last time that you predicted what I was to say..."
Max changed the subject very fast.
"ProtoMan? That world class Official navi?" Max asked. Lance suddenly forgot what he was asking.
"Yeah! He loves that guy. From when once his old navi was running around the net ProtoMan and some other navi came running. ProtoMan sliced that guy up. And he and his navi watched and was so amazed that they fell in love with ProtoMan." Lance told Max. Max laughed very hard.
"I LOVE YOU PROTOMAN! Imagine them saying that!" Max joked. Lance laughed and then remembered,
"AGAIN! You like er... I don't know... KNOW WHAT I THINK AND SAY THEM OR SOMETHING!"
"Something we'll really have to find out then?" Max asked.
"Along with how to work this navi-creator," Lance said and booted the CD up. "Max, jack in and execute!" he sent Max into the computer.
"Complicated, verily." Max said.
"Indeed. And you still did not stop reading my mind, however you do it," Lance said.
"Try that button already," Max said.
"This is as..." Max said.
"..weirdly cheesable as mettaurs on a drums...tick?" Lance finished, surprising himself. "Did I just say like you right now?"
After a few more hours of random pressing of buttons they were almost done.
"And now, that navi-clone thingy..." Lance said.
"..that I'll be cloned... weird." Max said.
"Lets try some hidden data in you..." Lance said.
"...so that this guy is more like us than Anno," Max said.
Lance and Max had become used to them completing and reading eachothers minds, even though they did not know how they were doing it.
"Right then.. navi clone activated and..." Max said.
"...you're being cloned!" Lance said, laughing.
NAVI CREATION COMPLETE. STATUSES:
NAME: ProtoDodgeMan α
TYPE: Normal
"So we're done. At least the program tells us we are..." Lance said.
"...but I wonder what happened after I was cloned.." Max said.
"...so lets just recolor this guy a little more..."
"...so Anno likes it better than ProtoMan."
When Anno returned, he was completely, utterly amazed.
"How the heck did you do it? IT LOOKS BETTER THAN PROTOMAN! EVEN BETTER! IT LOOKS BETTER! SO MUCH BETTER! SO COOL!" Anno bounced around the room in joy. Then taking out his PET, he took ProtoDodgeMan into it.
"Ahh.... wow. So er.... hello Anno?" ProtoDodgeMan said.
"IT KNOWS ME!!!" Anno shouted.
"CLAM DOWN!!" Max shouted.
"We gave it some memory data from us..." Lance said.
"...so that it would be better." Max said. Anno and ProtoDodgeMan did not notice that they talked together.
"Man thanks a lot!! I owe you BIG BIG time! Why not keep that CD as my thanks?" Anno offered.
"Er.. okay!" Lance said. "Thanks!"
"No way! You guy's rock! Now I'm gonna go make some battle folders and stuff, meet you if you come online today near this area!" Anno said.
"See you guys later!" ProtoDodgeMan shouted, and he and Anno dissappeared down the stairs.
"Hyper, no?" Max asked.
"Verily muches." Lance said, his ears aching. "They shout loud too."
"Oh well, lets get some practice now for tomorrow, good thing it's still Sunday today." Max said.
"Yeah. For the first time I'm actually looking forward to a Monday...." Lance said.
"We're gonna win it?" Max asked.
"'Course we are! Why not?" Lance asked.
"What if ProtoDodgeMan and those guys are in it?" Max asked.
"We'll just beat 'em, like we'll do to everyone else." Lance said.
-------->THE SPOILER CARD!!!!!! |
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