Tenshi no GEOFFMAN.EXE!! (i am teh 1337)

Geoff Mendicino

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2084985/1/

Probably the best FF in the WORLD.

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EDIT: I was posting my serious FF, but I accidently edited this
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**Mari** · Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 1:03 pm Post subject:

Looks good, but I think you need to lay off the authornotesness. I think they're longer than the prologue itself, and that miiiiight be against ff.net's rules if I'm not mistaken <.<; or maybe I'm being too nazi-like.

I'll add more to this review later.
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Hatsuya Kanzaki · Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 5:43 am Post subject:

Your putting Netto and Rockman on the major TRIBULATION!!! Keep it up so that I'll watch on it! Read mine and let's fuse our works and give everyone in EXE Universe some painful tribulation...(hehehe!!!)

That's really nice...
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Geoff Mendicino · Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 5:53 am Post subject:

Midnight · Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 7:17 am Post subject:

So far, it's borderline. I do agree with Mari, that you should stop flaunting yourself a bit. I don't want to sit at the computer and slog through propaganda promoting yourself, and get to the story. So far, all I see is self-promotion and not much of a story.

Perhaps this will change when more is added.
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Geoff Mendicino · Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 12:44 pm Post subject:

Midnight · Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 2:17 pm Post subject:

Well then, now you know. So does Mari, as was evident on April 1st.
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Atreyu · Net Battler Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 87

This isn't funny. It may seem funny to you, but it is not. I have no idea why you would even think it's funny. It also breaks several fanfiction.net rules, which also isn't funny. And did you even ask the author of Tenshi no Rei before writing a parody of her fic?

Try to put more thought into your work next time.
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Midnight · Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 4:22 pm Post subject:

^^This is why I am so damn serious all of the time.
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Hikari Angel · Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 4:51 pm Post subject:

funny- maybe to you, for me no.

the notes are larger than the fic, and, aren't you coping tenshi no rei's story line and senteces?

personally, try and rewrite it, with these ideas:

ask before fanficing someone's fanfic
do not promote yourself (it's against the rules)
get someone to proof read your story, like a friend, sister

if I am breaking the rules, i am very sorry. but i just wanted to say something.
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Geoff Mendicino · Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 6:34 am Post subject:

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Geoff Mendicino · Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 8:42 am Post subject:

If I had a quarter for everytime I heard that come out of someone.

*stamps himself with picture*

Now, may we lock this?
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**Mari** · Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 6:55 pm Post subject:

Gladly.

And I think I told you to save that damn picture in your hard drive instead of hotlinking from my server. -.-
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