Painted with paint!:O

YurikoOtaku · Net Agent Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 272

I have no idea where to put this,so I'll put this in Fanart since I painted it with Paint.

It doesn't look very good,ne?

Juno · Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 43

It looks good.

But, what you need to work on is:
-His head is narrow, but isn't too narrow. Just make chin a little more distant from his neck.
-The his waste line seems too big, just slim it little.
-His left "FireArm" looks bigger then his right, which is suppose to be vise-visa since his right "firearm" is closer toward my POV(Point of Veiw).

But, the thing I like:
-The shading you put into Burnman.
-All the details are in the picture.
-The time you put into it. :]

Don't worry, it looks good, no one is perfect. I draw pics in MS Paint too, and I still can find errors in all my drawings.

But, for next time, have more confindence in your art work. Don't say:

anime21 · Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 1:14 pm Post subject:

I think that that is better then I can do in paint ^^;; But I suggest taking juno's advice. I like how it is starting out though. I think it is a good start. You'll never know where to start practicing on unless you start drawing. ^-^ Keep up the good start. ^-^
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YurikoOtaku · Net Agent Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 272

o noz revive :O

The reason why the right firearm is smaller because I didn't "bold" it. I first used one pixel to draw it (omg) but then I used the bigger pixels.That's why it appears smaller.

And now that I see it,yes,his waist line IS quite thick.XP

Thanks for the critique ^^

Edit: Decided to re-design it but because I am a lazy bum, I drew only the head.