Dimension Travel

[Blue Bommer]

In a unknown place, in Dimension Alpha 4, lights started to flicker, once, twice, 10 times.
“I never thought this could be done” This voice belonged to a kid, who had come up with something unexpected. All because he got hit on the head. “ This can be modified, an unlimited time, how will I find them, best install a GPS.” The 10 GPS units gave off a spark, a virus had infected the units. “I can sell the holo generator battle chip game gloves at the convention.”

“Hey Dan!” An echo ran through Daniel's head like a explosion in the grand canyon! “What! I’m leaving for a convention cruse in 1 day and no good by?” More like 1 hour, get going!” “WHAT!” Yes, the time was 7:15, they told him to be early, Boston was the last stop. “See you in 3 days, got to go! “ He didn't ask for a ride, with 10 copies of the chip programs, PA lists, and custom programs, all to sell.

Using a C-Slider, he made it with 5 minuets to spear. “Man, I should speed that up, Dan J, Rockman/Megaman Convention.” The ticket holder looked like he would rather eat a razor blade, but he forced a smile. “ Room 302, do you have a display and or something to sell’, or are you a window shopper?” “Display and Selling.” Your in, go on” Going to his room, he started to think. If I could do that, I could build PET’s. So In 2 hours, Daniel created 5 navies, 5 PET glasses, and 5 navi customizers. “ I’m out of ideas, I don’t even remember how I built the thing, I can hardly remember how the work. Well, better sleep on it, this really can take it out of you. I really need to stop talking to myself.” As soon as he slept, the gloves and PET glasses where being reprogramed in the holo syntasisers, shields, and GPS programs.


I am in need of people who wish to be in the story. Post and tell me. Also PM the name, navi name, or your net name, souls, and glove or Glasses, first come fist serve. And a note, the gloves let you use Battle Chips, and enter the net, Glasses, let you have a navi to come into the real world, to fight, hologhaphicly.

[Blue Bommer]

I almost forgot about this, so, I'm going to see how this goes, and, review, I don't care if it's bad, I'm still new to story writing, but I have practeced, so just wait.
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Chapter 2 Over the network

“Sir, we have the displays in 20 minuets, 3 are unaccounted for, I recommend blowing the horn for a wake up call” The officer with the suggestion was acting as if they where in WW3. “Easy now, this is a convention, not a battle ship. Still, that is a good idea, sound the horn, announce the convention.”

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The fog horn sharply woke Daniel, who fell in a tangled thud. “ Ow, note to self, buckle self to hammock. Ack!” Knowing he was late, he grabbed the box, and ran to the sign in , and set up. “10 PET glasses, cheek, 10 battle navi gloves, ch… wait! 1 pair, wait,” *lets, see, C-Slider, activate!* “I was using one, now where did it go, what the, AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!” The PET’s and gloves began to spark, glow, and so did his arms! “I’’m... wearing...” The seenery changed, and all of a sudden, all went black.

Dimension Delta 4

“Sir, we have a major sensor readings in sector 18! “ A Sci-Lab worker, who’s job it was to find possible dimensional areas, had the highest reading on the record. “Send a net savor, this could get messy.” “With these readings! We need all more than 1, Lets send…”

“NETTO KUN, FOR THE 78TH TIME, WAKE UP, YOUR LUCKY IT’S THE WEEKEND, BUT IT’S STILL 12:30!” Rockman, once again, was trying the impossible, trying to wake up Netto on a Saturday. The only 3 ways to have succeeded, Food, a Net Savior mission, and Meriu. As much as they tried to deny it, it was as clear as day. Even with him and Roll. “Hey, Netto, Meriu’s going to be angry if you don’t hurry up!” Rockman never missed seeing Netto fall out of bed in a mess, yet he wonders how Netto always falls for it. *Beep beep beep* “Rockman, contact Netto, this is a level 10 alert. We, we, what happened to him?” Meljin had called for the mission, but Netto’s current state had distracted him. “Eh, he, just isn’t a morning person.” “ Well, we have a dimensional area, we think, it might not be the biggest, but we have over the chart readings, fill Netto in when, he, gets untangled.” As Meljin disappeared, Rockman faced a problem, not the readings, but Netto. “ROCKMAN! Don’t ever do that again, no buts, I’m getting something to eat.” Netto said this with aggravation. “Sorry Netto-kun, but we do have a job, and you do need the exorcize curry boy.”

“What was that?!” I’m scared! Wow, never happened last year.” Scared convention screamed those phrases, last thing they know, there sailing, then a flash of light,then this. There in a place they don’t know, even though it look’s familiar. But perhaps the most scared, was Daniel, all of the gloves, PETs, ant battle chips, were turning into energy, and fusing with his gloves, and he was pixleating.
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Next time,
"Help, me,"
"Netto-kun, we have to help, just look"
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[Kupo.EXE]

Its quite good but you should pay more attention to it and maybe explain more clearly what your inventions are. It could be longer and it doesn't make much sense so before anyone volunteers you should explain what you mean cause I am a little stupified right now.

[Blue Bommer]

OK, lets clear some things up. The gloves were going to humans be able to Net Battle like navies, with all the little navi perks. The glasses, just PETs, in need of customizing, but are now gone. The volunteers, to be Net savors, from the cruse. More gloves might be indroduced, but, it will take time.

EDIT: I am not the best speller, so I use spell check, but I can be tiered, so give me a break.
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[CrossFusionStarman]

That clears some of it up. I like it so far, but I noticed several spelling mistakes(You wrote exorcise instead of exercise, and I thought Rock and Netto were becoming monks or something.). Other than that, no complaints at all.
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[Blue Bommer]

Ok, any volunteers for beta readers will be appreciated. And any one who want’s to be a net saver, or cruse passenger to good, bad, or pop’s up to help. Tell me first, and it’ll happen.
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Chapter 3: And though Den Tech

The cruse passengers were still scared, but mixed emotions, and fan girls screaming, was just around the corner. “Netto-kun, I don’t see anything on the net, not even a Met, you?” “Maybe, about 100 or so people, and they look, different, somehow.” Rockman and Netto where ready for a fight, not people.

“I know, this is too calm, until you look closely at the crowd.” A voice said, in a tone that would make a vulcan jealous. “Enzan!” “He, is correct, get ready.” “Laika?” This was very bad, none of them knew that all 3 of them would be there. “Take a look.” Laika pointed to the crowd. “Netto-kun, look, there, some are scared, some, seem, bored? Strange, and some happy.” “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!” A scream like that of someone who is being eaten, and possibly worse, alive, pierced the heavens. Everyone looked around and saw what was daniel, but they couldn't tell. He was now surrounded by a bright light, he felt like his entire body was covered in acid, lava, and sharp, pointy objects doctor use. “Meijin, we need a dimensional area, now!” 3 seconds later, 2 net saviors cross fused, and the third, Enzan, well, “Oh my god, EVERYBODY, IT’S ENZAN!” He was running for his life from rabid fan girls who would most likely take his clothes, and sell them on E-bay.

“Should we help him?” “No, lets take care of in first.” As RRockman, and RSearchman ran for Daniel, his pain let down enough to talk.
“Help, me. On, side, good.”
“Netto-kun, look,” It was clear he was not in any position to move, let alone attack. “We have to help him.” Netto knew Rockman was right. “No sense in attacking, we, should help, it’s our job.” RSearchman said slowly. "I think I know how to help.” Netto prepared. “You, an idea? Who are you?” “Shut up Laika. Roll soul!” As soon as he started the soul unison, a ball of light, one for every soul unison he ever gained, came from him, to Dan.

With this, the pain subsided, but the gloves had fused with his DNA, and with all the other items. He had become a navi. Dan now had the power of all the soul unisons. “ What, what happened?” Netto’s soul unisons failed, so obviously, he was scared. “I..I think you just saved my life, and that I, somehow now have your soul unisons, and am responsible for all the people. Can you bring down the Dimensional area? I think…” In mid sentence, he was engulfed in a bright light. Soddenly, he started to, seemingly cross fuse. When the light faded, he had a blue helmet, that encased his entire head. It had gold ear covers, 2 Crystal rings diagonal ear to ear, and a jewel in the center. His gloves where blue with a weight ring. His boots where the same, only with black rings. Around his neck was a paper thin weight ring, with a knot in the back. A standard black jump suit with blue strips leading from the side of the boot’s and gloves leading to the icon, which was blank.

“…that I’m now turning into a navi, so, maybe without a dimensional area, I’ll turn back into a human.” “Listen to him, and HELP ME!” Enzan realized that he could not do any thing bad without the Dimensional area because they did no harm, and he was a bit crazy from all the running. “Why not, we can always form another one.” Netto said, giving in. ”all right, Meijin, cut off Dimensional area.” and with that, the Dimensional area, along with cross fusion, vanished. Although, Dan was still in Navi mode.

“What? How?” Daniel was shocked, how was this possible? “I knew not to trust him” Laika was ready, and willing to call Meijin, but. “Stop, how about a compromise? I’ll go to Sci-Lab, and you study me, ok? And, I’ll help you help Enzan.” This action confused Netto and Rockman. “Netto-kun, we should help Enzan, and study him. Netto knew Rockman was right, this was an offer they could nor refuse. “As much as I don’t like it, you have a deal, help Enzan first.” Laika still didn’t trust him, so he would play along, after all, they could just put up another Dimensional area. “Let’s see,” Dan know a fan battle chip could help, and he knew they fussed with him.

“Fan battle chip in,” And just like that, a Fan battle chip appeared in his and, and a battle chip slot on his left arm. “Download!” Using the fan, he separated the mad fans (No pun intended) and Enzan. Quickly, Enzan ran, and Laika and Netto brought Daniel to Sci-Lab. And recapped everything to Yuuichiro Hikari. “Yes, this is strange, let’s see.” Daniel was standing an a pod, with all sort’s of machines scanning him, for 48 hours.
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Next Time

“Jack in, Megaman”
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