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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 12:45 am    Post subject: Requests - Currently on Hiatus! Reply with quote

Ok, I've felt a bit more into writting fanfiction again lately, sooo... I discussed this a bit with Neko and she encouraged me to flex my writting muscles through requests. And with Mari's permission... here's a few little rules

Rules
1. Because I devote most of my time to school and drawing I probably won't be able to pull more then 2 max 3 fanfics per day, I'll get to finish them all as they are requested.
2. They'll be just One shot. The lenght of it might vary, but they'll all be just one shot.
3. Due to the rules of the forum I cannot describe anything lemony. I can hint some sort of 'intimacy' but nothing more then just hinting and I'm not going to base the fanfics on that.
4. I can easily draw a blank if some things are asked from me. Please try to be a bit specific of what you'd like to see on the fanfic. Also, bear in mind there's some games I have skipped over so there's somethings I might not be able to do. I will not just kill random characters just because. If you want to see someone's 'death' it has to be something other then "kill Roll because I hate her!".
5. Keep in mind as well that I'm open to write about anything and I might have requests that include strange pairings, or same gender relationships, or whatever disturbing things. If you don't like this kind of material, please do not flame me nor the person that asked for such fiction.
6.- Two request max from one person at the same time please. Once I've finished your requests feel free to ask for more. XP

I think that's about it. yes I absolutely borrowed these from Neko, she rocks. Surprised
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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 12:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ergo...

Laika and Pride, each in their respective countries, reflect upon their meeting and their possible relationship which can't exist due to their difference in rank.

I suck at descriptions X__x

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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 3:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay... I have never tried this pairing, let's see how I pull it. Excuse mein crappeh english.

Fairy Tale
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"If only real life could mimic fairy tales." Delicate platinum blonde eyebrows curved in a deep frown. "But fairy tales are not my style, are they?" Princess Pride sighed softly as she set down a little tea cup on her desk.

"First Netto, and now Laika..." Pride groaned softly in annoyance at her current dilema. There was nothing worse than the troubles of the heart, and Pride experimented that on first hand.

The young princess glanced back to her cup of tea that rested next to her PET, where her loyal Knightman watched her silently, unable to do anything to easy his mistress' mind. Not even a week had passed since Pride returned from her diplomatic mission and her encounter with the Sharro officials, her encounter with Laika. Her mind was clouded by thoughts about the net saviour.

Knightman knew the princess very well, he could interpretate her corporal language and her glances. It was obvious to him that his operator was attracted to Sharro's top Net Savior, and he knew that her position as head of Creamland forbid her from any relationship, specialy one with just a soldier.

Princess Pride tried to concentrate on her paper work to no avail -- her mind was far away, somewhere in Sharro. If only she could give up on her role as princess, be just a normal girl and be able to love and be loved back. She wondered what were Laika's thoughts about her -- she knew he showed some interest on her after all, but what was the nature of that interest was not of her knowledge.

****************

Laika walked slowly around the quarters of the Sharro facilities he had been ordered to custody, "Report Searchman." he spoke softly and lowly, almost uninterestedly.

"The perimeter is clear, Sir." Searchman replied as he was recalled into his PET.

Giving a last glance to the area, the net savior sighed and turned around, walking towards his quarters, "I suppose that's all for tonight."

For the first time in a long time Laika welcomed his rest. His mind had been plagued by images of the beautiful princess of Creamland. He wasn't good at dealing with feelings and emotions that his logic couldn't comprehend -- and feeling attracted to a princess was surely beyond his understanding.

Laika couldn't remember the last time he felt attracted to a girl in such way, the princess was like no woman he had met before. She wasn't the average lady of high social status he was so used to dealing with. Princess Pride had an air of elegance -- and at the same time, a streak of tomboyish charm. She was different from all women he had ever met before, and he had to admit he felt attracted to that beautiful princess of gentle yet wild heart.

Laika frowned deeply as he set his PET down on the night stand. A painful realization finally struck him. She was a princess and he was only a soldier of a neighbor land, even as a top class net savior, and one of the three agents able to perform cross fusion, he was a lower rank that could never court the princess of such important nation. Laika couldn't fully understand why this realization hurt him so much.

"Laika, Sir... The matters the mind cannot comprehend, are for the heart to deal with." Searchman spoke softly.

Laika blinked a few times, his navi's voice bringing him back to reality. "What are you talking about?" He asked confusedly.

Searchman smiled a little, amused by his master's difficulty to deal with emotions "Sir, there are some things that obey no logic and make no sense. When the mind cannot find an answer, you have to look for it here." The sniper navi placed a hand on his chest over his heart.

"I don't know what are you talking about" Laike frowned, glancing away as he prepared to sleep, trying to hide his blush from his net navi, embarassed that Searchman could notice his musings and troubles. "What do you know about listening to the heart?" Laika asked curiously.

With a tiny smile the navi replied, "That is something you'll have to discover on your own, Sir."

**************************

Princess Pride rolled on her bed, her mind drifting back and forth between thoughts about Laika, grief gracing her young face. If real life could be like fairy tales, she'd have her knight to roam the world with. If life could be like a fairy tale she could have her happy ending, and someone to love freely. But life was not a fairy tale... or it was?
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This didn't come out quite as I planned, x.x shouldn't write this late at night. XD I hope it didn't suck too much, Nazne.
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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 9:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like your writting style Plantman. Your stories are fun to read. ^_^

Hm... a request... could you write a story about Medi and Gutsman going on a date together, with Medi slowly growing to like Gutsman? I'm sorry I'm not decriptive enough ^^;;
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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 11:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Plantman wrote:
"What do you know about listening to the heart?" Laika asked curiously.

With a tiny smile the navi replied, "That is something you'll have to discover on your own, Sir."
ZOMG ROCKMANXSEARCHMAN!!! w00t XD Anyway I liked this fic, If only they knew how much they loved each other ;-;
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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 12:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

...XDDD

Whee, Planty~ *glomp* Laika's such an asshole at times it's hard to remember he still has feelings. You did a good job. XD

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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 2:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh my, witting Gutsman's gonna be a really hard one XD

A Charming Prince.
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What was she thinking when she accepted coming out to Net City with Gutsman? Medi sighed softly as she allowed the large navi to literally drag her around the city, like an excited child that wanted to show its mother the newest toy in the mall. She tried to smile and take things with humor, she couldn't help it, she had no heart to reject Gutsman's invitation after Roll wandered off with Rockman.

Medi felt pity for Gutsman, she could tell he felt something for Roll, but Roll didn't retribute the feeling with the same intensity. How could she blame her? Anyone would prefer someone like Rockman at any time, Medi herself felt some sort of attraction to Rockman as well, but what was the nature of such attraction was not clear for her yet.

But Gutsman wasn't a bad navi nor the worst possible date a girl could have, he was just... like a big boy with a great heart but the worst ability to show his intentions. And Medi tried her best to remind herself all Gutsman wanted was someone to pay him company and treat him like he was worth of respect.

Gutsman smiled cheerfully down to Medi, describing his favorite places on the city to her, trying to sound interesting to her, but all he managed was to sound like a little boy showing off his favorite places to a new friend. Medi couldn't help but laugh softly, she had to admit Gutsman was cute in such excitement. Her musings suddenly interrupted as she felt herself rising from the ground below and held on the larger one's arms.

Before she could even protest Gutsman began to talk to her again, explaining every little thing he liked about whatever place they were at. The Nurse navi understood that all Gutsman did was just carry her so she wouldn't get tired to keep up with his pace. There was so much innocence in Gutsman, he wasn't a charming prince of attractive figure and perfect manners, but he was kind and had noble feelings, he needed someone to love him and accept his protection. Someone to guide him and teach him, to give him balance. Medi smiled a bit more as she let Gutsman tour her around, maybe she could help him to find that balance, and discover what else lied beneath, she had the feeling, she would like what she could find.

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Harrr... I stink at witting this kind of things. I'm so full of fluff XP
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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 5:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is wonderful, Plant-chan! *hugs* You did a great job expressing Medi's emotions about Gutsman!

I need to do something for you... thank you so much!! X3
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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2005 8:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oooooh, Planty. No, I'm not asking for Regal x Narcy. You already made a drawing for that. XD;

So, this request is going to be more normal. Okay so I'd like this one-shot to take place after RockMan.exe Stream episode 19. The story will be about a Slur giving a man (describe him anyway you want) recieving Asteroid StarMan. A-StarMan is used by the man for a movie about navis and it's rather popular. Narcy gets all jealous about his success and attacks him. Then Nenji is somehow magically involved. :O

Errr...yeah. Do as you please with this. :<
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PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2005 1:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have a request, comadre. A Yuuichirou x Haruka one. Let's say... eh... the day they met. A blind date. In spanish, if possible. :O

...hey, I'm the damn mod and I can allow any form of fanfiction I damn wan---*shotshotshot* Er, yes, Malik and I had agreed that fanfiction in other languages is allowed on these forums. And you didn't say anything about foreign languages. XD
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 12:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Planty~, I'd like to request a fic about A. Shadowman reflexing upon the deeds of his predecessor Shadowman and a small glimpse with A. Napalmman telling him that there are humans in the world that are good and that himself found a kind NetOp like Nenji and then a feeling growing in him of distrust against his current NetOp and a plan to leave him and find his own kind NetOp. purrreaseee~ :3
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 12:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This one took me so long and I think it came out rather shitty XDD

Okay, I picked a random name for the OP XD

Forever Strawberry
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Scouting through the network, observing human beings, selecting those of troubled hearts and weak nature, such was Slur's duty. She had to perform the testing of the human kind for the final judgement.

Slur had to admit she was surprised with the outcome of her latest testing. She was intrigued, could be possible the story would repeat itself? Would another human being be able to bring hope and trust into her Asteroid Navis?

After scouting the net for a few hours, Duo's minion finally found an intersting prospect. She had found many peculiar humans in the past, with all kind of backgrounds and ambicions, so she was used to all kind of 'strange' behaviour. From her place on the net she could see a man talking to his net navi in a frustrated way. A film maker none the less, passionate of his work and his vision, and yet lacking all possible elements he needed to bring his vision to the big screen.

Slur smiled slightly as she made herself visible in the few screens the man had on the room, "My name is Slur" She spoke on a soft, somewhat gentle tone. She promised to the young man the means to acomplish his dreams and goals as the standard navi on the dark blue PET disolved.

The man could only hear faintly Slur's final words before she disappeared and the dimensional chip popped out -- his attention was all for the small navi that now inhabited his PET. The slightly alien-looking navi smiled up to his new, attonished master.

"Hello, I am Starman!" The navi greeted cheerfully, finding his master's reaction rather amusing, "I'm here to help you make your dreams come true!"

******************

Against all his expectatives, Starman found himself helping his master to make movies. He thought at first, that he'd be used to rob, destroy, create chaos, even in the most rediculous forms of vandalism. But alas, his troubled master was too kind to try to use his powers in illegal or abusive ways.

At first, Starman thought his Operator was just a whimp, but he obeyed him nonetheless, thinking to get rid of him if he ever could slot in his dimensional chip. But Edric, his Operator, was smarter than he first thought, keeping the dimensional chip away, as he didn't trust what that unknow chip could do.

But the small white navi had grown to like his operator's ways and objectives. Movie making had some strange charm and attraction for him, and as time went by, he felt more and more connected to Edric's love for films and film making.

Starman grinned satisfied as he prepared the edition of their latest project, a movie filmed enterely in the Network and dedicated to net navis. He was particulary pleased with this movie, and he was pretty sure Edric's vision would be of the liking of enough theather's owners to present it on the big screen. He could always sneak the movie in the theaters if the need arised, even though he knew Edric wouldn't like him to do that.

**********************

Edric's movie, called Forever Strawberry was quickly accepted in several theaters, already on its fourth week in the top 10 most viewed movies. Just as Starman promised, he had made his Operator's dreams come true. But not everything was roses and wine, someone wasn't very happy about Edric's successful movie at all.

"This is unexcusable! Why there's nothing pink here?! There should be pink somewhere with that title! Oh, just look at those horrible angles!" Narcy Hide complained to his navi, Videoman.

Videoman couldn't really see anything particulary wrong on the movie in terms of direction and photography, but he had to admit he wasn't too keen on the movie's topic. A film about the 'humanity' of net navis and their relationship with human beings all from the perspective of the navis.

Truth was... Narcy was jealous of the success of this unknown man's movie, and the fact there was nothing pink on it! He had to do something about this -- for the honor of strawberries' ever lasting pink.

*********************

Rokushakudama Nenji walked into the movie theater, looking around slightly as he approached the threeshold of the room where the movie he was suggested to watch would be displayed. He wasn't much of a movies person, but he was told the plot of the movie would be familiar to him and his new navi, Napalmman.

He tilted his head slightly as he found a seat of his liking, looking at the posters on the wall, displaying the protagonist, a small white navi of big black eyes.

Finally, as the movie began, Nenji and Napalmman watched the movie with little interest at first. Soon enough, the plot of the movie became bizarrely familiar for the two. 'Strawberry' was the name of the protagonist, a small, and lonely navi, abandoned by its owner, wandering the network and struggling to survive alone -- Strawberry wasn't other than Starman with a red color scheme.

Napalmman could feel personaly more drawn towards the plot of the movie, as it was very similar to his own story. As he suspected, the story began to lead to the meeting of Strawberry with a human, running away to occupy someone else's PET in hopes to hide from some Net City policemen.

But as the movie progressed, showing the meeting between Strawberry and the owner of the PET he ran into, evil deeds were about to take place by the hand of Narcy and Videoman. Soon enough the movie theater was shoken by the unexpected attack of the giant Asteroid Videoman, intending to destroy all the theaters that displayed his operator's hated movie.

This caught obvious attention of the Net Saviors and from Edric himself, someone was attacking those that accepted to display his movie, and he had to find out why. He grabbed his PET and some battle chips before taking out towards the theater that was currently under attack.

*****************

Nenji had sent Napalmman into the net to try to help out Netto and Rockman to battle A.Videoman, though it was very little what Napalmman could do, confined into the net. All he could do was try and manipulate machinery around the area to obstacle Videoman's attacks.

The purple navi growled in frustration as he noticed a familiar figure dashing towards him.

"S-Strawberry?!" He gasped in surprise, never expecting to see the protagonist of the film dashing by.

Starman stopped and frowned slightly, noticing immediately this navi was an Asteroid like him, "I am not Strawberry" he crossed his arms a bit annoyed "My name's Starman, I'm an asteroid navi... like you" his eyes narrowed slightly, forgetting momentarily about the reason he was there in the first place.

Napalmman gasped and narrowed his eyes, he knew Asteroid Navis weren't precisely made for good deeds, "What are you doing in here?"

Starman snorted and glanced to a monitor that showed the battle between R. Rockman and Videoman, "My Operator sent me here, that navi is destroying the theaters that show our movie".

"That's also an asteroid." The purple navi frowned, not sure of what to think about the smaller one.

"I can see that." The white navi frowned, unsure himself of what to do. He couldn't do much either in the net, and he knew if his operator tried to slot the dimensional chip in, he'd be controled by the dark power. He couldn't help but wonder about his own situation, unlike others, some of these asteroid navis seemed to have some sort of loyalty and connection to their operators, even when the dimensional chip was on effect. Would he be able to retain the growing bond between him and his own operator, if the chip was ever slotted in?

"You know, if there's friendship, trust and hope, the darkness will not prevail on us." Napalmman spoke at the evident struggle the other asteroid was in.

The smaller navi glanced away for a moment, "I am not sure I have hope on humans yet..." he frowned deeply, searching inside himself for an answer.

"I didn't have hope at first, but Nenji showed me there's things that's worth to believe in. He gave me faith on human beings." the taller navi spoke softly, knowing first hand about the other's doubts, "Wasn't that what your movie was about? Hope for the future? Faith on the human beings? Another chance for a brighter tomorrow?"

Starman sighed and nodded as he was recalled onto his PET, waving good bye to Napalmman, he knew now what he had to do.

***************

As the battle progressed, Edric found himself helpless and upset. Not only was his project subject of attack, but he also had to stand to hear Narcy's annoying voice gloating on his imminent victory. He didn't know what he did to trigger all this, but he had to do something to put a stop to it.

"Edric, the dimensional chip! Slot it in!" Starman demanded from his PET, determined to help out his Operator.

With a doubtful glance Edric picked the dimensional chip and after some hessitation finally slotted it in, a wave of light pushed him away against a wall as Starman began to materialize in the real world.

Closing his hand into a tight fist, A. Starman charged towards Videoman, quickly engaging on a fierce fight, as the battle continued the power of the dimensional chip dropped a veil of darkness on the navi's mind. Not minding what destruction he left behind during the process of defeating Videoman.

Soon enough Videoman was rendered helpless against the furious assault of the other asteroid, forced back into his PET. But under the daze of the chip Starman did not stop as his opponent retreated, hurling quick and powerful punches, he continued Videoman's work, destroying the theater he originally came to save. An exhausted R. Rockman tried to stop the asteroid navi, but was soon stopped by Edric who called onto his navi's name.

Starman couldn't fully understand the man's voice, his mind clouded by the influence of the chip. But as he tried to lift the man in his hand to crush him, something inside of him reminded him who the man was. Slowly he set the man down, asking him to remove the chip and destroy it for good. Edric glanced at his navi, giving a compassionate pat to the other's large hand in a reassuring fashion before removing the chip, recalling Starman back into the PET.

**********************

Slur smiled from her place in the net, watching the events that just took place -- perhaps there was still hope for this race, but the trails were not over yet, and only time could tell if the Earth Erasure would proceed.

***********************

"I'm glad to see you're doing fine." Rockman greeted the new Asteroid that joined their side. Glad to see another human was able to bring faith into an Asteroid Navi.

"You're going to work on more films, Strawberry?" Napalmman asked casually, happy for the other former asteroid.

"You can bet on that. And my name is Starman, Nenjiro." Starman grinned at the purple navi that immediately corrected his name a few times. "Say, you guys would like to help out on the next movie?" With that, the small navi and his new friends walked away towards Net City, sharing thoughts and jokes about what future would bring for them.
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 11:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'd like to test you by giving you the challenge of witing a Shun fic. As long as you don't abuse of humiliate Shun in any extensive way, you can do whatever you want.
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to pull anything decent about Shun. I haven't played Batle Network 2, and I haven't read the manga, he doesn't appear in the anime either. So I know absolutely nothing about him n.n;a
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Very cute story, Planty. I liked how you made StarMan live. ;o;

Ehhh, not trying to complain, but I thought the fight scene was pretty dull. That's it. Don't kill me. >____>;
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I don't like to focus on fight scenes, first because I'm not skilled enough with the language to pull these, second I am not a 'skilled' net battler to pull out decent battle movements and chips. I seriously lack in that department. Plus I'd rather focus in the feelings and perspective then on the action.
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 1:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Plantman wrote:
I don't like to focus on fight scenes, first because I'm not skilled enough with the language to pull these, second I am not a 'skilled' net battler to pull out decent battle movements and chips. I seriously lack in that department. Plus I'd rather focus in the feelings and perspective then on the action.


Ahhh, well I didn't know that. XD;

You pulled off the feelings quite fine. Although, it seems kind of hard to do in an one-shot fic like this. :O
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Yay for many languages. Blame Mari for requesting in spanish XD

Cada Pequeña Cosa
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"Papá, realmente no tengo tiempo para esto." Yuuichirou suspiró exhasperado, no muy interesado en la idea de una cita a ciegas. No era la primera vez que su padre, Tadashi Hikari, jugaba al casamentero con él, insistiendo que ya estaba en edad de sentar cabeza y darle un nieto o dos. Pero el jóven Hikari estaba muy dedicado a sus estudios, y sus previas citas a ciegas, arregladas por su padre habían resultado en grandes fiascos que no deseaba seguir experimentando.

"Oh vamos, te aseguro que esta chica te va a encantar! Mi compañero Wily la conoce, dice que es una chica adorable!" Tadashi insitió, litralmente vistiendo a su hijo.

"Eso se supone que debe hacerme sentir mejor?" Yuuichirou negó con la cabeza antes de finalmente tomar un corbatín y anudarlo, tratando de terminar con esto tan rápidamente como fuera posible.

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Haruka se miró al espejo un momento, no muy segura sobre la cita, el Dr. Wily insitió en que conociera al jóven hijo de su compañero en Sci Labs, pero ella no estaba muy segura. Ella no tenía idea qué esperaría de su cita un dedicado y brillante estudiante.

La joven se sentó en una banca del parque de Densan Citym esperando nerviosamente a su cita. No pasó mucho tiempo antes de que un joven de cabello castaño se acercara, vestido elegantemente en un tuxedo, y sonriendo muy ligeramente.

Haruka no pudo evitar sonrojarse cuando él se detuvo junto a ella, sonriendo cordialmente. "Eres Haruka?" él preguntó casualmente, bastante sorprendido de la apariencia de esta joven. Ella no se parecía a todas las otras chicas que su padre había arrglado que saliera, la mayoría de ellas eran muy frívolas para su gusto y poco interesantes para conversar.

"Sí, soy yo. Tú eres Yuuchirou Hikari?" Haruka sonrió alegremente, mientras se ponía de pié, iniciando una conversación casual con el joven Hikari, encontrándolo muy agradable, sientiéndose mucho más cómoda ante la situación.

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Yuuichirou se encontraba muy complacido con la evolución de la velada, nunca imaginó que el Dr. Wily fuera tan bueno cuadrando parejas, pero lo cierto es que Yuuichirou había disfrutado mucho de la compañía de Haruka y no le desagradaba la idea de salir con ella nuevamente. Ella era muy bella, alegre, interesante y tenía un caracter determinado y fuerte.

Haruka por su parte encontraba a Yuuichirou no sólo atractivo e interesante sino también muy dedicado, gentil y apasionado por sus intereses. Ella no podía evitar preguntarse si una chica como ella tendría oportunidad con un chico como Yuuichirou, pero valía la pena intentar.

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El jóven Yuuichirou sonrió ligeramente mientras conducía a su cita de vuelta a su hogar, pensando por unos momentos si invitarla a salir nuevamente, Haruka lo había cautivado y no deseaba que esta fuera la última vez que vieran. "Dime, Haruka... tienes algo que hacer la próxima semana?" Él preguntó casualmente mientras acompañaba a la jóven de cabello obscuro a la puerta de su casa.

"No, no creo que tenga planes. ¿Por qué la pregunta?" Haruka sonrió jugetona, sospechando las intenciones del jóven de ojos café.

"Bueno, tengo algo de tiempo libre la próxima semana... te gustaría ir al cine?" Yuuichirou preguntó riéndo un poco, algo nervioso.

"Me encantaría!" La bella jóven sonrió alegremente, despidiéndose de su cita con un rápido beso en la mejilla "Gracias por la linda velada, nos vemos la próxima semana!" antes de que Yuuichirou pudiera reaccionar, Haruka desapareció tras el umbral de su hogar.

Yuuchirou sonrió ampliamente, sonrojándose un poco por el beso que recibiera. Caminando camino a su propio hogar, el científico aspirante pensaba que tal vez esto era sólo el principio de algo mucho más grande. Poco sospechaba, lo que el futuro traería para ambos.

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there you go comadre Surprised cheesy and short, but since you especified a blind date XDD
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ya ve, comadre, le salen mejor que las chafadas (me atrevería a usar otro adjetivo, pero no quiero que los/las fangirls/fanboys me descuarticen) que publican en Conexión Manga XDDD

Er, I mean, thank you. Very good indeed. ^^
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2005 5:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn. You think studying Spanish for six years would make me fluent. I am anything but. Sad

When I have more time, I'll try to decipher it.
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