OT - Boktai 2 - Imperfect World

Cool Fire Bird · Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2398377/1/

Dark clouds once again loom over San Miguel. But this time tragedy strikes only one, in the guise of a blessing.

Spoilers for Boktai 2 are in this. You've been warned.
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**Sketch** · Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 5:08 pm Post subject:

Sabata asking if Zazie was drunk...and her response..I found it hilarious. XD

One thing that caught my eye though...

"I think I'll be leaving soon. It's to late to leave tonight and make any progress."

You used the wrong form of to in this sentence.

"I think I'll be leaving soon. It's too late to leave tonight and make any progress."

Other than that, it was great. \o/
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Slifer. EXE · Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 6:33 pm Post subject:

I really liked this fic, you kept all the characters IC (well besides Django who has no personality) and Otenko doing a Jormungander impression would look hilarious Laughing

Also Zazie drunk was good. There is one thing though, why does Django not know that Lita loves him in this fic?
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**Malik** · Local Prinny Deity Age: 34 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 1179

So, did you ever get around to naming your drunken vampire?

Ha, I loved the part where Otenko was immitating Jormy. I can imagine him doing that XD
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Cool Fire Bird · Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 37

Thanks ^ ^ Glad you enjoyed it so far. Hopefully I'll be able to update soon.
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