a Colonel X medi fic i thought up when i was bored -spoilers

[Onmi Khaos]

hi all, this is set in the 5th net crime up rising.... EXE 5, anyway during a liberation mission medi goes missing, Colonel hearing about it from mega goes after her but becomes injured from viruses our nstory starts befor the liberation mission at Team Protoman Head quaters

Ages
Colonel: 20
Medi:16
Protoman: 19

Chapter 1 the dark knight

Medi paced in her room, another battle was coming up, it had been mearly a few days since she had joined team protoman and she had witnessed many things, the first of many was the freeing of the original team leader Protoman from the darkness, using here healing powers with Megamans power they had saved him, but they had help, the mysterious black Navi known to Megaman as Colonel had fought by there side.

she didnt know who he was or why he helped at that moment she didnt care, she rushed to her leaders side and thats where it began for her, Protoman had found his way to her heart.
of course this recived various results from her subordinates, Magnetman shoved it off as not important but grinned wickerdly as he spread the news to his net op, Mega was happy for her, the blue bomber telling her about his own love life problems,
Gyroman felt down that Protoman had 'hooked' a girl before him, napalman was so happy he almost tore the base down with explosions, and searchman... well he jsut said to prepare for the next mission.

Medi POV

so here we were team protoman the anti nebula force, megaman said he discovered an area called nebula hole and that we needed to investigate, as we followed him to the area Protoman pulled me into a corner, "what is it blues sweety?" i said watching him flinch "i told you stop calling me that" he whined, he stopped devilish look on his face, he kissed me forcefully, my head exploded with joy as i felt his hands moving around me, then he let me go i whined at him "later medi-chan" he taped his finger on my lips.


Colonel POV Location Team Colonel base
why did i ever agree to this? i mused, i should be out there making the sacrafices not protoman i, The black knight, Leader of Team colonel had dedicated my life to stoping evil, and here i was letting others do the job for me, it wasent that i didnt like them, its that they shouldnt have to make the sacrafices.

shadowman, damnit he was the only one around... awwwww hell might as well "hello Shadowman-Sama" i said leaning next to the black ninja navi, "so i take it you have a problem?" shadowman said to me god damn this guy reads me like a book, "no no problem" he snorted "what the hell does that mean Shadowman" the furious look i gave the ninja made him realise his mistake
"i mean ever scince team protoman asked to take over liberation you have been down, your a fighting navi, we... are old we know it wont be long for us in this time, soon our data will break... so why do the young ones risk there lives?" god damn hes a bloody mind reader i mused "yeah thats it pretty much" i sighed grabing a pot of coffe "want some" "no thanks trying to quit" "why?" "cause dusk says he aint staying up at night to de-caff me" i laughed, the first time in god knows how long.

"well this was good talking to you" i left to my office, mabey the mountain of paper work could find solitude, needless to say that didnt last long

5 minutes later

"C-CANNON!" as the cannon emerged on my arm i litteraly blew up the pile of hell on my office desk, Knightman who had returned from patrol looked at me and the office, "i dont wanna know" he said fearfuly walking backwards shuting the door on his way out.

in nebula area...

third person View

Medi gasped as the calm area had turned into a war zone, she had been commanded to stay behind while they rushed forward, her ass they thought she was to weak for this, she did the only moral possible idea, she ran like heck into the midst of the fighting.

Protoman swung his wide sword revealing some viruses, dodging around there attacks he dove his blade into them, soon he noticed an oddly shaped grendade coming at him, he dodged to the side watching the bomb go off. "THE HELL NAPALMAN WAS THAT YOU?" he roared across the battle field, only to see the purple navi not even facing him, he looked across at where he had told medi to stay, oh ye gods that was her throwing bombs.

Medi's POV

i was no longer the kind nurse, i was a blood thirsty vicious killing machine, with a sweet angelic look. i could see my team mates staring at me jaws wide open as they continued to fight, spining around i lobed more medical pills around, "BOOM BOOM BABY!!!" i screamed rivaling the insanity of napalman with a new gun, viruses all around being deleated.
then somethign grabed me, oh no it cant be him... it was vampireic aura and all, shade man lifted me up and bit deep into me, it was horrible, i screamed as loud as i could, i felt my self being drained of energy its all going dark... some body help me... blues... megaman... colonel...

End of chap one, dont worry i didnt kill her
Medi: of course theres no story if i die
Colonel: whimpering*
Me: whats his problem
Medi: he dosent like the idea of being pared with me
Me: well i wanted you with a healer and unless you want me to give toadman a call...
Colonel latches onto Medi*
Medi: teach me how to do that anyway every one R&R so he knows how much to do
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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem

[Plantman]

Ermmm... no offense but the structure of the fic is confusing, the action is swaying too often for no aparent reason, everything seems extremelly hurried. Also it's not a good idea to have two or three points of view in the same fanfic without a propper separation.

Also, you have several gramatical mistakes, the most important would be 'your' and 'there', it's 'you're and their'.

Last but no least, please avoid 'Role playing at the end of the chapter'. It's not allowed here.
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[Plantman]

Ermmm... no offense but the structure of the fic is confusing, the action is swaying too often for no aparent reason, everything seems extremelly hurried. Also it's not a good idea to have two or three points of view in the same fanfic without a propper separation.

Also, you have several gramatical mistakes, the most important would be 'your' and 'there', it's 'you're and their'.

Last but no least, please avoid 'Role playing at the end of the chapter'. It's not allowed here.
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"Logic is the Ultimate Weapon."

[Onmi Khaos]

im not sure about that mabey because im noit good a grammer allways feel pressed for time( my current comps at my grand parents house only access to the net) ad i got this along with my team signas fic and then my actual real life novel that has absolutly nothing to dow ith megaman, but thats my problem, and sorry i only skimmed the rules a few times i wasent entierly sure anyway as soon as i fix up the first chapter i'll get on the second one where colonel meets medi and defeats shademan
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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem

[Mari]

Also, please remember to put warnings in spoilerish fanfics, 'cause I had to edit that title myself... <<
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[Mari]

Also, please remember to put warnings in spoilerish fanfics, 'cause I had to edit that title myself... <<
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Currently fangirling Edgy Eft and mplayer1.0RC1 -- firefox 2 is just okay, those are pure awesome.

[Onmi Khaos]

oh man i thought i got that i forgot sorry.. special scince nebula areas arent realy wide open to visit bloody long bastereds though
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Ciel: Zero you have to help X!
Zero: YOU SEE THAT THING HES FIGHTING that i want to clasify as HIS problem