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MegaDaffy Net Savior
Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 197 Location: With Lan and MegaMan/New Hampshire
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:45 am Post subject: Lan Hikari-Manga Style! |
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I drew this awhile ago and never got around to scanning it. so Enjoy!
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FabiChan Net Battler
Joined: 18 Mar 2005 Posts: 79 Location: Maracaibo-Venezuela
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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Well, it's not that bad, do you mind if I give you some constructive critism:
First of all the head is a bit... um, weird, Why don't you try at using some guide lines. As for the hair try following the shape of the head so it doesn't look weird. ^^;; Oh and another thing... er, try making the looks of you drawing more clean.
Good luck! _________________ "Girl, My PET isn't a hotel, Understood?"
"Sorry Enzan-sama, I couldn't help it."
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YurikoOtaku Net Agent
Joined: 15 Mar 2005 Posts: 272
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:24 am Post subject: |
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One thing. Or two. Or three.
The headband looks too small for Netto's head, like a piece of rubber band stretched onto something. The hair, well, colour within the lines.
Netto's face is very circlish-like a ball. Try looking at OA, and seeing how its like, and draw. |
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feepitsrule Darkloid
Joined: 05 Aug 2005 Posts: 544 Location: Everywhere You Want To Be
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Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 6:22 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm.. intereesting. Try http://www.polykarbon.com/. Their tutorials are not exactly the best, but they'll work.
P.S.- No need to copyright. Everyone knows Lan is (c) Ryo Takamisaki. ONly copyright with your own (user)name. _________________
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