The Star Pendant <A MM: NTW Fan Fic>( Finished... ;_;)

Haly K · Last edited by Haly K on Thu Jul 21, 2005 11:22 am; edited 8 times in total

Yes, yes, a FanFic I'm doing that is hosted on another site. Smile

So far there are 2 chapters, and I'm working on Chapter 3. Oh, and as explained in the disclaimer, there are some charaters in the FanFic that are from other games/animes. I will point them out when I'm done with the whole thing. >_<

http://rockmanvortex.com/buzzsaw/starpendant.htm

Enjoy! BTW, I will edit this post when new chapters are up. Credit goes to Buzzsaw, the owner of the site that's hosting this fic. Thanks! :D
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Haly K · Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 7:04 am Post subject:

I know, double posting is bad, but I bumped it up 'cause practically NO ONE bothered to reply! Is it my story writing skills? Am I bad at describing things?? C'mon people! Tell me what you think about my fic!
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Lan1220 · Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 7:15 am Post subject:

I'll read it, since i'am almost bored to death.

EDIT:Its not bad, just that i'd recommend u type it here. There were some words that was turned into chinese words.
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Haly K · Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2005 10:01 am Post subject:

Chinese? I looked though my story and there were no chinese charaters/words. Maybe it's a glitch on your computer...?

Oh, and I will post ch.3 here if ya really want to see it.... :]
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Lan1220 · Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 1:09 am Post subject:

Yeah, maybe its a glitch. And yeah, post it here, i wanna read it. I'am almost bored to death ya know.
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Haly K · Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 5:40 pm Post subject:

I have returned from my 4 day vacation in Canada! :V I can't believe that no one posted the next Stream summary yet... -_-;

Oh, and Chapter 3! Smile

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Chapter 3

( Lan and Chaud had just arrived on Jawaii Island, and Mr.Match and WackoMan had just explained everything. Fortunately for them, a couple of people just saw Beelze ( A.K.A. Beelzemon) speed past on his motorcycle with Maddy still unconscious. Now, they were tracking them down.)

Lan( Skating down a road.): Jeez, doesn’t that Beelze guy know the speed limit here?

MegaMan: Guess not. We’re just lucky the witness description of him matched WackoMan’s.

Lan( Nodding): Though seriously, who would want Maddy’s family treasure? And why kidnap her along with it?

MegaMan: Dunno. Maybe the Star Pendant has some secret powers, or Beelze and Janga have a grudge against Maddy’s family…

Lan( Turning a corner): I doubt that last part, but we’re getting closer, right?

MegaMan( Checking a tracking program): Yeah, according to some more people, the place where Beelze is should be right up ahead.

Lan: Good! I hope Chaud’s there already…

( Up ahead was an old warehouse, with ivy growing on the walls, and most of its windows broken. Chaud and Mr.Match were there.)

Lan( Stopping in front of the two): Hey, why’s HE here?!

Mr.Match: What? You don’t think I want to save Maddy too? I was going to take her out today and that Beelze guy comes and-

Lan( Confused): You were going to take here out?! On a DATE!?!

Mr.Match( Angry): No!! It wasn’t a date!! I swear!!!

WackoMan( Smirking): It WAS a date, and you know it!

TorchMan: I mean come ON! You were blushing while you were talking to Maddy on the phone the WHOLE time!

Mr.Match( Very angry): Why you-!!!!!

Chaud( Annoyed): Enough of this! Let’s just get this mission over with!

( They all walked inside the old warehouse)

Lan: Say, why’s WackoMan with you?

Mr.Match: Easy. I’m going to give him back to Maddy when we save her. Duh.

Lan( Sweatdrop): O--kay…

( Suddenly, the light turned on)

Mr.Match( Surprised): What the-?!

Chaud: Who’s there?!

( Janga steps out from behind a bunch of boxes)

Janga( Smiling, which showed his razor sharp teeth): ‘Tis I, Janga. The one who came here to steal the new Diva. Heh heh.

Chaud: What? You’re one of the kidnappers? But you’re just an overgrown cat!

Janga( Showing them his claws): Watch your manners. I have claws that can inject the most powerful poison EVER.

Lan: Wait, I’ve seen you before… Oh yeah! You’re one of the villains from the game Klonoa Heroes!

Mr.Match: So you’re saying he’s from… a video game?!

Janga: Not just a video game. I am from the Dream World!

Chaud: Huh?

ProtoMan( Finally saying something): Explain yourself!!

Janga( Laughs): You humans are oblivious to everything! The Dream World is where all ideas are given life, or at least, the ideas for your little games.

Lan: This is crazy! You’re mad!!

Janga( Chuckles): Not mad. You see, you could say that the Dream World is a second ‘Cyber World’. The Three Worlds, Human, Cyber, and Dream are simply… different dimensions. Normally, you could only get to the Human World from the Dream World through a rip in the Cyber World, but my Masters have discovered that getting from the Dream World to the Human one was ALWAYS possible. I’ve explained everything now.

Chaud: Not everything. Tell us why you and your partner kidnapped Maddy!!

Beelze( Appearing beside Janga): Now, why should we say?

WackoMan: Hey! That’s the guy that kidnapped Maddy!!

Mr.Match( Angry): YOU--!!!!!

( Suddenly, Beelze gets his bird-like wings, metallic tail, and third eye appear. Also, his hands turn into claws, and the sunglasses turn into a mask that covers half his face. ( It didn’t cover up his mouth and chin.))

Mr.Match( Surprised): What? How-?!

Beelze: Heh, did you think I was a human?! I am Beelzemon, and your little girlfriend Maddy is already in my Masters’ possession!( Laughs)

Lan( Realizing something): Wait, Beelzemon? You’re a Digimon!

Beelzemon( Smirking): That’s right. And don’t think we’re gonna tell you any more info.

Janga: Yes. It is unnecessary for you to know more details about this plot, since I’m going to kill you right here and now!

Beelzemon: You do that. I’ll report back to The Masters.( Steps into a portal that just appeared. Janga lunged at them, and they all barely dodged.)

Janga: Stand still, so I can deliver a quick and painless death!!

( The portal starts shrinking, but then stops when it’s about the size of a baseball.)

Lan: Huh? Why didn’t the portal close?

MegaMan: Lan!

Lan: What is it?

MegaMan: I’m getting strange readings from the portal… and not just because it leads back to the Dream World…

ProtoMan: It seems to be emitting something…

( Suddenly, a Dimensional Area appears around the building)

Lan: What the-?! But there’s no Dimensional Generators!

Chaud( Taking out a Synchro Chip): Who cares?! Let’s just CrossFuse!

Lan: Ok!

( They both CrossFuse. Nearby, Mr.Match is searching through a box.)

Mr.Match( Thinking): There’s gotta be something in here…

Janga( Impressed by the CrossFusion): Well! So this is the CrossFusion I’ve heard so much about! Let’s see what you can DO!

( Janga lunges at them, trying to slash them. Lan and Chaud dodge him.)

Lan: Let’s see how you like THIS! LavaCannon! Battle chip in!! Download!!!( His right arm turns into a LavaCannon. He aims and fires it at Janga, who got hit.)

Janga( Panting): Gah, you’re more powerful than you look…

Chaud: Electro Sword! Battle chip in!! Download!!! ( His left arm turns into an Electro Sword. He slashes at Janga, who manages to barely dodge it.)

Janga( Gasping for breath): No! If I am defeated… and you go through that portal… then the plan might be ruined!!!

Lan( Smirking): Not might, will be! Mega Buster! ( Right arm turns into a normal blaster, and fires it at Janga, who only got hit a few times while dodging.)

Janga( Clothes ripped and starting to bleed data a little): No! You can not win!! I will not allow it!!!

Lan: Face it. You’re finished!

( Lan was about to fire again when the most unexpected thing happened: A sword had been thrusted though Janga’s chest from behind. The odd thing was, it was a normal sword, not Chaud’s.)

Lan and Chaud( Surprised): What?!

Janga( Standing completely still): No… This cannot be!! Masters… I am sorry… that I….. failed….. y-you……….

( Then he slumps down on the ground and is deleted. The one who killed off Janga is…)

Lan( Seeing the sword wielder): Mr.Match?!

Mr.Match( Tossing the sword onto the ground beside him): I’m glad I found that sword. Janga got what he deserved.

Lan( CrossFusion disappears): But you didn’t have to-

Chaud( Stopping Lan): Isn’t it obvious? Mr.Match is worried about Maddy.

( Mr.Match nods slowly.)

Lan( Frowning): Yeah… You’re right.

MegaMan: L-Lan!!

Lan: Huh? What’s wrong now?

MegaMan: The portal-- It’s growing!!

Everyone: What?!?

( The portal grows to an enormous size and sucks up the three. What will happen in the Dream World…? Only time will tell…)

End of Chapter 3
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Flame Buster · Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 6:36 pm Post subject:

1. Beelzemon is good.

2. Your ripping off too many characters.

3.Script style fanfictions, I believe are against the rules.

Other than that, it is not bad. Laughing

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**Mari** · Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 6:38 pm Post subject:

Script-style fanfictions are against ff.net's rules, not ours.
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Flame Buster · Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 6:42 pm Post subject:

Oh. oops, sorry. Anyway, just get some original characters and it would be very good. I give it a 6/10
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Haly K · Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 6:46 pm Post subject:

This fic is SUPPOSE to be a cross-over between several animes and games. And just for the heck of it:

Janga, Lephise*, and Ghadius* are from the Klonoa game series.
Beelzemon is from the Digimon Anime series. ( Third season to be exact. Smile

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*= These two were mentioned in Ch.1. they don't appear... YET! Evil or Very Mad

I am also working on another fan fic that has original charaters, but it's the sequel to this one. X_x; Oh, and how did you like the part were Mr.Match impales Janga with the sword? I needed some violence in this. -_-;
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Flame Buster · Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:25 pm Post subject:

I'm just saying don't let all your characters be tken from otherseries, that kind of shows that you don't have any originality.
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Haly K · Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 12:29 pm Post subject:

If you want, I can post the other fan fic I mentioned. Forget what I said earlier; I've decided for the other fic to take place BEFORE this one. -_-; If you'll excuse me, I need to work on Chapter 4...
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Lan1220 · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:13 am Post subject:

Two words: Not Bad. i'll be waiting for chapter 4.
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Haly K · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 8:35 am Post subject:

Chapter 4! :D :
( WARNING! This chapter includes cussing, but it's only done by 3 of the charaters. -_-; )

Chapter 4

( Maddy, now awake, was inside a grim jail cell. She would’ve been asleep had it not been for the three guards outside arguing about various things. She was sitting on the floor, hugging her knees to her chest, listening to the guards outside.)

Guard #1( Stomping his feet on the ground): What’s so special about that damn girl anyways?! All the Masters need is the Star Pendant, so why take the girl too??!!

Guard #2( Rolling his eyes): Oh shut up, ya jackass!! What the Master want, the Master gets!!

Guard #1: Huh? There’s three Masters, Y’know…

Guard #3( Surprised): Ya mean ya haven’t heard?! Those lousy Heroes killed off 2 of the 3 Masters!! All that’s left now is Master Trigoya.

Guard #1( Shivering): She’s one creepy lady, that’s for sure… I miss Master Ghadius and Master Ansem already…..

Guard #2( Yelling): YOU BITCH!!

Guard #1: What is it??

Guard #2( Still yelling): You cheater!! Give me back meh coins!!

Guard #1( Smirking): Oh! I won this game fair and square, so just shut up!!!

Guard #3: Will you two assholes stop arguing?!

Guard #1 & #2( Yelling): SEIZ WHO?!?

Maddy( Rolling her eyes): Guess these guys only have cuss words in their vocabulary…

( Maddy continued on listening to them arguing. She finally decided to peek through the barred window on her cell’s door. The window was near the ceiling, so Maddy pretty much had to stand on her toes. The guards were more uglier than she had imagined; all of them were lizard humanoids. The first guard had a dragon-like head, dark brown scales, a tan vest, and a scimitar strapped to his back. The second guard also had a dragon-like head, except he had dark green scales, a black vest, and a sword at hand. The third guard had a more lizard-like head, light green scales, a red vest, black shorts, and a small dagger. The only thing they all had in common was that they had yellow eyes.)

Guard #2: Give meh coins back, Dragolfos!!

Dragolfos( Taking out his scimitar): Try an’ make me, Dinolfos!!

Guard #3: C’mon!! Stop it!!

Dragolfos and Dinolfos( Yelling): SHUT UP, LIZALFOS!!

Maddy( Getting their attention): Dragolfos, Dinolfos, and Lizalfos, huh? Weird names, that’s for sure!

The three guards( Screaming): SHE’S AWAKE! SHE’S AWAKE!! GAAAAAH!!!( They all scramble to different sides of the room)

Maddy: Geez, what’s wrong with you guys?! Never seen a human bef-( Notices a door on the other side of the guard’s room) Huh? ( Points to the door) Where does that lead to?

The three guards( Not sure of what to say): Uhhhhh…

( Suddenly, the other door open and Beelzemon steps in.)

Beelzemon( Annoyed): What’s going on in here?!

Lizalfos( Pointing at Maddy): Th-the human!! Sh-she’s awake!!!

Beelzemon( Smirking): Oh really? ( Walks over to cell’s door and looks at Maddy) How ya doin’, sweetie?

Maddy( Crossing her arms and looking away): I am not fine and I am NOT your sweetie.

Beelzemon( Laughs): How cute! You’re grumpy! ( Manages to stick his arm through the bars, and puts his hand underneath Maddy’s chin, forcing her to look at him) Did anyone every tell you how beautiful you look?

Maddy( Angry): YOU PERVERT!! ( Slaps Beelzemon, causing him to take a few steps back)

Beelzemon( Smirking): Oooo, feisty aren’t ya? ( Laughs) You’ll make a perfect wife!

Maddy( Horrified): What?! Wife?!?

Beelzemon( Leaning in closer): Of course! After all this is over you’re going to haveta stay in the Dream World, so you might as well be my wife. ( Laughs)

Maddy: Wait… The Dream World…? It really exist?!?

Beelzemon( Smirking): Of course! The Dream, Human, and Cyber Worlds are different dimensions, yada yada. I’m guessing your mother Lephise told you all about that and other stuff before she left, right?

Maddy( Nodding slowly): She left the Star Pendant and all the books she told me those stories with me. I never knew they were real…

Beelzemon( Laughs): Of course they’re real, honey! How else do you think you human get inspiration for your little video games, huh?

Maddy: So the ones who make the games sometimes get vision of the Dream World in their sleep…

Beelzemon( Finishing for her): ….. Or they think of the games themselves and it becomes a reality in the Dream World.

Maddy: I heard the guards; your Master only needs the Star Pendant, so why take me too?

Beelzemon( Smirking): That’s for me and my Master to know, and you to NEVER find out! ( Turns around and steps toward the door, but before he does, he looks at the guards) Alright, ya lizard brains! Keep an eye on the human while I’m gone, ya hear!?

The three guards( Saluting): We hear!!

( Beelzemon steps out of the room and locks the door. Then, Maddy notices the pile of cards in front of her cell door; the guard were playing poker.)

Dragolfos: Now, back to the game! ( Grabs some cards)

Dinolfos( holding his sword): Not until I get meh coins back, ya cheatin’ ass!!

Dragolfos( Pointing his scimitar at Dinolfos): Shut up, ya bitch!!

Lizalfos( Rolling his eyes): Not this again…

( The guards started arguing with each other again. Maddy sat back on the floor, wondering what is going to happen next.)

( But what about Lan, Chaud, and Mr.Match? Well, that’s in the next chapter…..)
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Lan1220 · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 8:47 am Post subject:

Haha, three guard arguing. Haha, and afraid of a human. HAHA! Laughing

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Haly K · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 8:53 am Post subject:

Yes, they are afaid of Maddy's Star Pendant! It has powers, they know that, and their afaid that she'll turn them into.... CHICKENS!!! Laughing

But they don't know that Maddy dosen't know that the pendant has powers! :O BTW, Is it just me, or did I make Beelzemon too much of a jerk/pervert?

Beelzemon: No you didn't.

Maddy: LIAR! *throws brick*

Beelzemon: *is hit by brick* OW!!
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Lan1220 · Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 8:56 am Post subject:

Yeah, i think you did. OVERKILL!!!
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Haly K · Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 8:30 am Post subject:

M'kay, chapter 5! ( WARNING: This chapter dosen't have any cussing or anything like that, but it's a bit boring, yet it explain certain things):

Chapter 5

( Lan, Chaud, and Mr.Match were walking through a dim lit forest. The tree seemed to be a bluish-black, and the ground was a deep brown. The odd thing was that their Navis had materialized, and were walking with them.)

Lan( Whining): Ok, first off, where the heck are we?! And second, how can our Navis be here without a Dimensional Area!!??

MegaMan( Rolling his eyes): Lan, we’re in the Dream World, remember?

Lan( Grumbling): From the looks of it, we’re in the forest between Hyrule and Termina…

ProtoMan: Plus, We’ve been materialized since this world has a stronger connection to the Cyber World than the Human one.

Lan( Sweatdrop): Huh, that theory makes sense…

Chaud( Rolling his eyes): Duh!

Lan( Angry): Hey!!

WackoMan( Frowning): I hope Maddy is ok…

TorchMan: Don’t worry! Before ya know it, we’ll be back home with her!

Mr.Match( Worried): I hope so…

TorchMan: You miss her, don’t you?

Mr.Match( Nodding): Yeah…

( Suddenly, a twig snapped.)

WackoMan( Scared): Wh-what was that?!

ProtoMan( Right arm turning into a sword): A monster, no doubt!

??????: Ah, you are from the Human world, correct?

Lan( Freaking out): Wh-who are you?!

??????: I am of the Heroes.

Lan: Huh?

( The being then stepped out. He was about half Lan’s size, and had black fur, with long ears that ended in a maple leaf shape. The ends of his ears were white, and so was most of his face. He wore a blue cap, blue shirt, dark blue shorts and red sneakers. He was also carrying a large golden ring, a bit bigger that a PET, that had an emerald on it. His hazel, cat-like eyes stared at them.)

?????( Bowing): I am Klonoa, at your service.

Lan( Recognizing him): Oh, yeah! You’re the hero of the Klonoa games, right?

Klonoa( Nodding): That’s right! I’m surprised; only a handful of humans know of me.

Chaud: Great. Another video game character…

Klonoa: Now is not the time to talk. We must hurry.

Lan( Tilting his head to one side): Where are you taking us?

Klonoa: To Lejimba. It is a large castle were us Heroes rest. I can explain everything to you there, but only if you are willing to help; either way, we’ll still save the new Diva.

Mr.Match: Do you mean… Maddy?

Klonoa( Nodding): Yup! If you want to save her, then at least let us tell you where to go.

Lan: Well then, let’s go!

( So Lan and co. follow Klonoa through the forest to the great Imperial City of Lejimba. In the castle, there were many heroes from different games.)

Lan( Counting the Heroes): That’s Sonic, and Bomberman, and Crash, and… Whoa! That’s Raz from that new Pychonauts game!

Chaud( Hitting the back of Lan’s head with his fist): Will you STOP already?!

Lan( Rubbing the back of his head): OW!

( Then, they were lead to a quiet room.)

Mr.Match( Getting impatient): So, are you going to explain something or not?!

Klonoa: Alright, then. I won’t bore with the more useless info, so here it goes…

( Klonoa presses a button on the wall and a hologram projector turns on)

Klonoa: Ok, y’see, there are these three villains called “ The Masters” that have started a muck. Fortunately, the other Heroes and I have defeated two of three Masters; Master Ghadius ( The hologram shows a being with a long, black high collared cape that ended in blue, with a golden, bird like head) and Master Ansem.( The hologram shows a man with white hair, tan skin, red eyes, a white jacket, and black pants. He also had a sort of broken heart symbol on his chest.)

Lan: So, the third Master has Maddy, right?

Klonoa( Nodding): Yes, and she is Master Trigoya.( The hologram now shows a woman with long silver hair, black robes, and bat-like wings coming out of her back. Her eyes were like blue flames, and the claws on her hands were so long, they reached the ends of her robes.)

WackoMan( Creped out): Gah! Scary…

Chaud( Looking at Klonoa): Y’know, an explanation of WHY Maddy was kidnapped would help.

Klonoa: Oh, sorry! Y’see, Maddy family treasure, The Star Pendant, has certain powers. You can tell why Maddy was kidnapped from there.

ProtoMan: We can see that, but how did Maddy get that thing?

???????( Stepping out from the shadows): Let me explain that, Klonoa…

Klonoa( Turning to the person talking): Yes, Lephise…

( Lephise was about Klonoa‘s size. She had a purple cap, and lavender hair that was tied together with golden rings. She wore a white dress with purple stripes on the sleeves, and had bright green eyes.)

WackoMan( Surprised): Wait, isn’t Lephise the name of Maddy’s mother?!

Lephise( Nodding): Yes, I am her mother. When I was in the Human World with her and my husband, I took on a human disguise.

WackoMan( Sweatdrop): Ok, it makes sense…

Lephise( Feeling guilty): I did not meant for this to happen. I taught Maddy about the Dream World, its legends and history, but I knew she would probably not believe me. I left the books I taught her with, and the Star Pendant, with her before I returned here…

Lan: Any idea what Trigoya is planning to do with her?

Lephise( Frowning): Alas, we do not know of that, but…

Klonoa( Finishing for her):… We DO know that it has something to do with the upcoming Tri Eclipse here in the Dream World.( Hologram shows three moons, one red, one blue, and one green.)

Lan( Confused): Tri Eclipse??

Klonoa: Yup. It’s when the three Moons of the Goddesses come together. It only happen once every millennia.

Lephise: The Moons of the Goddesses represent the three goddesses of the Triforce; Din, Nayru, and Farore. It is said that there is a special incantation that, when used on The Star Pendant during the Tri Eclipse, can unleash terrible power, but…

Klonoa( Finishing for her again): … We’re not really sure if that’s what Trigoya is planning. Either way, it’s still going to mean bad news for all Three Worlds.

Lan: Ok, stop Trigoya and save Maddy before the Tri Eclipse, got it!

Chaud( Rolling his eyes): Easier said than done, but we’ll win anyways.

ProtoMan( Nodding): “ Good always triumphs over Evil” as they say.

Mr.Match( Worried): But, if they only need The Star Pendant, then why kidnap Maddy?

Lephise( Sighs): That is what we are unsure of.

Lan: Say, where is Trigoya, anyways?

Klonoa: Her castle is in the Dark Mountains. ( Hologram shows an evil-looking mountain range) It’s only a short walk from here, but since you guys are pretty much her friends, we left the portal that Beelzemon used so you could save her.

Lephise: Of course, we will send back up when you are in trouble, but, since Trigoya is the weakest of the Masters, we are certain you can do this quickly and easily. But you don’t HAVE to go and save her, we can do it ourse-

Mr.Match( Interrupting her): I’m going, whether the other two are going or not!!

Lan and Chaud( Surprised): What?!

Klonoa( Looking at Lan and Chaud): So, are you and your Navis coming too?

Lan: You bet!

Chaud: Of course.

Klonoa( Smiling): Then it’s settled! I’ll lead you guys to Trigoya’s castle, and you can take it from there, ok?

Lan and co.: Ok!!

( And so, Klonoa lead the group outside of the castle, and towards Trigoya’s castle. But…)
???????: These human fools do not know what they are dealing with!! They shall die by trying to stop me!!( Evil laughter echoes)

( What will happen next? Will Lan and co. succeed in rescuing Maddy and stopping Trigoya? Who knows what happens next…)
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Lan1220 · Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 8:42 am Post subject:

Ah, another great chapter. Good job.
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Flame Buster · Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 9:43 am Post subject:

It's pretty good, but where's Link? Oh, and you got the tyhree moons from Digimon Frontier didn't you? Good thing you brought Lephise into the story.
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