Request Thread: Announcement, Please Read

Neko · Last edited by Neko on Sun Jul 31, 2005 6:28 pm; edited 16 times in total

Okay, I'm sorry but I lost all previous requests so I'm afraid you'll have to re-request.

Rules
1. Okay, because of school number of requests I'll write per day is 2-3. You can still request, it just means I won't get to it.
2. It HAS to be a one shot.
3. No lemon/lime or citrus. I'll only write up to R.
4. I'm lenient, but please, to make this easier for me, don't request anything too difficult. Give some kind of plot idea, it makes it so much easier for me.
5. No flaming what I've wrote, if you don't like it then it's your fault for not specifying what you wanted. If it sucks because of grammer error or just bad writing then you can tell me. NEVER say, "This sucks, I wanted...." Because I'll laugh and say, tough luck and never take a request from you again.
6. NEW RULE! No requesting charachter deaths. Sorry, I just can't bring myself to kill a character unless it means something to the story. But just saying "Kill so and so" I won't do.

Okay, I think that covers most of it. Again my apologies.
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Viewtiful Starman · Puzzle Game Addict Age: 37 Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 708

Okey, mine was a sequel to the Brightman one you did for me, where him and Starman meet and end up becoming friends.
Don't care how they meet or anything.

**Sketch** · Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 7:47 pm Post subject:

Do you remember that Darkloid Movie Night I was talking about that day in the channel? Well, I think a party is more in order, a Darkloid party! \o/ Every darkloid is there. XD

LuciaRareglove · Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 11:20 pm Post subject:

Could you please make a Rockman EXE skit?
Where Forte does silly things with Rockman,Blues and Serenade.
Just mix it all up! Laughing

*waits eagerly*
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Hopefully this will work....

Anime Master ZERO · Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 8:38 am Post subject:

Just my most recent request.

A little fic about Shun before his parents died. Just something about a happy little toddler and his parents spending time together.
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ElecGuts · Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 9:19 am Post subject:

K, the idea is what could've happen if Rockman and Neta (fan character, details of her and her operator are below) had never become navis

Name: Keshiro Denierure (Neta.EXE)

Age: 2 years younger than Yuuichiro

Description: A long blonde haired, blue eyed woman, she's about a head shorter than Yuuichiro.

Personality: A self confident woman that's always on hand to help her friends out (hence why she became Neta) though it's not wise to annoy her.

Relations:
Wife to Keshiro Reo
Mother to twins Keshiro Saratu and Keshiro Kurisutaru

Backstory: A long time friend and work collegue to Yuuichiro, whom helped him with many projects of his. Though the whole time she was also working on a project of her own, which was widely known over the Science Labs. Having already lost one child to a heart disease that both of her children had (This was Kurisutaru, Saratu survived by use of a Medical System implanted into her body soon after her birth) she refused to let Saratu go on without a sister. She began a project to create an AI that developed like a human would after Kurisutaru had died.

Near completion of the AI, in my story, she became Neta to help Yuuichiro out, by testing the equipment that downloaded Saito's mind into the net, to make sure it worked. A virus breaks into the server and severs the downloading equipment from the inside. So this not only forces Denierure to lose some of her memory, but it also severs the connection to her body. With what she remembers, and with help from Yuuichiro, she later becomes Saratu's Navi, Neta.EXE. Years later, Yuuichiro and a team of scientists finish the AI that Denierure had been working on years before, and develop a robot body for it to pilot. The AI takes Kurisutaru's identity after having changing a few records over hers and Saratu's birth by Yuuichrio.

Years before meeting Yuuichiro, Denierure found she had a knack for creating programs and Navis, when she first created her Navi, a mermaid like Navi named Umi.EXE. She was clearly no netbattler, even though she had programmed Umi's charged attack as an Aqua Tower, she was still no good. (Battlechips had only just been released by the time Denierure had finished Umi, and she didn't know about them at first)

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Name: Keshiro Saratu

Age: Same as Netto

Description: A waist length blonde haired, green eyed girl. Same height as Netto.

Personality: At times a shy girl, but is quickly determined to do what she has to.

Relations:

Daughter to Keshiro Reo and Keshiro Denierure
Sister to Keshiro Kurisutaru

Backstory: Without Neta, there's not really much to say. After a program installed into Neta to keep it away from an older crime syndicate called Blade, Saratu was chased half way across the globe for it, she always had to keep moving. She knew Netto before her mother became Neta, but only met up with him again when she returned to Akihara, she spent most of her childhood in Creamland.

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Elementalman.EXE · Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 11:54 pm Post subject:

Well It's a new day so unless it was posted while I was away I'd like to re request that ChaudXAnetta drabble. For a plot I don't know. there first date maybe. That should take more than a chapter
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Neko · Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 2:43 pm Post subject:

Elementalman.EXE · Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 5:37 pm Post subject:

Meh, I though it could end in one chapter. Oh well I don't honestly care plot wise
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Neko · Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:43 pm Post subject:

Brightman ran through the now empty streets of the Undernet. Being a Darkloid certainly had its advantages, one of which being that everyone was scared of you. He laughed as he walked into a separate section of the Undernet all together and let the portal close behind him. He knew that soon the navis would come out again and poke their heads up to make sure there weren’t any more Darkloids. But that’s not what he was interested in, he was interested in looking for a challenge.

In an almost idiotic act for relieving his boredom he decided to go out and see who he could challenge. It’s not like he would just sit there in his room waiting for Shademan’s call to duty. He was better then that.

He walked in the now darker area of the Undernet; this was where you came if you were picking a fight. He looked around seeing if he would be the one to start it or let someone come to him. Brightman heard a giggle from above him and looked up to see a small navi with large bug like black eyes looking down at him. “Bored so soon Brightman?” he asked.

Brightman smiled, “Ah, you must be Starman, I’ve heard about you from Shademan-sama.”

Starman smiled and leapt off of the roof top he was sitting on and gracefully landed on his feet. “Yeah, I’ve heard of you too. Blew up a net shop was it?”

Brightman smirked, “Actually it was more of an accident but yeah.”

Starman nodded, “Yeah, I know what that’s like. Not every navi has it quite so easy and humans think we do.”

“That’s what Shademan-sama said.”

“Do we have to call him Shademan-sama here?” Starman winked.

Brightman smiled, “Didn’t he tell us to call him that?”

The smaller navi shrugged, “What he doesn’t know won’t hurt him.”

The two were so enthralled in their conversation that they didn’t notice the two large navi’s coming up behind them until an attack was launched in between them. They jumped out of the way landing side by side and looking for the source of attack. Two rather big navis, one blue and one black stepped out of the shadows and laughed.

“Oh, look at the small Darkloids; they think they’re so tough. Why don’t we teach them a lesson so they won’t come into our territory again,” said the one in blue.

Starman and Brightman gave each other very amused looks, but let the large muscle navis continue their monologue.

“I agree, why don’t we teach them a lesson?” said the one in black.

“Not very smart are they?” Starman whispered.

Brightman shook his head and the pair looked over in their direction to see if the Darkloids had gotten their oh so subtle hints. When they saw them talking the blue one pointed at them, “Hey, we’re talking to you two!”

Brightman was in a playful mood, as was Starman so they decided to tease them a bit. “Who, us?” they asked simultaneously pointing at themselves.

“Yeah you!” said the one in black.

“Well,” said Brightman rolling his eyes. “If you insist!” finished Starman.

The two new friends launched themselves at the dumb duo and finished them off in a matter of seconds. One or two attacks and it was all over.

After they left the Undernet Starman looked at Brightman. “Well, that was almost too easy, what now?”

Brightman gave it a bit of thought. “I know the security code of a human store; want to go see if it works still?”

Starman smiled, “This is the beginning of a beautiful friendship,” he said.

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Enjoy ^^ This was kind of hard because I'm not to sure on their personalities. So I'm sorry if they're OOC.
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Neko · Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject:

Burnerman came in with a huge bucket of popcorn for everyone’s enjoyment. Ever since the human’s had developed food chips, the Darkloids had found them almost as addicting as Dark Chips. He set the tub of fluffy kernels, butter and salt on the floor where Bubbleman dived into it instantaneously. Shademan gave him a look of disgust from his throne but said nothing as the movie disc was inserted into the cyber screen.

“What movie are we watching?” Plantman asked.

“Office Space,” replied Burnerman.

“Isn’t that a human movie about human problems and human suffering?” asked Brightman.

Starman laughed, “I see why it was chosen.”

The movie started and the mass congregation of Darkloids quieted down to watch the movie. They saw the mass of cubicle after cubicle and Plantman blinked. “I can’t believe humans actually forced themselves to work in such places. I mean, it almost makes me feel sorry for them.”

“Not me!” cheered Brightman.

“Me neither-de puku,” said Bubbleman.

Bowlman continued to watch the movie as his friends chatted around him, quiet as ever and really trying to tune out Bubbleman’s annoying voice.

They quieted down and the movie kept going, Shademan becoming quite interested in spite himself. He had never heard of such an idiotic idea as “flare” and fervently prayed that no living being had been subjected to such humiliation. Not even the lowest of humans deserved that.

When they hit the scene with Michael coming in late to his “progress interview” Burnerman paused it and got up amid loud protests. “Hey do you people want popcorn or not!” he yelled.

Everyone quieted down and waited sullenly for Burnerman to return with another large bucket of popcorn. He once again set it in the middle of the room and quickly backed away as the other navi’s pounced on it. He walked back to the remote throwing his friends a strange look and once again resumed the film.

“I just don’t feel motivated, Bob.”

“Amen to that,” growled Burnerman.

Videoman chuckled, “Don’t care for the jobs given to you, Burner?”

“Once you’ve cracked one safe, you’ve cracked them all,” he said, resting his chin in his hands.

They were shushed by Gravityman and their attention once again turned to the video where Peter continued to talk to the “Bobs.”

Later on, they watched with utter fascination the scene where the three co-workers beat up a copier.

“What the hell is that?” Burnerman asked.

Even Shademan was a little disturbed by the show of human aggression to the office appliance.

“Why do they do that? It didn’t work only two times,” said Brightman.

“I think this is one of those things that you only get if you’re a human,” said Starman, picking up the remote and fast forwarding through the scene.

Later they cheered when the human girl threw away her flare once and for all and left her horrible job. They weren’t so happy for the girl, just happy to not see the disturbing “flare” anymore.

“It’s just fractions of a penny,” came Peter’s voice from the screen.

Burnerman smirked. “Yeah, you keep telling yourself that, human.”

As the movie progressed into the end, they sat through the sappy love scene even though Bubbleman called for the skipping of that part completely.

“I-I want my stapler…”

“I say he sets the place on fire,” said Burnerman.

Shademan shook his head, “That human can’t handle something like that.”

“Wanna bet?”

“Sure, why not, 300 zenny?” Shademan asked. Sometimes it was fun to let go a little.

Five minutes later, Shademan lost the bet.

“Ha! Told you, the fat guy wanted his revenge. He took the money too,” cheered Burnerman.

“What, have you seen this movie before?” Starman asked.

Burnerman shook his head, accepting the cyber zenny from Shademan. “Nope, but you can tell when fire is going to be used. Besides the only way for the other human to avoid jail was if the entire office was destroyed.”

Brightman gave him an odd look. “Yeah, Burner, you know human flicks way too well.”

Burnerman blushed, “I-I do not!” he said defensively.

Brightman elbowed him, “Riiiight,” he said, smiling.

Burnerman brought up his default buster and blew Brightman through the door. “Oops, looks like my buster malfunctioned,” he said with a fake air of innocence.

Everyone else avoided him for the rest of the week except Shademan.

When the credits rolled, they were overall satisfied with the movie. Human pain and suffering all around and even though there was a happy ending everyone agreed that it was okay because a building got burned down.

Also, the scene of the copier being destroyed was forever etched in their minds.

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This sucks immensely, but not bad as far as not too OOC.
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**Sketch** · Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2005 6:08 pm Post subject:

I don't care what you think, that was great. XD

The copier scene was great, because they didn't understand it. XD That makes everything better.

The way they handled the concept of flare was awesome. Although I wish you would have said something about the amout of Flare they had to wear. XD
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Rex · Net Battler Age: 35 Joined: 16 Mar 2005 Posts: 97

i think it was great too Neko, i liked specially that part where burnerman blew brightman trough the door and faked an innocense air. Laughing

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Anime Master ZERO · Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2005 9:50 pm Post subject:

I really thought Videoman would be the one to run the movie and such. Still, it's great. Burnerman making the popcorn was a great choice.
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Elizabeth · Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 10:43 pm Post subject:

I have never seen the movie Office Space. What's this Flare thing?

TheWebbuilder · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 6:53 am Post subject:

Same as.

Somebody care to explain? I'd like to know what all that actually meant.
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Neko · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 8:52 am Post subject:

I'm really sorry, but all I can say is go out and rent office space, this was Sketch's request and he asked for Office Space, not much I can do about it.

Besides, office space is a great movie, really funny with a good plot.
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**Sketch** · Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 4:32 pm Post subject:

Neko · Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 9:11 am Post subject:

Okay, and I guess to make the copier machine make more sense...

Office Space is a movie about office work, cubicles, 9-5 the whole deal.

The one scene that sketchparticularly requested centered around the fact that the three main charachters end up destroying a copy machine that doesn't work, but they beat it up in a gangster style....

Yes, it sounds weird but seriously it's very funny.

And Sketch described what flare was perfectly.
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Yoshiman · Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 5:19 pm Post subject:

I was wondering if you could do one about what goes on in a day at Sci Labs with Yuuchirou and Mejin, if you could. Thank you very much!
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