New Sprite Stuff

digirob101 · Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 8:46 pm Post subject: New Sprite Stuff

ok here is one of my brand new comics tell me what you think it kinda of starts of confusing but ill work on that

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b170/digirob/ZCOMIC.png
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Shadow.EXE · Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 9:02 pm Post subject:

Hrrrmm....it definetly needs some work. You need to work on the character's grammar, like instead of Ganon just saying 'Ha Ha Ha Take This', change it to something like: 'Take this, you fool!'. Also, there are quite a few spelling mistakes, like finnaly is supposed to be spelled finally. Keep working on it, and you should come up with something promising.

**Sketch** · Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 6:45 am Post subject:

feepitsrule · Posted: Sat Sep 10, 2005 3:12 pm Post subject:

It is very good, but try using proper grammar and adding punctuation marks. Without them, comics look unproffesional.
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