Rex the shadow netbattler chapter 1

[Rex]

This is the first fic I post so please feel free to give me your opinion, suggestions and one favor I would like to ask all of you since I'm feeling too nervous..... ¡please don't brick me! *covers her face with a notebook*.
I would like to thank EXE. because he encouraged me to post this fic and help me with it.

Name: Rex the shadow netbattler
genre: AA and Hu, mostly and OOCness will rule sometimes XD
rate: PG-13, because there is going to be some foul language and a lot of violence.
There is going to be some anime and game spoilers, enjoy
Disclaimer: I don't own Rockman or any of the characters, they belong to capcom

REX THE SHADOW NETBATTLER

Chapther one: the misterious traveler

It was almost 6:30 and nigth was coming in Akihara, suddenly a shadow appeared it was the shadow of a run away girl who was escaping rigth now from her chasers until she turned left and ran to a wall.

‘I had finally ran away from them’ she said before she fell asleep in the floor near to the wall of a residence: a residence that will be linked with her fate soon: the Hikari residence.

Its been an hour since the misterious traveler fell asleep near the hikari residence and she hasn’t woke up yet, then in a few minutes a woman carrying a bag with groceries and other things saw the girl who was kind of hurt so she put the bag in the floor, oppened the door and carried the girl inside the house. The woman like all good samaritan started to heal the girl’s wounds when then she noticed a dart in her arm she took out the dart and then she touch her forehead.
‘ ¡oh my god, she has a lot of fever!’ The woman said. Quickly she put a wet towel over her forehead but the girl didn’t show any vital sign so she called a doctor.
Her attention in the girl was so much that the woman didin’t notice that someone has entered in th house.

‘ good nigth, honey we’re in home’ said Hikari Yuuichirou the husband’s woman who entered the house with her son: Hikari Netto.
‘oh, good night honey I hadn’t notice you’ said the woman.

‘by the way, ¿ who is that girl mama? Asked netto.

‘Oh, I don’t know but I found her unconscious on the floor near the house. Now she has fever,I think its because of this dart’. The woman said.
‘¿have you called a doctor Haruka?, maybe you are right and she is poisoned with this dart. ’ Yuuichirou said.
‘yes, but the doctor hasn’come yet and .... she didn’t end the phrase because she heard something.
Then, suddenly they heard something the girl started to cough a little and then she oppened her eyes and tried to wake up.
‘ tell me, ¿are you okay?’ Yuuichirou asked her. When she saw yuuichirou she reacted very dangerously and she took a knife inside her jacket.

‘ ¿where am I? ¿ where is my sword?’ she asked while she looked around searching her sword.

‘ ¿you mean that sword right?’ Haruka asked ‘I put it in another place so don’t worry but ¿ why are you using some dangerous weapons like that’ .
‘ its none of your bussiness’ the girl said ‘ what I do is ....’ she didn’t end to tell because she felt pain in her shoulder and she fell unconscicious again.
Some minutes later she woke up but this time she saw a man talking to the Hikaris.

‘ oh men its Heinrich, that bastard found me’ she tough while she was hearing the conversation.

‘ oh thank you for the help you’re giving to us so would please sign here,here and here please? Heinrich asked watching while the Hikaris sign the paper. ‘ okay one more thing before i leave her name is Rex’ .
‘ come on ‘ yuuichirou said ‘that can’t be her name’.

‘ of course that is not her real name, but she doesn’t tell her name to everyone and she is a very dangerous mercenary but don’t worry about that we are going to take care and she is a very rebeld, rude, vandalic and she likes the rock music especially the heavy metal’.

‘ ¿but why you haven’t called her parents? Haruka asked

‘thats because she has no parents’ Heinrich said. ‘ oh poor little girl’ Haruka said sadly, ‘oh, wait she woke up ¿are you okay honey? Haruka asked.

‘ a little’ Rex said. ¿where am I? She asked again.
‘ you are in our house and my name is Hikari Haruka nice to meet you Rex’. She said.

‘ okay, thank you for the hospitality and all but I have to go now’ she said while she stand up of the couch.

‘ oh no you can’t go anywhere’ Haruka said.
‘ and ¿ why not? She asked while she put her hand inside her pocket where the knife was.

‘ one, you’re hurt two you are going to stay with us’ Haruka answered her question .

¿who says so? Rex asked

‘the answer is here, read it’ Heinrich said handing a paper to her
‘ okay lets see’ Rex said reading the paper ‘ ¡NO WAY THIS IS A COSTUDY DOCUMENT! Rex yelled ‘ oh no this can’t be THIS CAN’T BE DAMMIT’ she said then she took a little breath and the she says:
‘ ¿ can you excuse me a minute? Then she goes away from them and she get her PET out of her pocket.
‘ Burnerman, hey Burnerman ¿are you in there Forte, Shademan anyone ? she asked, but inmediatly Burnerman answered

‘ hey Rex its good to see you but ¿ don’t you remember that today is Shademan’s payback time? Burnerman said.

‘‘I know but I need help with something I’m kind of trapped in a custody document mess ,¿so how many navis have you deleted?’ Asked Rex while she saw Forte chasing one navi and yelling: ‘¡DON’T RUN YOU COWARD!’
‘Hey, don’t delete all the navis let some for me,’’ Burnerman yelled ‘ well, I have deleted 5 navis and forte and shademan had deleted 15 navis and Laserman is runing away like a high school girl’ he said laughing a little but then he continued ‘ so tell me how is this that you’re trapped in a custody document mess?’ Burnerman asked.

‘ well, its a document of the law that doesn’t allow me to go anywhere’ Rex said

‘ ¿ did you tried to break it ? burnerman asked

‘ yes but it is inmicated and I don’t have my sword and the knife doesn’t work on this’ Rex said .‘okay let me see that paper’ burnerman said while he appeared in a DA.

‘ ¿Burnerman what is he doing in my house?’ Netto asked

‘ okay lets see that paper’ he looked like he was reading the paper (to tell you the truth he wasn’t reading the paper he was just examiniting it so he could the thing that he use to do.)

‘I got the answer for this problem’ he said and suddenly he used his finger and set the document on fire but this doesn’t work because the document restores itself.

‘ wow, ¿how custody documents can do that?’ She asked.
‘okay I’ll read it’ burnerman said and then he started to read it, he focused a lot to read that paper and then he said:

‘ ¿what the hell is this? and first of all ¿ what is custody? He asked a little desperated.

‘ custody is something that allows a person to take care of a kid’ Rex explained to Burnerman

‘ so, ¿ in some way they are your bosses right?’ Burnerman asked

‘ yeah... something like that but......’ ‘ don’t move okay I’ll be back’ Burnerman said before logging out to the net again

‘ FOOOOOOOOOORTE some humans made Rex a slave’ Burnerman said to Forte very scared.

‘ some humans did WHAT’ asked Forte. ‘ and thats not all, its looks like Rockman has something to do with this’ Burnerman said.

‘ So, Rockman has something to do with this huh’ ‘I would take care of this but Laserman started to attack and someone has to watch Shademan’s back’.

‘ don’t worry, I can handle this burnerman come with me and Forte....’ Shademan said

‘¿yes?’ he asked ‘ don’t forget to shoot Rockman for me’ shademan said.

‘ you bet I will’ Forte said before logging out.

Forte appeared in Rex’s PET, enraged. He would never allow himself to associate with humans in this way, he would whatever he could do to stop it.
‘¿Rex, what the hell is going on?’ Rex saw Forte and shook a little. Rarely she had ever seen Forte this angry, it scared her, his eyes were bright red, engulfed by his rage and he was glowing a sinister purple.

‘Well.. um... there is this custody document, and now, I... well...’ she held up the document for Forte to read.
Slowly, Forte examinated it. For several minutes, there was silence as Forte examinated the document. After a while, he spoke, or more accuratly, shouted

‘THOSE BASTARDS’. Again, Rex quacked in fear; Forte emmence power was enough to scare anybody. Rex quietly spoke again

‘Don’t be too mad... its just... um...’

‘¡¡WHAT!!’ Rex started to break down, and tears tricked down her cheek. Forte saw this and calmed down. ‘Sorry about that, you know how i feel about this’. Rex wiped her face and stopped crying. ‘¿Who is looking after you anyway?

‘ The Hikari family’

‘ Wait, as in... Netto?
‘ Uh-hu’

‘Ah,I suppose’. Forte grinned.
‘This situation is akward, but we can use it to our advantage’’. Rex was just confused. ‘ If you stay near Rockman, you can look for a weakness on him, he is incredibly strong, any weakness would be good. ‘’ Rex smiled too
‘ ah, ok I see what you mean, I’ll do my best’’ Forte went away, and left Rex in the empty room. Now she had a mission, to find out a weakness on Rockman. As much as she wanted to do this, to complete this task, something was bothering her. Deep within her, there was a resentfulness towards these people. They had her, she in a way, was in their power, she could not escape them and could fight her way out. Using her special abbilities to scape would get her in more trouble, which is what she dind’t want. She had no choice, she had to stay. A noise came from her PET, Burnerman appeared there

‘ Hey, Forte told me about your doing, are you ok with this?’ Rex, had trouble answering, she wasn’t sure if she should tell Burnerman everything, how she was bothered by this, how she just wanted to get out.
‘ Yeah... I...no, I’m not ok with this. These people are my kidnappers, they have taken me away from where I belong, and have forced me into their home. This isn’t right, its not ok’ Rex almost burst into tears, but restrained herself.
‘ Don’t worry about it, we’ll see you every day, you won’t be alone in this, we will help, and if you need to get out, we will help’ Rex smiled, and then Burnerman disappeared and was replaced by Shademan
‘ good to hear what your doing, maybe we can crush Rockman once and for all’
‘ I don’t know Shademan, maybe I can’t do it’
‘ of course you can, you’re able, don’t worry. You may be scared, but that’s the way to get stronger. Only by fighting the deepest parts of your fears will get you past them and become stronger’’. Rex cheered up slightly.
She would do it, she had Forte, Burnerman and Shademan behind her, should she need help, she would do it, nothing would stop her filled with confindence, she started preparing.
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[LgacyDX]

Your story is very good but your grammar, spelling and punctuation needs some work especially when it comes to the foul language. Check out my story and trust me, you'll love it. Nonetheless, its great but you need to have it spell-checked for grammar and spelling errors. Good first try.
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[Rex]

Thanks for the advices I'll try to apply, by the way, I forgot to right the disclaimer -_-;
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[LgacyDX]

You should always put the disclaimer because you don't want to get sued by the people of officially own it. Hey, check out my fic if you have the time.
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[Rex]

well, I fixe that matter and I read your fic, it has a cool plot but could you explain me how can they use battle chips if they're robots
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[LgacyDX]

I'll explain. Developed by Higsby Yamitarou, they have use of the Automated Battlechip Terminal. With it, they can get unlimited access to various battlechips which calls for the use of various attacks such as CustomSword, Prism, and DynaWave. Only a few of those can acquire this terminal and you only know two: Mega Man NG and Bass NG. Any other questions?

One more thing... I read your story. It's much better but still, proofread it because its important that you do a rough draft of the story, edit it for erros and then make a final. That way, people will appreciate your hard work and you will be credited for all your hard work. Anyway, your work needs to be improved and I promise you that you will be pleased.
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