A German Fanfic: "ROCKMANX. EXE"

BakuRenOh · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 6:54 am Post subject: A German Fanfic: "ROCKMANX. EXE"

So, I had also some Ideas for a Rockman FF, but I wanted at first some opinions from other fans. So, here is the story at first (Series Story-line, not the one in the games!)

2 years has been passed since Netto and Rock, with the help of Enzan, Laika and co saved the world again against DUo, but it something terrible has happened in this final fight, what only is known by the Net Saviors themself, and so, Netto and Enzan didn' t wanted to be Saviors again.
As the mysterious Navi Vile. EXE appears, Rock and Nettoi gets again in big trouble, but they get help by another mysterious female Net Navi, who call himself Zero. EXE. Her Operatress (is this the right word for a female operator? ^^; ) Arie also comes new into Nettos class, and she got a crush on him.
At the end of the second fight against Vile, Rock gets deadly hurt....

I hope, you could read at, and post your opinion about it :] [/b]
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feepitsrule · Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2005 1:55 pm Post subject:

No, operator is both male and female. Sounds like a good plot, but try fixing your grammar. First you say Zero is a (mysterious) girl navi , then you say "call himself Zero".
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