Very OT: Rick Slick: Secret Agent X FINISHED CH 2-4

[Yoshiman]

This is my chapter story for my Writing class. Note: It's mainly for children, so that's why it may be a tad unplotted (probably not even word.) but here it is

Rick Slick: Secret Agent X
Chapter 1

“Agent X, You remember Dr. Major, “chief of JUSTICE, Z asked his top agent, Rick Slick.

“Yes sir, I only wish I was able to catch him on my last mission though,” Rick replied.

“Well you may able to get your chance X,” Z explained, “Our scouts have discovered, that, as we speak, Major is creating a Super Robot Force by robbing companies.”

Angered, Rick shouted, “That madman, he must be stopped! So I guess you want me to stop him?”

“Correct, X. Go to W to receive your tools.”

As he arrived in JUSTICE’s W’s lab, W, spoke to Rick, “Welcome X, please pay attention to what I have to show you”

Jokingly, Rick replied, “You know I always do.”

After an annoyed groan, W went on, “First up on display are these rocket shoes, all you have to do is just click your heels together, and they’ll activate. Next we have your computer/manual lock pick ring. Last, but not least, we have the laser pen.”

As soon as W was done Z came down with a young blond man “This is your new partner X, meet Jim Slim.”

Rick replied, “You can come, but don’t get in the way.”

Jim just nodded and said, “Thank you so much. It’s an honor to be working with the great Rick Slick.”

Z ordered the team, “You need to go to the North American branch of MechTech industries in California where the robbery took place.”

The pair saluted and replied, “Yes sir!”

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[Darth Osiris]

Mmm. A detective story. I kinda like those. Good, but it's a bit short. And I assume you got the codenames X and Z from "Megaman X" and Zero?
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God, that's such an awesome line.

"Zatch Bell Gaiden" Chapter 1.
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[Yoshiman]

Thanks, yeah, my creative jucies haven't gotten started yet, so hopefully by second semester I'll be able to do more. Though, since it's supposed to be for children, I thought if it was really long, the child reading would lose interest. It's supposed to be a spy story, so I used the James Bond system for the agents, so it just happened to be a coincidence that they were named "X" and "Z", I chose X because it would make him cooler. Thanks for reading, hope I didn't put you down, by what I said in regards to your reviews.
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[ComicX6]

A detective fic, hm haven't read many of these. Looks promising.

Ya know, I draw a sci-fi comic called Agent X. Except in my story, his real name IS X, Agent is just a nickname. Random fact I'm sharing.
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[Yoshiman]

I was finished with the whole story, so I thought I'd post, sorry if it reall lacks plot, and the brief fight is, well brief, but I'm trying to keep it child level. Thanks for reading my first completed story!




Chapter 2

“So here it is, Jim” Rick said, “the number one technology company in America, MechTech.”

“So, do you think we should just go on in,” Jim asked.

“No, let’s see if we can have an appointment, with our CEO friend, Mr. Bob Dorrs.”

Walking up to the front gate, Rick spoke into the intercom, “Excuse me, we need to see Mr. Doors, we’re from another company who would like to make a deal with him.”

A robotic voice spoke out, “Yes you may come in, head to the waiting room directly inside.”

As the gate opened Rick commented, “Figures he would use machines for his workers.”

As soon as the spies stepped into the building, Dorrs’ voice rang out, “Welcome, potential partners, thank you for this unexpected meeting, I hope we can all get what we want, please follow my robot aid to my office.”

“Do you think we should trust him,” Jim asked.

“Just be careful, Jim,” Rick advised.

Stepping into the office Rick told the CEO, “We’re not really company employees, Rick Slick, JUSTICE Agent X. We’ve come to investigate the assault on your company.”

“Oh, thank you, for coming,” Dorrs said in n unpleasant voice.

“Do you have any idea why Dr. Major would steal technology from you,” Rick asked.

“Well I believe Dr. Major tried to buy my services for a purpose he didn’t tell me, but I said I would never help someone who wouldn’t tell me his reasons. I guess it was a good thing, because I would never want to help a criminal.”

“Well, if you don’t support criminals, why do you have this letter addressed from Major, and stamped with his Skull logo,” Rick asked.

In a panic, Dorrs pushed a button, which opened a door, and 11 ninjas came out.”

“Let’s see what you can do Jim,” Rick told his partner.

Two ninjas went to Rick, who in response performed a spin kick, knocking them out. Then 3 more leapt on Jim who back flipped enough times to cause them run into the wall. As t ninjas attacked each agent, they were landed in the face with a pair of fists.

“Rick! I need help,” Jim cried as two ninjas captured him and jumped out of a window landing on a plane, that took off to parts unknown.

Rick ran to the escaping Dorrs and go to him before the villain could escape, and growled, “You can make this easy or hard on yourself, and tell me where Jim is.”

Worried about his own safety, Bob cried, “They took him to Dr. Major’s mountain base in Siberia!”

Rick called his boss telling him everything,

“X just stay there until we send a plane to get Dorrs. And we’ll have a squad waiting outside the base for backup”

As soon as the jet got there, Rick, set out to stop Major and rescue Jim.




Chapter 3

Arriving at the mountain base, Rick used his laser pen to open a vent. Crawling through it, the agent saw Dr. Major laughing, and Jim in a jail cell.

“Soon my plan will be completed/”

“Not so fast,” Rick shouted, jumping out of the vent, “You’re finished!”

“Thank you for joining me Mr. Slick,” Dr. Major laughed, “But it’s too late; my Super Robot Force is assembled!”

Just then an army of machines, with many dangerous attachments came out.

Thinking fast, Rick jumped and dodged the robots to Jim’s location. Using the lock pick ring, Jim was able to be free.

Jim told his partner, “Go after Major, I think I found out what’s powering these robots.”

Rick nodded and used his laser pen to slice open any robots in his way. Getting to his foe, Rick used his fighting skills, as did Major.

Though, able to get to the device, Jim couldn’t turn it off, but decided to crack the code as much as possible.

Meanwhile, Rick was losing to the doctor, and was about to be defeated, but in a last strike, the agent blew him away with the rocket shoes. Major blew 20 feet away and was knocked out.

Unable to think of any other ideas, Jim smashed the whole machine, which deactivated the robots, but caused the base to self destruct.

“Oh great, who would’ve thought the robot computer would be linked to the base,” Jim groaned. “Rick we’ve go to get out of here,” he shouted.

With Major over his shoulder, Rick pointed to a jet, and asked, “Jim can you fly the plane, I’ve got to watch our sleepy friend.”

Getting in the jet, Jim was able to get all systems working, while Rick stuffed the doctor in the back. Using the lasers to blast a hole in the mountain wall, the team was able to get out with only 3 seconds left.




Chapter 4

Outside, Jim was flying overhead, looking for the JUSTICE squad Rick told him about.

“There they are,” Rick told him.

Landing Rick shouted, “Z, nice of you to join us, but why didn’t you come in, I’m sure our host would’ve let you in!”

Z chuckled, “We were only going to come in if you seemed to have too much fun.”

“Well, we’ve brought a visitor for the prison,” Rick told Z.

“We’ll take good care of him.”

Waking up to find out he was finished, Major shouted, “I’ll get you Rick Slick!”

“If it’s not you, it’ll be someone else. And Jim will be there too.”

Shaking his hand, Jim told Rick, “Thank you sir, it’ll be an honor.”
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