Cyclone EXE sprite

Cyclone EXE · Net Official Age: 34 Joined: 08 Jun 2005 Posts: 308

Here's my work...what could I do to improve it?

The navi's my fan character Cyclone. It's a girl by the way...
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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

Sorry, but it still really looks like a recolored Rockman with body parts switched around a bit. You should probably reshape the helmet, and try a different body posture and style of armor.

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Cyclone EXE · Net Official Age: 34 Joined: 08 Jun 2005 Posts: 308

Yeah..you're right. I'll start new ASAP and try to make it more original.
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blazequest · Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 9:29 pm Post subject:

Actually it's not bad. I mean it needs work, but I think it's cool. And it doesn't really look exactly like a rockman recolor. You didn't even use Rock's body. I suggest adding more definition. Then it should look better.
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Nazne · Shukei - Hakuteiken Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Posts: 1133

...it's Rock's head and Rock's feet and hands repositioned. I'd say that's enough of a "body" for me. <_<

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Zan · Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 11:47 pm Post subject:

Shonshiwo15 · Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:04 pm Post subject:

I actally like the sprite.

Behold! I Speak! With your permission Cyclone.exe I would like to use your navi and put them in my fan comic (comming this summer). PM me if you accept my offer. thanks. lol.
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CrossFusionStarman · Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:53 pm Post subject:

Can I use her as well, Cyclone? I'm creating a sprite comic as well. Maybe I'll put in on the Net. I'm gathering as much as original characters as possible. I have a few from this site already(all with permission, of course.)
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X-M · Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:38 pm Post subject:

The legs look a little wobbly and jagged. The left leg (your left) is turned a little funny.

Try a more original looking pose.
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Cyclone EXE · Net Official Age: 34 Joined: 08 Jun 2005 Posts: 308

o_O I think I'll stick with drawing...I worked for a while and got this odd thing.

Yes...you can't even see the body that well...must stick with drawing! n.n

BTW that's Cyclone's new look... Click here for full (drawn) picture...so you'll know how it's supposed to look on the sprite.
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shadien · Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 4:12 am Post subject:

oH wOw! thats a good idea of a navi. Did you enter it in the contest? WoW!
The sprite doesn't even look that bad. Maybe somme ajustments but still.

Cyclone EXE · Net Official Age: 34 Joined: 08 Jun 2005 Posts: 308

Erm...contest?

And thanks...I may make another sprite and try to fix things.
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