Protonman's sprites

[Filthster]

Yes i am Protonman before anyone says i steal sprites.

Naruto: based off the original EXE rockman sprite
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/Naruto%20sprites.png

Rasengan:
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/rasengan.gif

Sharingan:
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/sharingan.gif

and a screwed up animation of Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu:
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/shurikenkagebunshin.gif

A naruto fan as you can see.


Using chip bases:

Alpha from BN3:
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/Alpha.png

Forte:
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/Bass.png

Serenade:
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/Serenade.png

Gospel
http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/Gospel.png

Zero from Rockman Zero 3 (i think) using the spining exoskeleton in the pause menu:

http://www.freewebs.com/acdc_town/Zerosheet.png

It DID look better in animation, but its screwed up.

Anyways C+C please

I am currently remaking the naruto sheet
^^ thnx

Oh yeah and this Cross fusion which is ages old:

http://67.18.37.14/43/100/upload/p920036.gif[/url]

[Core]

So much to look at, but I will give you what I can on the lines of critque.

The first one I can see that you need to work on your shading a bit more, the sprites are nicely constructed, but lack the needed shading to define the characters more.

The second and third ones, they just redirect me back to this page of the forum. You might want to check the link you gave and make sure it is correct.

For the sprites made from chips, the Alpha one looks a bit flat and puts me more in mind of some of the large mechaloids that you face in the original and x series. Forte looks a bit flat and needs a bit more shading, Serenade seems to be a bit uneven with the energy ribbion and too skinny. Gospel I think needs to be more bulkier in the body, since right now he looks more like a racing type dog rather then a large virus canine.

The Zero sprite puts me in mind of the rotating sprite for the login of Rockman.exe onto the net as well as the original series Rockman when he was getting a new power in one of the games. The sprite does seem a bit bright in the hair, but it does look alright.

Some improvements that can be made, but all told not a bad grouping of work that shows promise. ^n.n^

[Core]

So much to look at, but I will give you what I can on the lines of critque.

The first one I can see that you need to work on your shading a bit more, the sprites are nicely constructed, but lack the needed shading to define the characters more.

The second and third ones, they just redirect me back to this page of the forum. You might want to check the link you gave and make sure it is correct.

For the sprites made from chips, the Alpha one looks a bit flat and puts me more in mind of some of the large mechaloids that you face in the original and x series. Forte looks a bit flat and needs a bit more shading, Serenade seems to be a bit uneven with the energy ribbion and too skinny. Gospel I think needs to be more bulkier in the body, since right now he looks more like a racing type dog rather then a large virus canine.

The Zero sprite puts me in mind of the rotating sprite for the login of Rockman.exe onto the net as well as the original series Rockman when he was getting a new power in one of the games. The sprite does seem a bit bright in the hair, but it does look alright.

Some improvements that can be made, but all told not a bad grouping of work that shows promise. ^n.n^

[blazequest]

Basically I agree with core. The naruto sprites need more definition. And the chip sprites appear slightly flat. The zero sprite looks good however. I liked that.

But, believe it or not, my favorite was the animation of cross fusion. I know cross fusion sprites are very easy, but its still good to see them. Spriters don't do them because they think there is no challenge. I personally love seeing them whenever I get the chance.

For the future however, it looked like midway, Netto's face was substituted for Rockman's. Seeing as how it's Netto under the helmet during cross fusion, you should use Netto's head. The change is easily visible and kind of odd.

Great job.
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[Filthster]

Yea i am remaking the naruto sprites because of the lack of spread between the lights and darks.
Yea, the chip ones i made for a contest. Looking at them now they do look weird. But i just cant be bothered to redo them

The links are all fine, some may need copy + pasting links.
Oh yea and the animation program doesnt let me use pink, so Rockman is using bubble shot