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Zexun.exe
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:00 pm Post subject: The Dark World Tornament Rated:pg-13 mild lang blured out |
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Chapter 1: Invitations
"Now then can anyone tell me about the Spikey Virus? Iszac?", Said the teacher of room 710-a.
"Huh uh ummmm.", Replied a sleepy look teen around 14 with blood red hair and black cloths.
"I'm sorry Mr.Dartz but you were asleep again. What do you have to say for yourself?"
"Uh..." Before he could get a word out, the bell rang to leave school.
"Hey Iszac wanna go to the arcade today?" Asked a boy around Iszac's age who had a striking reseblence to Chaud.
"Not today Takkun, I have something else to do...." Iszac said as he grabbed his stuff.
He sighed as he laid on the grassy bank of a river he called his secret spot. "Why don't I have a PET yet...?" Just then a face appeared which suprised him as he rolled to the edge of the river a jack knife flashing through the air as he landed in a runners position. He was staring at the most beautiful girl in his school. "Ohh uh Asuka.... its you."
"Yes silly" Said the brown haired girl who looked a little like Maylu. "And I got a present for you." She handed him a box.
"What is it?" He asked opening the box, revealing a Link PET with battlechips. Some from the Advanced PET some from the Link PET. "Thanks Asuka you shouldn't have."
"Good, cause I didn't. Here, read what it says." she said pointing to a note attached.
To the owner of this PET:
This is a Very Special PET that can use any battlechip from the Advanced PET and the Link PET. It is a one of a kind, And so is the Navi in it.
Take Care.
"Huh", Iszac said slotting in the navi data chip. The Navi soon took form. He was about the size of Megaman except that his helmet was more wolven. On his gauntlents were claw knuckles, and he had a tail.
"Hey, I'm Zexun and I'm your new Navi" said the suprisingly nice voice of the navi. "Oh and you have an Email"
The e-mail read:
"You are invited to our Net Battle Tounrament called the N2 GP. You are invited to our Preliminary round at Sea Side Net Arena on August 15th, 20XX."
"Hmm one week away it looks like we should get to know each other." said Iszac.
"And Training" said the new Navi. |
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Zexun.exe
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 8:03 pm Post subject: The Dark World Tornament Rated:pg-13 mild lang blured out |
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Chapter 2: Preliminary Round
A week has passed and our heros have become close friends. Now its time to see if they have what it takes...
"WELCOME! To the Sea Side Preliminary Tournament," announced the still announcing Ribbita. "Remember this is hosted by the DNN."
"Our first match is between two high school students and friends. Introducing James Famous, the grandson of the Famous Mr. Famous, and his navi Punk and Iszac Dartz and his navi Zexun. But first we have to lay down some rules."
"Everyone participating has recieved a wristband and a crossfusion chip, which allows to preform Crossfusion anytime anyplace.-", started Ribbita.
"Its a leather wristband how can it do that," said a girl who slightly resembled a well known Sharo net-op.
"I was just about to tell that. To activate the wristband you press the navi emblem on it. The band makes a small dimensional Area dome but its size will increase depending on how many Dimensonal Area Bands, or D.A.B., are activated. All battles will occur while in cross fusion, allowing you to set up a strategy before the fight. There are 3 ways to win. First off is by incapacitating your opponet, the next is to knock your opponent out of full syncro and last is if your opponent forfiets by intentionally pressing the activate button, shutting off thier cross fusion. Good luck and the battle field your on is the steppe level."
The elevator slowly crept to the battle field as Iszac secured the wristband. "Ready?" he asked his Navi. "For anything." came the reply.
On the Battle field the netops stared each other down then laughed.
"Good luck buddy," said James, Iszac's fellow "The Better Life" band member. James, although he was thin was pretty strong. It was also good to have a grandfather like Mr.Famous.
"Feeling's mutual." Iszac replied.
"BATTLE START" flashed the holograpchical words. At that moment both netops activated cross fusion and went to go find a strategical spot.
R Iszac picked a spot where there was one way in and one way out, while R James picked a spot where he could use his sniping chips from a good range.
"Scope Gun download." R James said to himself as he but a bead on iszac's chestplate. "Gotcha." he said firing the blast.
Meanwhile R Iszac had already found his opponet and activted his Invis chip. He stood as the shot was fired going right through him. "Areasteal, Crossdivide, Assassin's Sword, download." R Iszac appeared behind R James and swng the two swords he had downloaded knocking R James off the cliff. "Stealthmin Download." R James was able to right himself in the air but landed on the Mine knocking him out of CrossFusion.
"We have our winners and that concludes the Prelimary round!" said Ribbita
"HEY, PARTY AT MY PLACE!" Iszac called to his friends!. |
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pyro
Joined: 11 Jan 2006 Posts: 10 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:32 pm Post subject: |
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This fic has a good concept but it's a little short, I also think that the fighting part could have been longer. If you improve a little on that stuff this could be a great fic ! _________________ My fanfic: Grand Chaos |
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Zexun.exe
Joined: 25 Jan 2006 Posts: 4
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:35 pm Post subject: The Dark World Tornament |
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Thanks. Chapters 1-4 are actually from another board i used to go with but after chapter 5 I will work on longer battles.
Chapter 3: Party Crasher
Iszac’s party was going well. All of his friends were there and were having fun, even the Navis. Suddenly Iszac stepped up on stage.
“We, The Better Life, would like to sing a song in honor of everybody’s hard work ad to say I’m sorry to my guitarist James Famous for beating him in the match but hey he still made it!!”
As the band was getting ready the speakers squealed nearly deafening everybody.
“MUWHAHA I AM MUSICMAN!!!” boomed an unknown voice. “I am the best musical artist in the world! I challenge the band “The Better Life to a musical showdown.”
“I’m not letting’ this guy ruin my party”, Iszac growled.
“Lemme take care of him in this fight”, James said.
“But-” what ever Iszac was about to say was cut short when James knocked him out.
“You know that song Forgot to Remember? That’s what were gonna sing.” James told the band as they set up their instruments. They linked their PETs to their instrument via a special attachment Iszac created.
Musicman was basically a walking drum kit. The only non-drum things on him were the guitars crossed on his back to form a backpack.
“I’ll start,” he laughed
"Obie Trice/Real Name No Gimmicks..."
2 trailer park girls go round the outside/ round the outside, round the outside (
Guess whose back, back again/ Shadys back, tell a friend/ Guess who's back, guess who's back, guess whose back/ Guess who's back...
I've created a monster, cuz nobody wants to
see Marshall no more they want Shady I'm chopped liver
well if you want Shady, this is what I'll give ya
a little bit of weed mixed with some hard liquor
some vodka that'll jumpstart my heart quicker then a
shock when I get shocked at the hospital by the Dr. when I'm not cooperating
when I'm rocking the table while he's operating
you waited this long now stop debating cuz I'm back, I'm on the rag and ovulating
I know that you got a job Ms. Cheney but your husbands heart problem's complicating
So the FCC wont let me be or let me be me so let me see
they tried to shut me down on MTV but it feels so empty without me
So come on and dip, bum on your lips @#$ that, @#$ on your lips and some on your $%$ and get ready cuz this @#%s about to get heavy
I just settled all my lawsuits @#%% YOU DEBBIE!
Chorus (X2)
Now this looks like a job for me so everybody just follow me
cuz we need a little controversy, cuz it feels so empty without me
Little hellions kids feeling rebellious
embarrassed, their parents still listen to Elvis
they start feeling the prisoners helpless, 'til someone comes along on a mission and yells "*($%"
A visionary, vision is scary, could start a revolution, pollutin the air waves a rebel
so let me just revel an ask, the fact that I got everyone kissing my @$$
and it's a disaster such a catastrophe for you to see so @#$% much of my @$$ you ask for me?
Well I'm back (batman sound) fix your bent antennae tune it in and then I'm gonna
enter in and up under your skin like a splinter
The center of attention back for the winter
I'm interesting, the best thing since wrestling
Infesting in your kids ears and nesting
Testing "Attention Please" feel the tension soon as someone mentions me
here's my 10 cents my 2 cents is free
A nuisance, who sent, you sent for me?
chorus (X2)
A tisk-it a task-it, I'll go tit for tat with anybody who's talking this #%% that !@#$. Chris Kirkpatrick you can get your @$$ kicked
worse than them little Limp Bizkit !@#$%^&*, and Moby
you can get stomped by Obie, you 36 year old bald headed !@$ blow me
You don't know me, you're too old let go its over, nobody listens to techno
Now lets go, give me the signal I'll be there with a whole list full of new insults
I've been dope, suspenseful with a pencil ever since Prince turned himself into a symbol
But sometimes the !$# just seems, everybody only wants to discuss me
So this must mean I'm disgusting, but its just me I'm just obscene
Though I'm not the first king of controversy
I am the worst thing since Elvis Presley, to do Black Music so selfishly
and use it to get myself wealthy (Hey)
there's a concept that works
20 million other white rappers emerge
but no matter how many fish in the sea it'd be so empty without me
Chorus
(Hum dei dei la la Hum dei dei la la... la la la) “
“Okay our turn” said James.
What have I done?
Where have I come from?
When I burnt the backs with the sun through a glass did I seal the loss that's become me?
Feeling undone
what have I become?
When I turned my back on you I turned my back on myself and became this machine
Thoughtlessness
Selfishness
Hopelessness
Arrogant
I feel it on the inside
Twisting and contorting
Memory has shaped me once again
Still feel you on the inside
Biting through and stinging
Will I ever forget to remember?
Shadows in the sun
Filter through us
Still wrestle the demons that arrested me as a child
Confession rejected
We grow up
To give up
People step on the cracks for wounds owed paid back
Through the words of surrender
Emptiness
Loneliness
Listlessness
Worthless
I feel it on the inside
Twisting and contorting
Memory has shaped me once again
Still feel you on the inside
Biting through and stinging
Will I ever forget to remember?
O Can you save me?
From myself
from these memories
O Can you save me?
From myself
From these memories
Surrender
To the shadows
Haunting inside
Bleed through you
Surrender to the secrets inside
Lies within you
I feel it on the inside
Twisting and contorting
Memory has shaped me once again
Still feel you on the inside
Biting through and stinging
Will I ever forget to remember?
Can't feel you on the inside
Set down the bag and left it
Lost memory has left me
One again
Open up the inside
Admission for the cleansing
Now that I've forgotten to remember
Surrender
To the shadows
Haunting inside
Bleed through you
“No I won’t be defeated” yelled Musicman “BEAST OUT!” Music man transformed into a Gregia Beast Out Form.
“He he Gregia Beast slot in!” Iszac said as Zexun appeared and transformed into his beast form. Zexun looked a little like Megaman except Zexun’s helmet looked a lot more wolfish. Musicman rushed Zexun using his guitars as swords.
“Muramusa slot in!” Iszac said as a Muramusa appeared parrying Musicman’s blades and deleting him.
After the battle everything was back to normal, when Iszac stood on stage and announced it was time for what he originally wanted to sing.
“This is called Happy?”
In this hole
That is me
The dead are rolling over
In this hole
Thickening
Dirt shoveled over shoulders
I feel it in me
So overwhelmed
All this pressure centerizing
My life overturned
Unfair the despare
All these scars keep ripping open
Peel me from the skin
Tear me from the rind
Does it make you happy now?
Tear me from the bone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy now?
In this hole
That is me
A life that's growing feeble
In this hole
So limiting
The sun has set; all darkens
Buried underneath
Hands slip off the wheel
Internal path-way to contention
Peel me from the skin
Tear me from the rind
Does it make you happy now?
Tear me from the bone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy now?
Are you
HAPPY
Are you
HAPPY
Are you feeling happy?
In this hole
That is me
Left with a heart exhausted
What's my release??
What sets me free?
Do you pull me up just to push me down again?
Peel me from the skin
Tear me from the rind
Does it make you happy now?
Tear me from the bone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy?
Peel me from the skiiiiiiiiiin
Peel me from the skiiiiiiiiiin
Tear me from the rind
Does it make you happy now?
Tear me from the boooooooooone
Tear me from the boooooooooone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy?
Does it make you happy?
Are you feeling happy?
Are you !@#$ing happy?
Now that I'm lost left with nothing
Does it make you happy?
Are you feeling happy?
Are you !@$#ing happy?
Now that I'm lost left with nothing?
“And that’s the question James asks everyday.” Iszac said and James quickly knocked him out again. “I really need to learn how to shut up” Iszac said.
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Now then two of the songs were created by Mudvayne the last by eminem. Musicman is a navi of my own creation and is the Bubbleman of my fic. You may use him (although would want to.) with my permission! This is mainly a introduction to the main enemies who will appear. |
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