Different Outcomes: Hu/Fluff AU PG

Neko · Last edited by Neko on Sun Mar 26, 2006 5:36 pm; edited 2 times in total

Haruka smiled to herself as she watched her two children play happily in the sandbox across the way. Netto patted a mound of sand with his tiny hands and Saito pushed at it with his sand tool to see if he could make anything of it. They gurgled happily to one another in their own language as the mound of sand rose in height and became something of a box shape thanks to Saito’s meticulous sculpting. She glanced up at them from time to time and returned to her book, enjoying the peaceful fall air.

Netto and Saito were just about 17 months old, give or take a few days. They had been walking for something close to six months, and in Netto’s case he had been climbing everywhere for about three. They had a limited vocabulary but seemed to get along with it just fine, as they really didn’t seem to need words when it came to conversing with one another. All in all they were both maturing as children should, even if Saito did show a tendency to get quite ill for no reason.

The early November sun set a bit earlier then in previous weeks and the chilled twilight held the promise of a soon to come winter. Haruka shivered, gathered up her things and walked over to the sandbox to collect her children and take them home before anything happened. As if something had been reading her thoughts, Saito doubled over in pain and began to wheeze painfully as his twin waddled over and started to pat him, calling out loudly for his mother.

Haruka saw this happen and it seemed an eternity to her before she could reach her son and cradle him in her arms to see what was happening. “Saito!” she gasped and patted him on the back, unsure if there was something in his throat or if it was his own body betraying him.

Saito began to shiver, then to wail loudly as he fought for air. The frightened Netto stared at him wide eyed for a second, then he too joined his brother, crying loudly for his terrified twin. Haruka shivered again, but this time in fear. With a deft movement she scooped up Netto and dashed across the street to their house where she deposited her wailing son on the couch and dashed for the phone in the living room as she desperately tried to woo Saito into calming down.

“110 emergency,” a calm voice asked on the other line.

“Miss,” Haruka said while trying to coddle Saito and keep an eye on Netto all at the same time. “My son is having trouble breathing and I don’t know what’s wrong,” she took in a shuddering breath, about to burst into tears herself. “He’s not choking on anything and I don’t know what to do.”

“All right, how old is your son, and has he had problems like these before?” the woman asked gently.

Haruka shook her head, then she realized the woman couldn’t hear a shake of the head. “No, well not anywhere this bad before. He’s had shortness of breath before, but the doctor told us it was just a cold,” she croaked. “And he’s about a year and a half old.”

“All right,” the woman said soothingly. “What’s your address?”

Haruka relayed it as quickly and calmly as she could given the circumstances. Saito continued to wail and draw in breath painfully in her arms and by that time Netto had wandered over and was now clutching her skirt staring wide eyed at his twin and shaking uncontrollably. Haruka looked down at him a figured he was in shock, trying to understand what was going on.

“It’s all right sweetie,” she cooed, bending down to attend to her other son. Netto’s face wrinkled up and he burst into a fresh wail, but Haruka figured it was better then nothing.

“An emergency unit was just dispatched,” the woman replied over the phone. “It will be there shortly.”

“Thank you,” Haruka said and drew in a shuddering breath. Everything had happened so quickly and so sudden that she herself barely had time to wrap her consciousness around the idea.

Haruka stayed on the phone, with the attendant talking to her in a calm voice, keeping the woman from having her own breakdown before the paramedics could arrive. Once the ambulance got there she hung up and dashed to the door with her son in her arms. Netto toddled painfully slow after them, sniffling.

The men took Saito from her and put him on a stretcher where he continued to wail loudly as he drew in ragged breath. Haruka then turned around, scooped up Netto and got into the back of the truck. She watched as men hooked up various pieces of equipment to Saito in an effort to find out what was going wrong. Saito had an oxygen mask on in hopes that it would help him breathe; however as soon as the heart monitor came on it became all to clear what the problem was.

“An erratic heart beat,” the man said. “This could be any number of things,” he informed Haruka. “Once he’s stabilized we’ll find out what’s wrong.”

Haruka nodded and clutched a wide-eyed Netto to her chest. It was then that she herself burst into tears; she cried all the way to the hospital.

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Hours later, Yuuichirou burst into the room looking ragged as if he had just jumped out of bed and flew half way across the world in four hours. Haruka greeted him with a sleeping Netto in her arms. Two hours previous she had managed to console the child into sleeping and she herself was beginning to the feel the wear of the past few hours. Yuuichirou touched her puffy, swollen eyes with his thumb and sighed. “I’m so sorry I couldn’t have been here sooner. The prime minister gave me his fastest jet.”

Haruka shook her head and leaned into Yuuichirou’s touch. “It’s all right.” She nodded at the bed where Saito was sleeping, hooked up to several hospital machines, the most important of while showed his heartbeat. “The doctor said he wanted to see you when you got here,” she said gently.

Yuuichirou nodded and patted Saito’s head softly, kissed Haruka on the cheek and smiled at Netto before leaving the room. He found the doctor a small ways down the hallway and nodded his head. “Well?” he asked softly.

“We believe your son has a heart condition called HBD,” the doctor explained. “There are no treatments available,” he frowned a Yuuichirou. “Hakase, I’m very sorry but…” he chewed his lower lip. “There’s nothing we can do.”

“How long?” Yuuichirou asked.

“A month, or so. If he has another attack like this I doubt he’d make it through. I’m very sorry,” the doctor said softly.

Yuuichirou looked at the doctor and frowned. “Are you sure there are no treatments, nothing…”

The doctor shook his head. “If there was anything I’d tell you. There are not even any experimental procedures we could try.”

Yuuichirou let a breath of air his through his teeth angrily as he wracked his brain for anything he could do. The doctor patted him on the arm, “You’ll tell the Mrs.?” He asked.

Yuuichirou nodded absently and the doctor gave him a sympathetic nod before moving on to the next room. Yuuichirou stood there in the middle of the hall pulling every idea he could think of, anything that might save the life of his precious son. Unfortunately for him, all of his previous experience lay in data building and programming, the human body was just as alien to him as plumbing. However, he did know someone that could help.

“Sweetie,” he said softly, walking up behind Haruka and massaging her shoulders.

She took in a shaky breath. “He’s not going to make it, is he?” she asked. Yuuichirou’s uncomfortable silence was more then enough answer for her and she drew Netto even closer as she bit back painful tears.

“I…” Yuuichirou sighed. “I have a theory but I need to run it by you to see if it’s possible.”

“Will it save Saito?” she asked softly her voice wavering, threatening to give away her tears.

“Maybe,” he replied. When Haruka nodded her head he ploughed on, rambling out the idea as it formed in his head. “Netto and Saito are twins,” he stated. “They have the same DNA and so I was wondering if it could be technically possible to link them together with a cybernetic link. If it works the way I would want it to, Netto’s immune system could help Saito’s and possibly it could help strengthen his heart so when another attack comes Netto’s healthy heart could help Saito’s weak one through.”

Haruka drew in a small breath and Yuuichirou could tell she was mulling it over. “Or… it could backfire and we could loose both of them,” she said softly.

“Or that,” he realized. “But… if we sit back and do nothing, we’re going to loose him.”

Haruka gazed at her child, surrounded by the plastic jungle of tubes and wires, untouchable by anyone at the moment. “If you’re careful about it, and if you separate the DNA you plan to use just right, it probably will…” she frowned. “It might work,” she said finally.

Yuuichirou let his hands rest on her shoulders. “Will you help me then?” he asked.

“To save Saito or to give up Netto?” she asked with a frown. “I don’t know,” she whispered. “I don’t want to loose any more then I have to.”

“I won’t force you,” Yuuichirou said quietly. “But I don’t know how to extract DNA so I need you to make this work.”

“I’ll think about it,” she said softly as she looked down at Netto and stroked back his soft hair. He stirred fitfully and cuddled deeper into Haruka’s arms. Yuuichirou nodded and left the silent room to see if there were any other plans he could come up with.

“Is it worth it?” she asked herself softly.

Netto opened a sleepy brown eye and gazed up at Haruka. Her face was downcast and he could tell she couldn’t see him. He lifted up a small hand and patted her cheek. When she looked at him, startled, he gave her a toothy grin as if to reassure her. “Saioh-nii-‘an okay?” he asked.

“He’s…” her mouth twisted and she realized that she couldn’t lie to her son, so she merely stayed quiet.

Netto frowned and sat up, gazing at Haruka as concerned as a toddler could be. “Fine?” he asked, as if for reassurance.

Haruka pulled Netto closer to herself and held him tightly, not saying a word.

“NO!” Netto said violently. “NO NO NO! Saioh-nii-‘an fine!”

Haruka’s lips twisted and the tears that threatened earlier came. They poured openly down her cheeks and Netto reached up to feel the wetness that now glistened on her face. “No,” he said softly. He leaned forward and buried his face in her chest. “No, mama, no.”

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Later the next day, Netto was curled up in his own bed and Yuuichirou and Haruka were in Yuuichirou’s study pouring over plans to save their son who was currently in emergency surgery at the hospital.

“Are we doing the right thing?” Haruka asked softly as she listened to the test tubes clink around her.

“Only time will tell,” Yuuichirou answered and pulled his wife close. “But, I want them to live, both of them.”

Haruka nodded and turned, ready to put her four years of Biology study at work for the first and last time.

Yuuichirou worked day and night turning the DNA into data and every consequence that came with it. He knew that Netto and Saito would end up having more side effects then just the desired one if it worked but he also knew that when Haruka agreed to help him that something that Netto had said or done was what made up her mind. He would never let his precious son’s get separated, ever.

When it was done three weeks later, Saito was at home and quietly playing with a subdued Netto. Both he and Haruka knew that they were on borrowed time and sure enough just before Yuuichirou was ready to initiate the file he called ‘Saito.bat’ Saito showed preemptive signs of having another attack.

“Dear!” Haruka gasped.

Yuuichirou nodded grimly and together the couple took the twins to Sci-Labs. As if on a whim, Yuuichirou explained the situation to both twins even though he knew there was no hope at all of them understanding it. Netto looked back at him with concerned eyes and asked, “Then Saioh-nii-‘an be fine?”

“Hopefully,” Yuuichirou replied with a small scared smile.

Netto nodded and for the first time in his short life he was perfectly still. Yuuichirou then understood that even though Netto had no idea what was going on he understood that whatever was going on it was going to save his doomed brother and to do that he was willing to do anything. That alone gave Yuuichirou the strength to tap the keys on his keyboard and initiate the program.

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“Netto, Saito, get up!” Haruka said cheerfully.

Netto groaned and turned over on the top bunk, still tired and sleepy and in no mood to rise. Saito on the other hand jumped out of bed excitedly and climbed into Netto’s bed pouncing on his twin energetically. “Come on Netto-kun, it’s our first day of school! Aren’t you excited?”

“No,” Netto answered darkly.

Haruka smiled and left the room, leaving Saito to rouse his grumpy twin.

Yuuichirou waited down stairs with a pale green and bright purple PET in his hands. “Are they excited?” he asked his wife.

“Saito is,” she answered with a laugh. “Give Netto a few minutes.”

Yuuichirou chuckled. “I’ll bet they can’t wait to get to school. Especially once they have these,” he said glancing at the PET’s.

“Are you sure they’re old enough?” Haruka asked. “I mean they’re only five.”

Yuuichirou nodded. “Of course they are. Besides, you can’t be everywhere at once.”

“Leave it to me!” a loud female voice said proudly. “I’ll watch em’!”

“Gem, calm down. We haven’t even met our Net Op’s yet,” a calmer voice said.

“Oh hush Stone, you’re excited too, I can tell!” she announced.

Haruka chuckled and gazed at the PET’s. “Maybe I was wrong. After all it is their first day of school.”

Yuuichirou gazed up at the closed door where Netto and Saito were getting ready. “Yes, their day,” he said happily. “Both of them.”

Haruka nodded and kissed Yuuichirou lightly on the lips before going into the kitchen to get breakfast.

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No, I will not use the same bad guys to fight them and yes Enzan, Laika, Meiru, Dekao etc. will show up eventually XD Enjoy.
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Midnight · Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 12:37 pm Post subject:

Fantastic!

And you seem to start up another AU fic...using the concept of Saito.bat in a different form. It's still somewhat puzzling to me how one can use a program to link biological organisms, but I suppose it makes sense for the time being. It's probably going to take some time for me to get it down, though...

And Gem and Stone make a return. Somehow I should have expected them. It looks like you've got an ambitious timeline to start weaving together, and here's hoping for all the best in doing so.

There's really no need to prove yourself to anyone, Neko. Just take your time. We all know of your writing prowess.
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**Plantman** · Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:21 pm Post subject:

Well, as we already mentioned in the channel, the emergency call scene needs some corrections, but otherwise the rest of the first chapter seems pretty good.

The cybernetic link and the saito.bat to link biological organisms isn't really that hard to believe in this context, considering the time they're living in and the avaible technology.

In either case, it's shaping up to be an interesting fic. If any, maybe Gem and Stone are a bit too much of a contrast to their future operators. XD
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Neko · Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:35 pm Post subject:

I've already used Gem and Stone though XD I know their personalities and hopefully they'll develop a bit differently.

Actually I'm hoping to have several things used for them but that's still WIP for the fic. Touch and go is a bit iffy in this case but for them, at least I have a basic design and personality to work off of. (Also, I'm lazy and I don't like making up new charachters XD)
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Mugen.exe · Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 6:56 pm Post subject:

Great start to what should be an awesome fic! The scenes in the hospital and the park brought a whole new light to my past visions of Saito and Netto as kids, and Saito's condition. Good work, and I cannot wait to read more!
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Kitty-Chan · Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 7:52 pm Post subject:

Yay! Gem & Stone are back! :D I like them, & I believe that this will be a very interesting tale. I was also wondering if you were going to write a sequel to A Life Best Not Lived showing how Gem & Stone adapted to the real world & vice versa.
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Neko · Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 2:27 pm Post subject:

Saito came down the stairs first, hopping every other step in his five-year-old excitement. He had been looking forward to going to school ever since he found out that it was a place where he would learn more about what Yuuichirou sometimes told them about computers. He was always eager to learn something new. Anything new, as long as it was interesting.

Netto came a little slower, taking the stairs one at a time and yawning as he walked down to the breakfast table. He was a little less excited then his brother and more noticeably subdued from lack of sleep. It wasn’t lack of hours, more like lack of sunlight. He never got up until the sun was at least halfway to its high point, if not later.

Yuuichirou knelt down to greet his sons as they came into the dining room. Netto and Saito took one look at their father and cheered loudly as they ran into his arms. “Papa!” they both cried and hugged their dad tightly.

“Hey there,” Yuuichirou said softly and picked up both of his children, balancing one on each hip. “I told you I’d make it,” he said with a wink.

“We never said you wouldn’t,” Saito pouted as if his integrity was at stake.

“Nope,” Netto agreed. “We knew you would, papa.”

Yuuichirou laughed and hugged his sons, then set them back on the floor. “I know, I know,” he replied. “I’m sorry for doubting you,” he chuckled.

Haruka laughed at the sudden role reversal and came in with the final dish for breakfast. Netto took one look at the plate and latched onto his mother’s leg. “Pancakes!” he cheered.

Haruka expected the attack and took it in a stride, not loosing her balance as she continued towards the table with Netto at her side. “Yes, pancakes,” she said. “Chocolate chip for you and blueberry for Saito.”

“Yay!” the twins cheered and sat down in their seats waiting none to patiently for the yummy breakfast their mother had made for them.

Haruka laughed and placed the pancakes onto their plates and cut them up. She put a little bit of syrup and spirited the liquid sugar away before Netto could protest. Previous experience had taught her to never leave Netto alone with syrup, sugar or honey otherwise it would all mysteriously vanish and Netto would bounce off the walls for the next eight hours. She was feeling kindly toward the teacher who got them in his or her class.

Netto pouted a bit but the chocolate chips proved to be more then enough for his sweet tooth as he downed the whole thing in a matter of minutes.

Saito was a bit slower, but not by much. Seconds after Netto jumped out of his chair with a quick ‘thanks for the meal’ he too was done and ready to run after Netto. Yuuichirou stepped in front of them and stopped them from racing out the door towards their new school.

“Before you go, I have something for you,” he said with a small grin.

“Ooooooh!” Netto said excitedly. “A present?”

“Really?” Saito asked at the same time Netto expressed his awe. “Something for us?”

Yuuichirou nodded, “Yes, something for you. Each of you,” he winked. “It’s a very special gift I’ve been waiting to give you.”

Netto and Saito shivered in anticipation and moved closer together so as to cling to one another in joy. Yuuichirou bit back laughter and pulled out a dark purple and a pale green PET with a flip out keyboard. Netto and Saito gasped at the same time in shock and stared at the devices. “Netto, Saito, please meet Gem and Stone.”

“Pleased to meet you,” Gem and Stone said together in polite voices, facing their operators for the very first time.

Saito broke into a grin as Netto jumped onto him in excitement. “PET’s!” Netto yelled. “Navis!”

“Yes, I’ve decided it’s about time you got someone to help you. I programmed them myself and they are to help you with school and your lifestyle not,” he emphasized, “netbattling. Not yet at least. You two are still too young, Netto,” he said sternly.

Netto was still clinging onto his twin in sheer excitement. “Okayokay!” he said quickly. “Ohmigosh Saito-nii-chan!”

Saito giggled, “I think you broke Netto-kun.”

Yuuichirou and Gem laughed out loud while Stone cracked a smile. Netto frowned but didn’t let go of his twin. “Meanie,” he muttered.

Saito adopted an angelic look and took the pale green PET. “Stone, hmm?” he asked.

“Yes,” Stone replied. “Pleased to meet you, Saito-san.”

Saito made a face, “Call me Saito,” he urged.

“Saito-kun,” Stone tried.

Saito shrugged and watched as Netto took the dark purple PET. “Hey! My name’s Netto. What’s yours again?”

Gem laughed, “Forgot already?” she asked.

Netto pouted, “I’m excited.”

Gem held up her hands and lowered them. “I understand,” she said with a wink. “I am pretty cool.”

Netto laughed and Gem felt a surge of pride at making the child happy. “My name is Gem,” she told Netto.

“Gem,” Netto nodded. “Good name,” he told her.

“Why thank you,” she said, giving a little bow. “Your father named me. I think he chose well too.”

“What do you tell your father?” Haruka urged.

“Thank you!” Netto and Saito pounced on their dad, hugging him tightly.

Yuuichirou wrapped his arms around both of his children and smiled. “You’re very welcome,” he replied. “Now, I believe you two have school to get to.”

Saito’s eyes lit up. “Yeah! School!”

“Joy,” Netto laughed at his brother’s excitement but in spite of himself he couldn’t help but feel a little excited himself.

“Let’s get you two ready,” Haruka nodded at the coats and backpacks hanging by the door. “Then we’ll go.”

Netto and Saito opened the door to the classroom slowly. “Scared?” Netto asked.

“No,” Saito shot back. “You?”

“No,” Netto said slowly. He scooted over and clung to Saito’s arm. “I kinda wish mama were here though.”

“Me too,” Saito admitted.

“Awww, you got us,” Gem said kindly. “Let’s go in and see everyone else.”

“Yeah,” Netto and Saito said together and entered the room.

“Hey!” a cute, pink haired girl waved to them from beside a larger brown haired boy. Netto and Saito both grinned and put their things in their cubby holes before going over to greet their friends.

“Hey Meiru-chan, hey Dekao-kun,” Saito said politely.

“Lookit what we got,” Netto said proudly, showing off his PET.

Meiru and Dekao’s eyes grew wide and open as they gazed at the shiny new technology. “Wow,” they breathed.

Gem waved at them from her perch inside the device and smiled. “Nice to meet you,” she said. “My name is Gem.EXE.”

“Pretty,” Meiru gasped.

“Thank you,” Gem glowed at the compliment.

Saito showed off his too with a little less gusto then Netto. “My navi is Stone,” he said with a meek grin. He was proud of his navi but not as open to showing off as his brother.

“Awesome,” Dekao cheered.

“Isn’t it though?” Netto asked happily. “Papa said they’re to help us and when we get older, Netbattle.”

“Cooooooool,” Dekao breathed. “Wow, I can’t wait till we can do that.”

Netto nodded, “And we’ll be rivals, right! Strong ones!”

Dekao grinned wickedly, “Always,” he said and pounced on his friend in a gentle body tackle.

While Netto protested none too seriously Saito took his seat next to Meiru on the mats and let out a slow breath. “Excited?” Meiru whispered.

Saito nodded enthusiastically. “Yeah, you?”

“Very,” Meiru replied. She and Saito both began to giggle just as the door opened.

“Morning class!” a very bouncy woman with blonde hair greeted. “Are you all ready for your first day of school?”

“Yes!” everyone answered enthusiastically. And so, Netto and Saito’s first day of school and their first day with Gem and Stone began.

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Okay, I just needed to get that out of the way XD now I'mma go forward to when they are 11 to start the other stuff.

Aren't they so cute though?
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Midnight · Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 4:50 pm Post subject:

Indeed they are.

It's nice to see how Netto and Saito are assigned characters that they had in one of your previous fics, and how they seem to fit with both Netto and Saito's personalities.

I have no qualms with you skipping forward six years to when both of them are Netto's age in the canon universe--it probably makes them infinitely more interesting if they are capable operators and are reaching adolescence. I can't help but worry, though, that the link that was forged will come back to bite them, and severely hamper their progress in one way or another.

Other than that, great read.
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Kitty-Chan · Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 4:54 pm Post subject:

They are cute. Yay, Gem & Stone are back! I really like them. ^_^ Mid, of course the link's gonna come back & bite them in the derier(sp?).
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