Rockman.exe Silicon Soul

[BenOniSaito]

I've been informed that it's not perfect; the names are a bit mixed, the world is a bit mixed; heck, even the responses are a bit mixed. The environs are half anime/half game, but I like it that way, and I trust anyone/everyone who reads it to understand who the characters are supposed to be (provided that you know the anime or game, and the character in question isn't one I've created).

- - - Disclaimer - - -
I do not own any of the characters from the Rockman - Megaman empire. I WOULD but there's some kind of embargo that prevents me from accruing what some people consider 'gross amounts' of wealth or power. I also do not own any of the songs that crop up in my stories (atleast not yet, I might get back into song writing, but don't hold your breath), because if I did it would fall under the whole 'gross amounts of power' thing I mentioned earlier. I do, however, own several of the characters who crop up in the stories, and I use of any of them without my permission does invoke all sorts of colorful violent things including but not limited to: squirrels, ferrets, fireworks, waterslides, car batteries, jumper cables, swords, knives, pointy objects, the Spear of Longiscus, Bruce Cambell, and assorted space debris.
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[BenOniSaito]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/1/
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[Midnight]

Hmm...quite interesting.

First off, I'd say for you to put a bit of a disclaimer on the fic before one opens the link--just to be on the safe side, mind you, as the scene in the courtroom may be a bit too graphic for some readers.

That being said, this was a good read. I did notice a few continuity errors here and there, most of them being the switch from the raw to the dub system of naming, but other than that, it seemed to flow rather well. You spare no expense in writing about the scenery, and that enlivened the read immensely.

For me, the courtroom scene stood out the most, not only because it was fairly graphic, but also because the accused seemed to be a lot like other villains that I've seen before on other dramas, the one that comes to my memory at this time being a radical Christian in the old drama Seven Days. He too spoke of divine judgement and retribution for the technology that humans had developed, and rued the day that the world seemed to stray from his vision of a 'perfect' world before unleashing a deadly strain of the Ebola virus in a crowded airport. The name is fitting--quite similar to that of Odo on Deep Space Nine--meaning nothing. His words, though trite, seemed to be drenched with his loathing of the world and his desire to see it toppled to the ground, and you did a marvelous job of conveying that feeling across.

Whew, I'd better stop before I go too far. Anyway, good read.
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[BenOniSaito]

[RT-fact]

I've read a bit of your fiction, and I have to say that your deep knowledge of english is quite better than I could have made out. I don't mind some continuity flaws, since I'm writing stories that has mostly with descriptions on subjects in the story. You made at least a nice work.

[tuxdev]

I don't think DS Forte would be honorable enough to allow Boushi to live, just the fear of being cracked again. In fact, DS Forte is a whole lot more honorable than I'd think he'd be.
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[BenOniSaito]

[tuxdev]

Yeah, I think Forte is like that. But when he turned DS, I don't think he would care about that "honorable battle" stuff anymore.
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All life begins with Nu and ends with Nu... This is the truth! This is my belief! ...At least for now.
The Mystery of Life; Vol. 841, Ch. 26
- Belthasar, Chrono Trigger

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Sol Survivor, best Tower Defense game EVER

[BenOniSaito]

Chapter 9 has just been posted, FYI to all my readers.
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[BenOniSaito]

Encourage others to read and review! In the next few chapters I really start shaking up the universe. I even kill one of my favorite navis.

Who will it be? Tune in to find out!

*maniacal laughter*
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[Plantman]

Please remember you cannot double post if you have nothing to update with. Also, please don't ask for reviews/comments.
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[Plantman]

Please remember you cannot double post if you have nothing to update with. Also, please don't ask for reviews/comments.
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[Sol]

This post is but a figment of your imagination.

(Actually, I posted just as Planty got to it. My bad. XD)
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[Sol]

This post is but a figment of your imagination.

(Actually, I posted just as Planty got to it. My bad. XD)
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<3 Planty~
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[BenOniSaito]

Finally, after having to start over *TWICE* I finally got it posted.
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[BenOniSaito]

Finally finished with the accursed thing. I HATE exposition chapters, it's so friggin hard to maintain the past tense / present tense balance.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/11/
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[BenOniSaito]

After that damned exposition chapter, it's finally nice to be able to get back to the real story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3011857/12/
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[RT-fact]

So far, I've read 3 chapters and find it very interesting. Good work! I like to read it when I'm bored by my computer.

[BenOniSaito]

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3011857&chapter=13/

It's shorter than I usually write them, and I hate doing that, but I'm building to something, and if this wasn't stort then the next scene would seem really weird.

Atleast *I* think so.

-_-;
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[BenOniSaito]

Gha! This build up is taking longer than I thought

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3011857&chapter=14/
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[BenOniSaito]

Finally,after spending most of the week trying to find a song, I'm finished with this chapter. It's the halfway point for the story, and marks a huge shift in the structure of the story's attitude.

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3011857&chapter=15/
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Battle doesn't need a purpose; the battle is its own purpose. You don't ask why a plague spreads or a field burns. Don't ask why I fight.

[RT-fact]

That latest link requires login.

Anyway, I'm catching up to how far you've written. I've also noticed that you keep mixing up some character's name between the japanese and american dub version, like Enzan Blaze ie.