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blazequest
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Netto's hair is brown, so you might want to change that.
The blue stripes could use a bit more shading. They seem to stand out to much.
That and the "Wings" on the helmet seem odd. So you might want to consider redoing them.
It looks nice though. keep it up.
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Hikari
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Aa few things are missing from R Rockman, but you did a good job.
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Blues_EXE128
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It looks odd. Try resizing it and editing the helmet a bit.
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kirbycuzin
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Good, but like blaze said, netto's hair is brown.
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Such criticization! But I appreciate it. LOL. I'll redo it ASAP...
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auron444
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| Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 5:31 pm Post subject: |
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Seriously it STINKS!
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Issac Matthews
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| auron444 wrote: | | Seriously it STINKS! |
If I was you, I wouldn't go around making comments like that unless you had the skill to put your money where your mouth is. The sprite is pretty good actually. It could use some editing on the fins and change the hair color, but it's pretty good. Nice Job. |
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auron444
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| Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 5:40 pm Post subject: |
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I don't like it so don't crticise me! I'm just saying (in my opinion) I think it stinks.
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Elementalman.EXE
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| Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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What your doing is flaming. You could of easly said, I don't really like it for *whatever reason*
Well, it need's some work but it's pretty good
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BladeMan.EXE
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You don't have to get so angry.
Anyways, it looks pretty good. Just fix the shading on the leg stripes, change the color of the hair, and such other already stated criticism and it'll be even better than before. |
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Enzan_Blues_FanGirl
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| Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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Very Nice! I like it alot! A whole lot!
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| auron444 wrote: | | Seriously it STINKS! |
This is from the Rules directly,
| Spriters Lab Rules wrote: |
4. When making a comment or critique about someone's posted work, simple one word posts or singular comments such as "Wow, that is cool" or similar are not considered to be valid posts and can be considered spam. If you wish to send singular praise to someone please do so privately either by PM or using the instant messenger service or email service that the member has listed. Posting such things does nothing to really help the person making the sprite and can lead to them growing frustrated, they want you to tell them what you like about it and what you think they should improve on, that is one of the reasons they post their work.
-4.a. Do not make a post or comment that is a direct attack on someones work or them as an individual. There is such a thing as a critque and as a comment made purposely to hurt the individual. If you are doing this that will fall under the same thing as a personal attack which is against the main rules set for the forum and will be dealt with accordingly.
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Now that being said maybe you feel that since it is April Fools day you can get away with that, or that you have some higher skills that warent posting such a comment. Now don't feel singled out, since others said to put your money where your mouth is, or to be more to the point your money where your fingers are tickling the keys are. But those comments would not have come to past had you simply followed the rules. If you are going to make a post that is to evaluate someones work, then do so posting what you feel needs improvement on. Saying what you did is not only in violation of the rules for this section of the forum, but also of the rules for the forum.
My suggestions for you Auron444, and your Final Fantasy name taking rear, is to go read and re-read all the rules of the forum and tell me why I shouldn't bust you for violation of the rules. |
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Hikari
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Whoa, calm down, and disregard auron444's rudeness. The link doesn't work, BTW, and I anticipate seeing the sprite.
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Tree.EXE
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| I thought the first version was pretty good. I would like to see the second version, if you get a working link up. Also, you should try making a Blues CF v2. |
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liorei
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the new design looks awesome, but the left fin looks bent.
Also, doesnt the cf v2 have crazy little green bulbs near his boots and gloves?
other than that, its looking great! |
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-Netto-
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| Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 6:07 pm Post subject: Well? |
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http://netto-hikari.tripod.com/custom/
Try that? Then click "View Full-Size Image"
I'll work on Blues soon, I guess...
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netto-kun,i cant see the sprite.
what's wrong?
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| Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:03 pm Post subject: Ummm... |
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I don't know... works fine for me...
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